Hey, first game I tried out on this website. First off, I absolutely loved the atmosphere of the game. I was pretty unsettled with certain descriptions of the character's inner dialogue. The hands of god ending was horrifying with the worms being inside your body, celebrating hysterically.
The pace wasn't too bad either. The game was a bit short, but it had a lot content packed inside for the time spent in-game. The good ending was impactful and reminded me of those horror games that give you an emotional feeling of hope, even if there are horrors beyond comprehension and despair awaiting for the protagonist (like Resident Evil, etc).
Only critique is that I think you should make your future games longer to pace things out a bit better. There was good pacing for the amount of time you had, but it was a lot to digest during my first playthrough.
I think this is a solid game, especially if the person who plays the game is into psychological visual horror. I hope you make more games in the future, would love to test them out and give my opinion.