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This week I edited an article Finance. Here I included the diff. I also made changes to the article and here is the diff.

Today, I learned about quantum finance. It is a field where quantum mechanics meets finance! It’s all about applying quantum theory principles to improve financial modeling, risk assessment, and pricing. This approach could lead to smarter, more advanced financial tools, making it an exciting area with huge future potential.Sp7930 (talk) 19:06, 30 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello @FULBERT,

If I'm adding multiple sources to an article, do I need to show the edit history each time? How should I handle that? Sp7930 (talk) 19:32, 30 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Sp7930 In general, for here you only need to show a diff for each article you edit. As each week will require two new (different) articles to be edited, this will likely not happen in this same way again. Also, what happened with the formatting of what you added here? Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 13:39, 31 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your feedback and for clarifying the requirements. I’ve corrected the formatting issues too.

@Sp7930 Please remember to sign your posts in the future. FULBERT (talk) 15:11, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited the article Advanced driver-assistance system. Here is the diff. I learned that editing wiki article can feel rewarding on a personal level, knowing I have contributed to a topic that is accessible to anyone worldwide. Santi2727 (talk) 19:34, 31 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Santi2727 Nice edit. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 15:12, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited the article Occupational safety and health, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Occupational_safety_and_health&wvprov=sticky-header. And here is the difference, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?diff=1254608817&oldid=1252596392&title=Occupational_safety_and_health. And for the contribution to the article: The addition I added enriches the article by addressing how AI-related changes, especially in high-skilled sectors, are not only reshaping tasks but are also affecting occupational mental health. By including the psychological effects and turnover risks associated with job insecurity due to AI, this content broadens the understanding of industry-specific occupational health challenges in today’s technological landscape.

From this week's work, I become more familiar with how to edit an article in Wikipedia, and this experience help me to understand some references more deeply.

MyeonD (talk) 20:52, 31 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

@MyeonD Nice edit. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 15:13, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited the article Greenwashing. Here is the diff. With this edit, I learned more about how companies mislead people about their environmental practices. Mak9991 (talk) 01:50, 1 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Mak9991 Nice edit. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 15:14, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited the article Unemployment. Here is the diff. I learned that the unemployment-to-population ratio provides a broader perspective on joblessness by including the entire population, whereas the unemployment rate focuses solely on those actively seeking employment within the labor force, highlighting the impact of educational enrollment on youth employment metrics.

Qiuyi Yang (talk) 19:40, 1 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Qiuyi Y Nice edit. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 15:16, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited the article Workplace wellness. Here is the diff. I've learned that wellness programs can sometimes shift healthcare costs from employers to employees by tying health insurance rates to participation and success in wellness goals.

DOSTPIDE (talk) 19:57, 1 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@DOSTPIDE Nice edit. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 15:18, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited the article Once Upon a Time in Hollywood. Here is the diff for my initial edit, and I made a second edit as well; the differences between the two can be viewed here diff . Editing the Once Upon a Time in Hollywood article taught me the importance of integrating new insights in a way that complements existing content. I learned to carefully match the tone and thematic structure of the section to ensure the added analysis flowed naturally with other critiques. Nyn218 (talk) 01:04, 2 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Nyn218 Nice edit overall, but make sure in the future to continue using high-quality sources for your edits. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 15:20, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

This week I edited the article Self-driving car. Here is the diff.Through this editing, I learned that most people's understanding of self-driving cars is at a relatively vague stage, and the lack of timely updated information makes people even more confused. Therefore, the latest and reliable information is very necessary. Roger0731 (talk) 20:35, 2 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Roger0731 Nice edit. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 15:21, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited the article Climate change and food security in selected Sub‑Saharan African Countries. JANJAY10 (talk) 22:00, 2 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@JANJAY10 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. The link does not go to an article you edited and you did not include a diff. Complete these and ping me here and I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:23, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

After editing, when I'm publishing the changes, it freezes. JANJAY10 (talk) 01:52, 6 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi, I edited the article Robotaxi. Here is the diff. This article gave me an idea of ​​what robotaxi is and its current progress and future development direction. Currently, robotaxi is still in the testing phase and has encountered many obstacles. BJ2352 (talk) 22:14, 2 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@BJ2352 :Nice edits. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 15:25, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited the article Climate change and food security in Africa. Here is the diff. I learned how to edit an article, add citations and published the findings. JANJAY10 (talk) 22:41, 2 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@JANJAY10 I see you fixed what was incorrect from above. Next time, you can edit what you did to correct it and not add an additional section. Your edits were done in italics, and they should have been done in regular text. Can you: 1. edit your edit and remove the italics, 2. combine your two sentences you added into a single paragraph, and 3. move the citation so it is after the period and not before it?

