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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 20:18, 8 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I claim this one. After I finish USS Takanis Bay and German torpedo boat T35 I will do this one. Probably within a couple of days I will start this one. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 20:18, 8 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • Born in Malvern Wells, Worcestershire, England Link Worcestershire.
  • and a school teacher, Sarah Ann Garner No née?
  • a relationship with Dobson and the two married Dobson who?
  • careers as artists, settling in Sydney Unlink Sydney.
  • Dobson, who had trained for a time at the Royal Academy in London Unlink London.
  • with the Art Society of New South Wales Link New South Wales.
  • remarried in 1905, to Florence Mitchell No néé?
  • time of the outbreak of the First World War Link WWI.
  • he joined up with the main body of the NZEF in Egypt Pipe Egypt to the Sultanate of Egypt.
  • upon on the plateau where Lieutenant Colonel Arthur Plugge established Lieutenant Colonel needs a hyphen.
  • Section, which was attached to Lieutenant General William Birdwood's Same as above with Lieutenant General.
  • at Gallipoli, as well as Major General Alexander Godley Same as above with Major General.
  • the five-metre high statue, mounted No English units?
  • donated by the Turkish government and sourced --> "donated by the Turkish Government and sourced".
  • No edit wars.

Infobox

  • Looks good to me.

Sources

  • The "Bronze statue honours war artist" says it was published on 27 March 2015 instead of 28th.
  • The rest looks good to me.
  • No ORs.
  • The sources are reliable of high quality.

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