Talk:Watu Wote

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I edited the opening paragraph to seperate the synopsis from basic information about the film. I also edited the synopsis to remove some repeated words like "buses" and make it match other films with similar "based on" synopses I rewrote the sentence describing a stolen camera to fix grammar issues and to better reflect an encyclopedic tone. I don't know if it should be in the opening paragraph but I did not want to change the structure too much. Gutterprints (talk) 22:09, 1 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]