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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Pi zero in topic Review of revision 2795696 [Passed]

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Latest comment: 10 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

I've done some basic copyediting, checked the source citations, and improved distance from source in places where I noticed a problem (though the AAP source wasn't included in my check). If I were to continue the review from here, I'd dive into the verification phase of the source-check. I'm taking the article out from {{under review}} now, as I'm turning in for the night. --Pi zero (talk) 03:03, 8 August 2014 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 2795696 [Passed]

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Latest comment: 10 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Revision 2795696 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:15, 8 August 2014 (UTC).Reply

Comments by reviewer:

  • Reporter still needs to work on distance-from-source, though there were fewer problems of that nature than on some occasions past.
  • I removed a bunch of overlinks.
  • Interesting article.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 2795696 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:15, 8 August 2014 (UTC).Reply

Comments by reviewer:

  • Reporter still needs to work on distance-from-source, though there were fewer problems of that nature than on some occasions past.
  • I removed a bunch of overlinks.
  • Interesting article.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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