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A user with 102 edits. Account created on 16 July 2016.
14 November 2020
- 16:5516:55, 14 November 2020 diff hist +1 Hudson River Trading →Political scrutiny and lobbying: Adjusted language about formation of lobbying group Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
28 August 2020
- 22:4522:45, 28 August 2020 diff hist +2 m Mission: Impossible – Fallout →Plot: fixed syntax mistake to make Luther Stickell a link
- 04:1404:14, 28 August 2020 diff hist +9 m Interstellar (film) →Plot: changed numerical at start of sentence to written-out number
23 August 2020
- 13:5813:58, 23 August 2020 diff hist +200 Portal (video game) →Gameplay: added a few details to 'flinging' explanation to clarify it for unfamiliar readers Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
15 August 2020
- 22:3522:35, 15 August 2020 diff hist −2 m Tangled →Plot: better wording
- 22:3522:35, 15 August 2020 diff hist −727 Tangled →Plot: Cleaned up the style and generally condensed the entire plot summary
22 July 2020
- 14:1414:14, 22 July 2020 diff hist −3 m Subnautica Fixed grammar and style in sentence about game's sequel
8 April 2020
- 20:1020:10, 8 April 2020 diff hist +5 m 1917 (2019 film) →Plot: In the last paragraph which mentions both Blake brothers, they should be referred to by their first names to avoid confusion
- 20:0620:06, 8 April 2020 diff hist −1 m 1917 (2019 film) Undid revision 949837841 by Doron.t.rose (talk) Tag: Undo
- 20:0420:04, 8 April 2020 diff hist +1 m 1917 (2019 film) →Plot: fixed confusing syntax about rings and dog tags passing between Blake brothers, while maintaining custom of Tom Blake referred to as "Blake" and Joseph Blake referred to as "Joseph"
18 February 2020
- 13:4313:43, 18 February 2020 diff hist +2 m HID Global →Manufacturing: fixed Chennai, India link to direct to the city, not the nation
12 August 2019
- 18:4018:40, 12 August 2019 diff hist +5 m Christopher Lee changed the order of the list of notable roles to maintain chronological order of the series' releases
22 July 2019
- 18:0218:02, 22 July 2019 diff hist +83 m Mission: Impossible (film series) Opening paragraph only listed two of the five composers from the film series, so I added the rest
16 July 2019
- 13:3013:30, 16 July 2019 diff hist +4 m Ben-Tuvia's goby added link to Adam Ben-Tuvia
- 13:2813:28, 16 July 2019 diff hist +4 m Heinz Steinitz →Building-up and management of a fish collection: added link to Adam Ben-Tuvia
10 April 2019
- 18:0018:00, 10 April 2019 diff hist −8 m Battle of the Pelennor Fields Fluency fix
- 18:0018:00, 10 April 2019 diff hist +19 m Battle of the Pelennor Fields Touching up wording to avoid absolutes
4 March 2019
- 16:5216:52, 4 March 2019 diff hist −4 m Spider-Man: Into the Spider-Verse →Plot: improved wording
- 16:5016:50, 4 March 2019 diff hist +39 m Spider-Man: Into the Spider-Verse →Plot: clarified the description of one scene
27 November 2018
- 20:0420:04, 27 November 2018 diff hist +20 m Numerical control Clarified wording of one sentence
26 November 2018
- 19:3119:31, 26 November 2018 diff hist 0 m Marsquake →Detectability: corrected landing date of InSight probe on Mars
14 November 2018
- 21:0521:05, 14 November 2018 diff hist +1 m Mera (character) →DC Extended Universe: changed order of list to improve clarity
3 October 2018
- 22:4622:46, 3 October 2018 diff hist 0 m Apocalypto (soundtrack) changed formatting of link to film's page
30 August 2018
- 14:0714:07, 30 August 2018 diff hist −5 m A Quiet Place changed wording of first sentence
21 August 2018
- 18:5518:55, 21 August 2018 diff hist +40 m Erik Killmonger →Film: clarified wording about Killmongers symbolic scarification
16 July 2018
- 17:2117:21, 16 July 2018 diff hist +309 Talk:Saving Private Ryan →Missing music section: new section
12 July 2018
- 17:1217:12, 12 July 2018 diff hist +4 m Phyla-Vell →Powers and abilities: inserted link on name to help readers understand character relations
22 June 2018