Please do these three fixes and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:29, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

After editing, when I'm publishing the changes, it freezes JANJAY10 (talk) 01:53, 6 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited https://w.wiki/Bosm, and here is the diff: https://w.wiki/Bosk

In the process, I learned how small additions can enhance the clarity and impact of an article. Incorporating additional insights not only enriches the content but also helps emphasize the practical applications of leadership theories, making the text more relatable and actionable for readers. Nutnutt12 (talk) 23:33, 2 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Nutnutt12 Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:07, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

This week I edited the article: https://w.wiki/AjoG Here is the diff: https://w.wiki/BovF.

Through this process, I learned the importance of properly attributing ideas to enhance the credibility of an article. Adding clarifying sentences also helped improve the overall coherence and depth of the discussion, making the arguments more compelling and easier for readers to understand. Additionally, including missing citations ensured that all statements were supported by credible sources, reinforcing the article's academic integrity. Nutnutt12 (talk) 01:37, 3 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Nutnutt12 Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:07, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

This week I changed my preferences for notifications by adding the email and web option. I was also able to edit the editor section, so I would be able to see both editor tabs. This assignment helped me familiarize myself with my Wikipedia account before starting more complex assignments ahead.

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@Zw2306 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1.  FULBERT (talk) 18:08, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited Human resource management system . Here is the diff. It is hard to get started but feels better to keep working. I hope my contribution are useful to others. Zw2306 (talk) 21:37, 3 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Zw2306 Nice edit. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:10, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

This week I chose the article “Self-cultivation” https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Self-cultivation to edit. I added a citation to the first sentence in the subsection “Theoretical Background” by addition citation and a reference. Here is Diff

This assignment helped me learn more about the topic, since it was a new subject for me. Being able to edit the article gave me a sense of accomplishment and the feeling of having contributed something of value. Zw2306 (talk) 21:43, 3 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Zw2306 Citations alone generally do not add value. Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two within the article itself to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support). This will demonstrate how your addition adds to the overall knowledge in the article. Please add a sentence or two to the article you edited and then ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 18:12, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Professor. I did the revision. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Self-cultivation&diff=prev&oldid=1256019556 98.113.87.69 (talk) 20:52, 7 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited the article Food security. Here is the diff [1]. I learned how to edit article by inserting additional paragraphs to support the subject. JANJAY10 (talk) 00:46, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@JANJAY10 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:14, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

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So this week I edited two articles on the Wikipedia platform.

The first one is 'Job Satisificition.' For the session of 'Influencing factors', I add a topic about 'The Influence of Remote Work and Digital Transformation on Job Satisfaction'. This could have enriched the article by providing information about yet another factor influencing job satisfaction as companies move to a phase of digital transformation after the epidemic. Here is the article, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Job_satisfaction&wvprov=sticky-header. And here is the difference, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Job_satisfaction&diff=prev&oldid=1255600837.

The second one is 'Educational technology'. I added a new paragraph to the "Benefits" section, introducing the advantages of generative AI tools like ChatGPT in education. This addition highlights AI’s role in supporting personalized learning, motivating students, and aiding in complex tasks, thereby expanding the article's coverage of educational technology's benefits. Here is the article, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Educational_technology&wvprov=sticky-header. And here is the difference, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Educational_technology&diff=prev&oldid=1255606625.

With practicing using Wikipedia, the process taught me to adhere to neutral language and reliable sourcing, ensuring that contributions meet Wikipedia's standards. I also developed a deeper understanding of how to structure information to make it accessible to a broad audience. Overall, this practice enhanced my ability to contribute to collaborative knowledge-sharing platforms and strengthened my critical thinking and writing skills.

