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Belladonna (Belladonna, #1)
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Published Aug 30, 2022
I have never seen a book so epically blow a 3-1 lead like Belladonna did. (look, a sports reference) That opening scene was killer, and even the story set-up afterwards was intriguing. I was enthusiastically exchanging theories with my reading buddy up until around a third of the way through, but either the pacing shifted or finally caught up with me, because I had to all but drag myself through the back half of this book.
The absolute biggest miss for me were the scenes where Signa was learning about and trying to navigate “society”. God were they boring; I could not bring myself to care about a single moment devoted to that weak-ass plot line. I’m not sure if it’s the Bridgerton effect, but there’s absolutely no need to shoehorn a young woman’s ~societal debut~ into a story about vengeful ghosts and murder conspiracies. How did Adalyn Grace expect anyone to give two shits about the implications of refusing an invitation to tea when we *just found out* that (view spoiler) . Belladonna has a focus problem—where the things that felt the most pressing, like issues of life and death, had to take a backseat to the frivolous and tedious aspects of aristocratic posturing.
I also couldn’t fully conceptualize ‘Death’ based on the description provided by Grace. Is he a ghost? How are they (view spoiler) if his face is literally obscured the entire time? Logistically, I have many questions, but his character never felt fully real to me either. There was a bit of Luc from Addie LaRue in his demeanor and presentation, though that character had motivations, his powers and reach were clearly defined, etc. But with Death, I still don’t understand what ‘he’…..is.
The actual ghosts were the best part and more interesting than most of the characters, despite rarely getting to speak, and I wish we didn’t keep getting dragged from them back to the boring humans. There’s certain tropes that I would expect in a gothic novel, and foreshadowing in general is frequently utilized, but there was not one twist that you couldn’t spot a mile away, which erased all of the uncertainty, all of the tension. I kept hoping my assumptions were wrong because of how unremarkable they’d make the story, but I was, sadly, correct. What a bummer.
And do not get me started on that attempt at a cliffhanger/twist in the epilogue. I am not falling for that again!!!! I have already seen Signa try to solve a murder mystery once and was NOT impressed.
I usually do more of a set-up for what a book is about, but I was too annoyed by how this one played out to attempt it here. Basically all you need to know is that this book was heavy on vibes, missing plot in the middle and probably best enjoyed not thinking too hard about anything presented.
*Thanks so much to Little, Brown For Young Readers for an advance review copy!
**For more book talk & reviews, follow me on Instagram at @elle_mentbooks!
Published Aug 30, 2022
I have never seen a book so epically blow a 3-1 lead like Belladonna did. (look, a sports reference) That opening scene was killer, and even the story set-up afterwards was intriguing. I was enthusiastically exchanging theories with my reading buddy up until around a third of the way through, but either the pacing shifted or finally caught up with me, because I had to all but drag myself through the back half of this book.
The absolute biggest miss for me were the scenes where Signa was learning about and trying to navigate “society”. God were they boring; I could not bring myself to care about a single moment devoted to that weak-ass plot line. I’m not sure if it’s the Bridgerton effect, but there’s absolutely no need to shoehorn a young woman’s ~societal debut~ into a story about vengeful ghosts and murder conspiracies. How did Adalyn Grace expect anyone to give two shits about the implications of refusing an invitation to tea when we *just found out* that (view spoiler) . Belladonna has a focus problem—where the things that felt the most pressing, like issues of life and death, had to take a backseat to the frivolous and tedious aspects of aristocratic posturing.
I also couldn’t fully conceptualize ‘Death’ based on the description provided by Grace. Is he a ghost? How are they (view spoiler) if his face is literally obscured the entire time? Logistically, I have many questions, but his character never felt fully real to me either. There was a bit of Luc from Addie LaRue in his demeanor and presentation, though that character had motivations, his powers and reach were clearly defined, etc. But with Death, I still don’t understand what ‘he’…..is.