- 17:3717:37, 22 June 2018 diff hist +28 m Metroid: Samus Returns →Development: added a few words to reference Kenji Yamamoto's breadth of composition experience in the Metroid series
5 June 2018
- 20:5820:58, 5 June 2018 diff hist +4 m Sound power made first instance of "sound pressure" a link because it is closely related to sound power
20 May 2018
- 19:3019:30, 20 May 2018 diff hist +52 Billy Pilgrim →Plot summary from "Slaughterhouse Five": added context to a potentially controversial detail of the one event in the novel Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
- 18:1418:14, 20 May 2018 diff hist +431 Wikipedia:Changing username/Simple No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:5817:58, 20 May 2018 diff hist −16 Billy Pilgrim →Plot summary from "Slaughterhouse Five": Fixed mistaken detail about Billy's plane crash in 1968. The beginning of chapter two in the novel explains that Billy was the only survivor. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:2117:21, 20 May 2018 diff hist +10 Billy Pilgrim →Plot summary from "Slaughterhouse Five": Fixed mistake in character description. The latter third of chapter five in the novel describes her as a motion picture star, not necessary pornographic. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 May 2018
- 18:4318:43, 3 May 2018 diff hist 0 Black Dwarf (comics) →Powers and abilities: Fixed split infinitive to improve writing style/fluency. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 April 2018
- 19:5619:56, 10 April 2018 diff hist 0 The Prince of Egypt →Plot: Fixed split infinitive to improve writing style Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 April 2018
- 16:4116:41, 9 April 2018 diff hist +1 Crate engine →Advantages: Added comma to clarify sentence meaning Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 April 2018
- 16:2116:21, 7 April 2018 diff hist +15 m Assa Abloy missing word in the full title of one of Assa Abloy's acquisitions: "Sargent Manufacturing," not just "Sargent"
18 January 2018
- 14:1714:17, 18 January 2018 diff hist −2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy (film) Clarified wording about Adams' death Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:1114:11, 18 January 2018 diff hist +3 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy (film) →Plot: Added missing word, "by" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 January 2018
- 20:2420:24, 16 January 2018 diff hist −3 Topsy Turvy (song) →Synopsis: Section incorrectly referenced Festival of Fools in Belfast instead of Feast of Fools from France. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 January 2018
- 20:2220:22, 15 January 2018 diff hist −43 m Christopher Yost →Career: Section mentioned the wrong X-Men cartoon series. X-Men: Evolution is what introduced X-23.
21 December 2017
- 15:1415:14, 21 December 2017 diff hist +1 m Rapid prototyping →Techniques of rapid prototyping: corrected wording error in FDM entry
- 15:1315:13, 21 December 2017 diff hist −1 m Rapid prototyping →Techniques of rapid prototyping: corrected wording error in FDM entry
21 November 2017
- 14:2214:22, 21 November 2017 diff hist −10 Justice League (film) →Plot: Removed unnecessary words to clarify sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:1914:19, 21 November 2017 diff hist +7 Justice League (film) →Plot: Fixed typo of missing word "world" and missing paragraph break Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 October 2017
- 17:2717:27, 13 October 2017 diff hist −4 m Slaughterhouse-Five →Adaptations: fixed wording and hyperlinks to be more intuitive Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 October 2017
- 14:2214:22, 12 October 2017 diff hist −1 m Screen Junkies →Reception
- 14:2114:21, 12 October 2017 diff hist +44 m Screen Junkies →Reception: improved wording of my previous edit
- 14:1914:19, 12 October 2017 diff hist +61 m Screen Junkies →Reception: added note about Ryan Reynolds Honest Trailer cameos
11 October 2017
- 20:4820:48, 11 October 2017 diff hist +3 m Metal injection molding grams are not a unit of volume
