Carolyn Jewel
Author of A Darker Crimson
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His Wicked Witch 1 copy
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The Mammoth Book of Regency Romance [Anthology 23-in-1] (2010) — Contributor — 101 copies, 7 reviews
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Well except for Mountjoy (and it just occurred to me I don't think we ever learned his first name? Unless Mountjoy was it? Except I think that's his title...).
Though that same sexual awareness is what constantly jolted me out of the story. A healthy banter would erupt between Mountjoy and Lily, full of double entendres to be sure, but witty and amusing all the same. They knew how to verbally spar that's for sure. Except it would suddenly take a turn for the explicit! I don't think I've ever seen the f-bomb used quite so many times on the same page as when Mountjoy is internally debating how to convince Lily to stay. This is nothing to say of her particulars talents behind closed doors (talents I have to wonder at considering her inexperience).
This isn't to say I didn't like Lily. It was refreshing to have a heroine who was so self-assured, who didn't hide her intelligence, who cared so obviously for those she felt loyalty towards. I genuinely enjoyed her character, but I was not fond of explicitness Jewel used to convey the many times Lily found herself being intimate with Mountjoy. They are allowed their passions, but it felt cheap at times.
There is also the matter that the characters themselves felt a bit shallow. Oh we heard plenty about Lily's history, as well as Mountjoy's and Ginny's (even some of Fenrir's), but it never felt connected to the characters themselves. This is to say, how is it Lily managed to be the way she is despite her cold upbringing? Its mentioned several times Lily does not often leave her house, but with an annual income of 80,000 pounds (plus three large, well invested estates) how has she not been flooded with suitors?
Ginny mentions offhandedly some men who have fallen for her, and I think Lily mentioned fending off men who only wanted her money, but I'd have to think a woman of such fortune would be far more dogged then she acted.
As I said, I rejoiced at a refreshingly intelligent and confident woman in romance...I just wish that didn't also mean the rest of the novel had to be shallow.… (more)