The actual ghosts were the best part and more interesting than most of the characters, despite rarely getting to speak, and I wish we didn’t keep getting dragged from them back to the boring humans. There’s certain tropes that I would expect in a gothic novel, and foreshadowing in general is frequently utilized, but there was not one twist that you couldn’t spot a mile away, which erased all of the uncertainty, all of the tension. I kept hoping my assumptions were wrong because of how unremarkable they’d make the story, but I was, sadly, correct. What a bummer.
And do not get me started on that attempt at a cliffhanger/twist in the epilogue. I am not falling for that again!!!! I have already seen Signa try to solve a murder mystery once and was NOT impressed.
I usually do more of a set-up for what a book is about, but I was too annoyed by how this one played out to attempt it here. Basically all you need to know is that this book was heavy on vibes, missing plot in the middle and probably best enjoyed not thinking too hard about anything presented.
*Thanks so much to Little, Brown For Young Readers for an advance review copy!
**For more book talk & reviews, follow me on Instagram at @elle_mentbooks!
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August 1, 2021
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"wait I’m loving this so far! unintentional buddy read with Chelsea too"
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The cover does not give off the vibes the actual book does for sure. This was 🔥
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Laura wrote: "The cover does not give off the vibes the actual book does for sure. This was 🔥"
Laura 👀 I am listening 👀
Laura 👀 I am listening 👀
It sounds like a mess, great review Elle but it’s not one I’ll be looking for, despite the gorgeous cover!
Signa did not so much "solve a mystery" as every single twist smacked her in the face. Also...that one scene with Death. I was like...babes what is THIS? Who..What...What am I looking at?
I felt the same way about many of the aspects, and I wrote about not being able to conceptualize Death as well, so I’m glad I wasn’t the only one who had this issue!
AGREE! I feel like I only ever saw this book hyped up, making me ecstatic to read it. What a let down.
The book started off strong with a fascinating opening scene, and then.... I was waiting the whole book for something to happen besides Signa being concerned with tea dates and how to fit into society. Not the gothic poison mystery I was hoping for.
As for the attempted love triangle, make that make sense. (Possible spoiler ahead) As a woman I need to understand WHY another woman would spend her entire childhood hating and fearing an entity... and within the span of a fee days, while still not completely trusting him, decide to sleep with him. Especially when she was so darn concerned about being a proper lady. And this dude didn't earn it. He was one-dimensional.
This book fell flat with little to no sense in choices the MC made. And overall the plot twist and ending were dull.
The book started off strong with a fascinating opening scene, and then.... I was waiting the whole book for something to happen besides Signa being concerned with tea dates and how to fit into society. Not the gothic poison mystery I was hoping for.
As for the attempted love triangle, make that make sense. (Possible spoiler ahead) As a woman I need to understand WHY another woman would spend her entire childhood hating and fearing an entity... and within the span of a fee days, while still not completely trusting him, decide to sleep with him. Especially when she was so darn concerned about being a proper lady. And this dude didn't earn it. He was one-dimensional.
This book fell flat with little to no sense in choices the MC made. And overall the plot twist and ending were dull.
This book squandered so much potential for me. The characters were so flat and uninteresting and all my dreams of The Secret Garden Goes Gothic were slowly ruined the further I went.
I would have to agree with you wholeheartedly. I saw this after leaving my own review, and you explained my thoughts perfectly. There’s great potential here, but it was a miss for me.
I am a little perplexed that there was no more mention of the opening scene of mass murder. Like, does no one wonder who killed an entire household and party and why?
Agreed with everything. I almost couldn't conceptualize anything in the book because the descriptions were either misplaced, poorly written, or just plain bare. It bothered me that death was always in shadows and (spoiler alert!) he stays like that in foxglove too. Unfortunately I got suckered in to the second book because I had high hopes, never again with Adalyn Grace.
Spot on review! Just finished it too and agree with what you’re pointing out: the “society” scenes were disproportionately long, I felt like those chapters were like the “stalling episode” in a series… any opinions on the actual mystery/murder plot? It was set up so good but the finale left me so disappointed and confused. Like how do you get accidentally poisoned for weeks?? And why poisoning Blythe?? If someone understood please help me 🤣