Talk:Shin Megami Tensei V/GA1

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Nominator: ProtoDrake (talk · contribs) 11:56, 29 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Shooterwalker (talk · contribs) 22:15, 3 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one on. Look for further comments in the coming week. Shooterwalker (talk) 22:15, 3 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shooterwalker: Any update on the review? --ProtoDrake (talk) 11:29, 19 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm sorry to this open for so long. My work has been pretty hectic lately. I think it's safest for me to withdraw my effort to review, to make room for someone who has more bandwidth. Shooterwalker (talk) 02:02, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Whadup - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 04:59, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

1. Is there any info on the engine used for Vengeance? (not a biggy if can't cite that tbh)

I looked, and there isn't anything beyond forum posts and comments. So, no not really. --ProtoDrake (talk) 08:45, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Gameplay

1. Be sure to be consistent in player vs. players
2. I would mention that Macca and experience are also earned through combat (It is right? It's been a minute since I played)

Reception

1. I would recommend tweaking the reception some to address any redundant wording. It's not bad by any means, but I feel it could be made to flow a little better, and I noticed at times the same word is used in two consecutive sentences (such as praised).

   @ProtoDrake: - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 19:46, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

   @Cukie Gherkin: Did my best to eliminate redundancies, and did some tweaking for flow. Reception is always my weakest point when creating articles. --ProtoDrake (talk) 20:11, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

   Same here. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 20:17, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cukie Gherkin: I've done my best to address the two above concerns. Waiting on further feedback, from whoever can manage it (wondering, is this article cursed?) --ProtoDrake (talk) 08:50, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Whoopsie, I got a lil distracted. I just read through Setting and characters and found nothing wrong. In Development, I would recommend putting the art director first, and then have all the content about Doi all in a row. Also, in the Music section, you can probably drop clarifying that the music is for SMTV (unless I'm missing something). - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 09:01, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cukie Gherkin: Done. --ProtoDrake (talk) 09:05, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]