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@MyeonD:, Why is it that the message you wrote above to your instructor, as well as the contents you're adding to articles are coming back as 100% AI in GPTZero? It returns "We are highly confident this text was ai generated 100%Probability AI generated" Please do not add undisclosed AI contents into articles, including one I just got done cleaning out AI trash out of a few days ago. Graywalls (talk) 20:24, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

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I edited the article Effects of climate change on agriculture. Here is the diff[2]. I learned that objectivity and strict adherence to credible sources are essential to making sure that everything is understandable and trustworthy for anyone who might read it. JANJAY10 (talk) 04:11, 6 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@JANJAY10 Please do not do any more editing until we speak, per the concerns raised by other editors who pinged you earlier this week. FULBERT (talk) 00:50, 7 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Ok, I will wait for your instructions. Thank you! JANJAY10 (talk) 03:29, 7 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

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The first article I edited is Dubai and here is the diff. The second article I edited is Smart City and here is the diff. Through these edits, I learned how to improve clarity and structure, and ensure that the content aligns with the intended message. Mak9991 (talk) 02:25, 7 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

The first article that I edited is Motorcycle helmet, here is the diff. The second article I edited is Self-driving car, here is the diff.This week, I learned that it's essential to periodically update the article to keep it current with new technology and terminology, ensuring it remains relevant. In the article I edited, the original text only included technologies from a decade ago, without mentioning any recent innovations. Santi2727 (talk) 22:25, 7 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

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I edited the article Gender roles in agriculture. Here is the diff[3]. I learned how to edit the article, insert a citation. JANJAY10 (talk) 04:13, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

The first article I edited is Social anxiety disorder. This article is talking about social anxiety disorder is a condition characterized by intense fear of social situations, influenced by both genetic and environmental factors. Treatment typically includes therapy, medication, or a combination of approaches to help individuals manage symptoms and improve their quality of life. I learned that social anxiety disorder is influenced by both genetics and environmental factors, with family history and observed behaviors playing significant roles. This insight emphasizes the need for a holistic approach to treatment that addresses both inherited tendencies and learned behaviors. And here is the diff.

The second article I edited is Test anxiety. This article is talking about Test anxiety is a condition where students experience stress and worry that can negatively impact their test performance. Key causes include fear of failure, parental pressure, and prior negative experiences with testing. Strategies such as cognitive-behavioral techniques and modifying the testing environment can help students manage and reduce anxiety. I learned that test anxiety stems from both internal fears and external pressures, affecting students physically and mentally. Managing it through cognitive-behavioral techniques and supportive testing environments can help improve student performance and reduce stress. And here is the diff.

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The first article I edited is Delivery Drone, this article mainly describes the main application directions of delivery drones in the world, such as transporting medical supplies, express delivery industry, military, etc. As well as the various technologies it currently contains, including which companies are mainly using delivery drones. Here is the diff.In this edit, I learned about the scale of today's delivery drones and how its high efficiency can bring great convenience and cost savings to companies and people. I also added the latest technological developments to the article.

The second article I edited is Vehicular automation, this article mainly describes the definition of vehicle automation, including the six levels of autonomous driving from 0 to 5, as well as the current technology and risks and social regulatory challenges of autonomous vehicles. Here is the diff.In this process, I learned that for articles that lack sufficient information, we need to proactively supplement them to help improve our cognition.

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Summary of the Article Citation Added: The citation from The Economist (2014) supports details about The Tale of the Princess Kaguya’s unique visual style, describing how the film uses a storybook-like watercolor palette and expressive, sketchy lines. This artistic approach reflects the film's emotional depth and departs from typical computer-generated animation, emphasizing Studio Ghibli’s commitment to hand-drawn artistry.

Link to the Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Studio_Ghibli&diff=prev&oldid=1256422371.

Reflection on the Learning Process: This editing process taught me the importance of thorough, reliable sourcing on Wikipedia to enhance article accuracy and depth. Adding a citation from The Economist for The Tale of the Princess Kaguya not only validated the content but also introduced readers to the nuanced visual style of the film. I discovered that even small details, like properly formatted citations, can improve the article's credibility and make complex topics more accessible to a wider audience.

Summary of the Article Citation Added:The cited article discusses the integration of AI-based digital assistants in workplaces to handle routine tasks, enhancing productivity by automating administrative duties like scheduling, reminders, and processing orders. It highlights the efficiency benefits these tools bring to workflows while addressing challenges around data privacy, accuracy, and readiness for full organizational adoption.

