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The One by Kiera Cass
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did not like it
bookshelves: 1-star

~ 1 star ~

This book was pure trash. It's just. . . NO. I don't know who thought some of the stuff in this book was a good idea. It's arguably just as bad as The Elite, maybe even worse depending on what angle you look at it from. I was going to read the novellas for the sake of it and maybe even the two other books following their demon spawn child, but I'm done with this series. It was an experience, and I don't regret it, but I have so many books I want to read, and I would rather spend it on books I think are good.

This book did that one thing where it just kills everyone for no reason in the finale, which I hated. It didn't properly talk about or address the fact that the King pysically abuses and harms Maxon just as I predicted. It was just used as a plot device, which is not great.

America was annoying as ever, same with Aspen. The drama was pitiful and tiering. The writing and dialogue was cheesy and cringey. The plot and world-building is yet again not satisfying, and close to non-existent.

The way it dealt with the rebels was unsatisfactory and abrupt, and way too easy. Maybe this books should have just stuck to the romance and "The Bachelor" aspect of this instead of trying to do something it couldn't achieve.

I was promised character development for Celeste, but that is not what development entails. It was so lame, she's still shallow and her motives do not make her any more lovable or better. It just confirms what America has been complaining about the past 2 books.

The love triangle will be the death of me, but I guess I have that in common with the all the characters that simply died for no reason. This book basically says that cheating on your significant other is fine, because love can overcome even that. And then the book ended, everyone is happy, Maxon and America are married, yay, end of story. Thanks for the torture.

I want to pay homage to the best part of this experience, which is all the nicknames for Aspen:

Aspirin
Aspen tree
Asparagus
Asteroid
Astrology
Astronomy
Asphalt(Credit)
Ashtray(Credit)
Ashcan(Credit)
Asthma(Credit)
Asphyxia(Credit)
Appendix(Credit)
Aspen Dental(Credit)
Asphodel(Credit)
Aspertame(Credit)
Asshat(Credit)


Honestly, I'm just done with these wannabe-dystopian books. I've even made a shelf dedicated to just that. This series wasn't my taste, and I think it just made me dumber than I already am.


Audiobook Review:

I chose this mindlessly because I needed an audiobook for the ride to the beach. It wasn't my favorite. Everything was said seductively and with a bit of a sigh, plus it made the cheesy writing shine. Turns out having it read to me, gives me more second hand embarrassment than reading with my eyes. But otherwise I think it is okay. Not much to say here.
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Reading Progress

December 24, 2020 – Started Reading
December 24, 2020 – Shelved
December 24, 2020 –
41.0% "thoughts so far:
• needed an audiobook for the ride to the beach. Chose this mindlessly.I regret it because having it read to me worsens the cheesy and cringey writing/dialogue
• America needs to just shut up.She's so annoying.
• so this is Celeste's character development?Kinda lame but okay
• about time the love triangle was resolved.I bid you farewell Aspirin
• rolling my eyes so much rn
•better but not good"
December 25, 2020 –
42.0% "Wait...hold up...
I thought it was Lucy and Astronomy
Not Anne and him??
So confused rn"
December 25, 2020 – Finished Reading
April 19, 2021 – Shelved as: 1-star

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Sasha yesss i love the nicknames


Layla Sakshi wrote: "yesss i love the nicknames"

Litterly the only thing that kept me sane was the nicknames 😂


Joshita ❤ you read it???! WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT ENDING RIGHT!


Layla Joshita ❤ wrote: "you read it???! WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT ENDING RIGHT!"

I KNOW RIGHT?! THOSE WERE LITTERLY THE EXACT WORDS CIRCLING MY HEAD THE ENTIRE TIME! Just..."wtf". That sums up my experience with this book.
Like the whole killing off everyone for the sake of it and for no real reason was a trash move. And so was the way it resolved all the conflicts 🙄


message 5: by abi (new)

abi Omg the nicknames for Aspen are amazing 💀✋


Joshita ❤ Layla wrote: "Joshita ❤ wrote: "you read it???! WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT ENDING RIGHT!"

I KNOW RIGHT?! THOSE WERE LITTERLY THE EXACT WORDS CIRCLING MY HEAD THE ENTIRE TIME! Just..."wtf". That sums up my experienc..."


Exactly!!!!!!! I was like...wasnt it a dystopian romance why are people being MURDERED!!!!


Layla ᴀʙɪ☽ wrote: "Omg the nicknames for Aspen are amazing 💀✋"

Thank youuu! I'm glad you like them :)


Layla Joshita ❤ wrote: "Layla wrote: "Joshita ❤ wrote: "you read it???! WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT ENDING RIGHT!"

I KNOW RIGHT?! THOSE WERE LITTERLY THE EXACT WORDS CIRCLING MY HEAD THE ENTIRE TIME! Just..."wtf". That sums u..."


It's was just a shit show. The deaths were meaningless, underhwlemig, and pointless. It was only for the sake of being "tragic". You're totally right, they should have just stuck to the romance as that seemed to be the only important thing all 3 books instead of trying to do, whatever it is this feat was meant to accomplish.


Layla Mjspice wrote: "Ashtray should be one."

OMG yessss! 😂 I'll add that in now.


human ashcan, asthma, asphyxia, and assumer are my offerings <3


message 11: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla human wrote: "ashcan, asthma, asphyxia, and assumer are my offerings <3"

Yes! Thank youuu! <3
I'll add them in now


human Layla wrote: "human wrote: "ashcan, asthma, asphyxia, and assumer are my offerings

Yes! Thank youuu! <3
I'll add them in now"


😂😂


message 13: by Ashi (new) - rated it 4 stars

Ashi Ooh what about appendix?


message 14: by Ashi (new) - rated it 4 stars

Ashi Also Eadlyn is definitely a demon spawn child -- she was soo horrible


message 15: by Layla (last edited Dec 27, 2020 05:29PM) (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Ashi wrote: "Also Eadlyn is definitely a demon spawn child -- she was soo horrible"

Ohh good to know. I guess I made a good decision to not continue then, though I'm not surprised to hear that considering she's America's daughter lmao.

Ashi wrote: "Ooh what about appendix?"

Omg thank you! That is perfect 😂


human i love how shatter me and the selection are the only books in 'wannabe-dystopian'


Rafia I thought the books were pretty great.......... :'(


message 18: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla human wrote: "i love how shatter me and the selection are the only books in 'wannabe-dystopian'"

Hahaha, reading both series back to back prompted me to make a new shelf. It's what they deserve. 😂


message 19: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Rafia wrote: "I thought the books were pretty great.......... :'("

I suppose that is why they say all books are subjective. I'm glad to hear your experiences with this series were great though! :)


message 20: by Ashi (new) - rated it 4 stars

Ashi Layla wrote: "Ashi wrote: "Also Eadlyn is definitely a demon spawn child -- she was soo horrible"

Ohh good to know. I guess I made a good decision to not continue then, though I'm not surprised to hear that con..."


Yes very good decision! I didn't want to, but I hate leaving a series unfinished, so I had to :(
And Eadlyn makes America seem tolerable(and I hate America)


message 21: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Ashi wrote: "Layla wrote: "Ashi wrote: "Also Eadlyn is definitely a demon spawn child -- she was soo horrible"

Ohh good to know. I guess I made a good decision to not continue then, though I'm not surprised to..."


I hate leaving series unfinished, but technically I'm done? Like America and Maxon's stroy is over, and their child's story is kind of like a spin off series. The series just divides in two which made me feel satisfied stopping here. Same thing happened with the Shatter Me series and reading that.

And goodness, how is that possible for her to be that much worse? That's concerning....


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the bard im crying at the nicknames 😂😂 fantastic review. allow me to make my contributions:

aspen dental
aspergers
asphodel
aspertame
ash field
ass hat

:)


message 23: by Layla (last edited Dec 27, 2020 07:17PM) (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Kennedy wrote: "im crying at the nicknames 😂😂 fantastic review. allow me to make my contributions:

aspen dental
aspergers
asphodel
aspertame
ash field
ass hat

:)"


Thanks hahaha.