Link to the Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?diff=1256428806

Reflection on the Learning Process: Through this edit, I learned the importance of balancing AI’s potential benefits with its challenges, especially in professional settings where privacy and accuracy are critical. Understanding how to frame AI advancements in a practical, contextually relevant way also reinforced the value of clear and concise explanations when discussing technology's role in workplaces. Nyn218 (talk) 22:29, 9 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I edited the article Supply chain risk management. Here is the diff. I added one paragraph about the predictive analytics of supply chain risk. Artificial intelligence models can analyze real-time and historical data to identify potential supply chain risks as early as possible. Also, I learn more about the supply chain risk management from that article.

I also edited the article ERP security. Here is the diff. I added one paragraph about the Security measures required for ERP systems. ERP systems require security mechanisms to protect against some security issues, such as data leakage, system vulnerabilities. Also, I learn more about the vulnerabilities in ERP system and causes of ERP system vulnerabilities. Thank you. BJ2352 (talk) 22:43, 9 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

The first article I edited is Occupational injury, here is the diff. The second article I edited is Job satisfaction, here is the diff. I've added research findings to add factual information and value to the articles. DOSTPIDE (talk) 00:23, 10 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

The first article I edited is https://w.wiki/Buam, and here is the differ: https://w.wiki/Buao.

I included a statement that highlights how creativity without execution is only a concept, but innovation results in tangible effects, to further clarify the difference between the two. The argument that innovation entails the implementation of creative ideas was strengthened by the extra sentence, which served to highlight the practical relevance of innovation in comparison to creativity.

The second article I edited is https://w.wiki/Buaz, and here is the differ: https://w.wiki/Bua$.

I included information about the practical and emotional barriers of cultural adjustment, such mental fatigue from juggling many cultural identities, vulnerability, and difficulties with everyday tasks.I also emphasized the psychological effects, concentrating on identity uncertainty, loneliness, and possible despair, particularly among overseas students. I also provided a reference to back up the section on the psychological impacts of cultural adjustment.

Through this process, I discovered how crucial it is to properly cite sources for statements made in order to bolster the argument and provide a clear link to reliable sources. I was able to improve the content's academic integrity and provide a deeper comprehension of the subjects covered by using citations. Nutnutt12 (talk) 04:47, 10 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

For this week, I choose to add citations to two articles. The first article I chose to edit is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marketing_strategy The article has multiple issues and I chose to make one edit in the “Marketing management versus marketing strategy” section. This section is highlighted as having excessive quotes so I rewrote the first paragraph into two, to remove the quotes/plagiarism. I also added two citations. Here is the Diff

The second article that I chose to edit is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Organizational_culture. One of the problem the article has is that requires additional citations for verification. So, I choose to add two more citations. Here is the diff

This assignment helped improve my editing skills, especially adding citations and references. Zw2306 (talk) 01:41, 11 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

For this week, add citations to two articles. The first article I chose to edit is Cyberattack and here is the diff.

Summary of the citation is that i added the Vulnerability Model (VM) which focuses on recognizing attack patterns, potential threats, and assets of value, both physical and intangible. Through this article I learnt that Computer systems' increasing complexity makes them more efficient but also more vulnerable, as software bugs (vulnerabilities) can be exploited, highlighting the importance of proactive security measures.

The second article I chose to edit is Computer security - Wikipedia and here is the diff. Summary of the citation i added is that a target information in a side channel is difficult to detect because its signal is weak and easily masked by other signals. Through this article i learnt more about Computer security and about side channel attacks. What’s interesting about side-channel attacks is how they don't rely on breaking traditional security measures like encryption. Sp7930 (talk) 05:05, 11 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

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I added citations to two articles. The first article I edited is Crisis management - Wikipedia and here is the diff where I provided a citation defining what constitutes a crisis and how an organizational crisis is defined within the context of crisis management. Through this article, I learned about the different types of crises.

The second article I edited is Data degradation - Wikipedia and here is the diff. where I added a citation explaining the concept of data degradation. This was a new concept for me, and through the article, I learned that data deterioration can result from various factors affecting the reliability and integrity of digital information, such as physical issues, software faults, security breaches, human errors, outdated technology, and unauthorized access events. Sp7930 (talk) 05:56, 11 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

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I edited the articles Information and communications technology in agriculture and Poverty reduction. Here are their diff[4] and [5]. I Learned how to edit two articles and provide feedbacks. I see improvement in my editing and following the rules of wikipedia. JANJAY10 (talk) 23:55, 11 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

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