And I had to look up some of those words, but they're hilarious. And thank you for your contribution! :)))


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the bard np, i will take any chance to be salty that i get 😂


message 25: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Kennedy wrote: "np, i will take any chance to be salty that i get 😂"

Lmao, I felt that on a personal level 😂


Lauren Very valid opinion I'm terrified of trying to go back and reread this to rate it appropriately for a non-preteen me


Rachel that ending was pretty cringy!😂


message 28: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Lauren wrote: "Very valid opinion I'm terrified of trying to go back and reread this to rate it appropriately for a non-preteen me"

I definitely get what you mean by that lol. My opinions and preferences have changed drastically over the years, that some books are better left in the past .


message 29: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Rachel wrote: "that ending was pretty cringy!😂"

Hahaha, most definitely, though if you ask me, the entire book is just one big cringe-fest 😂


Vathna Awesome review! I read this series purely to entertain myself and tried not to pull my own hair out in the process 😂😂


message 31: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Vathna wrote: "Awesome review! I read this series purely to entertain myself and tried not to pull my own hair out in the process 😂😂"

Thank you! And it definitely has that effect on you, so completely agree, I thought at the very least it could be a fun read because of the drama, but nope 😂


message 32: by Lilah (new)

Lilah LMAO you're so brutally honest, I love it


message 33: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Lilah ✍ wrote: "LMAO you're so brutally honest, I love it"

Hahaha thank you! 😂


Rory Gilmore I’m with Rafia I really enjoyed the series. Yes they were really stupid and predictable at times yes America is really annoying most of the time. But they were really good overall. I also think Celeste did have quite a bit of development in the last book between becoming friends with America and being happy for her when she won instead of her old self where she would have thrown a fit and been a spoiled brat.


message 35: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Blake Malfoy wrote: "I’m with Rafia I really enjoyed the series. Yes they were really stupid and predictable at times yes America is really annoying most of the time. But they were really good overall. I also think Cel..."

I'm glad you like this book! Again books are subjective, and this was not for me. And regarding Celeste's development, I don't even consider it development. It felt too abrupt and kind of pitiful imo. Especially since it all happened in this one book, and all that really happened was her admitting that she was in the Selection for the wrong reasons. Just because she admitted to what we all know, doesn't make it any better. And her acception of America came from her acception that no matter what she does, she will never get the crown because she can't seduce Maxon into proposing. She can't throw a fit over a lost cause, so it was better for her to just make amends once she realized that all the horrible things she did nothing to help her in the end. I thought her development would be something cool, like her being the one involved with the rebels, but it was a missed opportunity. But I respect you opinion and see where you are coming from :)


message 36: by abi (new)

abi Adderall was so annoying and I only read half of book 1. I’m talking bout Aspen btw


message 37: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla ᴀʙɪ☽ wrote: "Adderall was so annoying and I only read half of book 1. I’m talking bout Aspen btw"

Lmao yes, yes he is. Honestly he doesn't get any better throughout the series, probably worse in my opinion. Definitely adding that nickname to the list though, I love it 😂


message 38: by abi (new)

abi Lmao thanks for adding my nickname. Based on your reviews, I’m so glad I didn’t push through these books like everyone said I should 😌😂


message 39: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla ᴀʙɪ☽ wrote: "Lmao thanks for adding my nickname. Based on your reviews, I’m so glad I didn’t push through these books like everyone said I should 😌😂"

Yes, that was most definitely a good call on your part 😂


message 40: by Ella (new) - rated it 3 stars

Ella Rose Ouch🤣


message 41: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Ella wrote: "Ouch🤣"

Sorry? 😂


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

Another nickname for Aspen: Asphole


message 43: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Eva wrote: "Another nickname for Aspen: Asphole"

Awesome! Love that 😂


message 44: by s (i'm a minor) (new)

s (i'm a minor) I have a nickname for Aspen!
Esophagus.


message 45: by _+*Midnight*+_ (new)

_+*Midnight*+_ Bautifull


message 46: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Bookworm Sarah wrote: "I have a nickname for Aspen!
Esophagus."


That's wonderful. Welcome to the Aspen Hate Club, Sarah :)


message 47: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Chill- wrote: "Bautifull"

I don't know what you are referring to, but thanks?


message 48: by s (i'm a minor) (new)

s (i'm a minor) Thanks, but I haven't read this series. I guess I'll have to start it to join.


message 49: by Layla (new) - rated it 1 star

Layla Bookworm Sarah wrote: "Thanks, but I haven't read this series. I guess I'll have to start it to join."

Nope! You don't need to have read it to join, and I would never want you to subjugate yourself to that torture just to do so 😂


message 50: by Yeg (new) - rated it 5 stars

Yeg You crashed my literaly not so kind of trashy guilty pleasure read of my teenage time😂😂 but i'm okay with that am i making sense?


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