EliGamez
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EliGamez, you are invited to the Teahouse!
editHi EliGamez! Thanks for contributing to Wikipedia. We hope to see you there!
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PJHC Introduce Yourself to a Classmate:
Hello! My name is Ashley Tsang, and I am taking the PJHC class with you. I am currently a Junior studying Kinesiology Sports Medicine with a minor in Biochemistry and Poverty, Justice, and Human Capabilities. For my hobbies, I love art and taekwondo. I am also currently involved with PAIR and have been an intern at the international Rescue Committee. I hope you are having a great second week of school, and I will see you tomorrow! Atsang99 (talk) 06:14, 5 September 2019 (UTC)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:26, 5 September 2019 (UTC)
PJHC Introductions
editHey, it's ClaudiaPaine22 from your PJHC class at Rice. I am a sophmore history major with minors in PJHC and PLST, and I'm interested in US-Latin America Relations and Human Rights. Just wanted say hi and wish you good luck with the class! Claudia Paine22 (talk) 21:38, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
Review
editHey! Good job splitting the information into concise and well thought out sections. Your sources were also up to date and scholarly. Your writing was clear and concise, and good job providing links. Ecellent job adding multiple scholarly sources. Although for some sections only one source was used, perhaps you could add another section to add a differet perspective. The sources are also quite recent as within the past decade.Howeer, for the history section, perhaps you could add some older sources as well. My suggestions are to add more pictures to illustrate your writing. I would also edit the lead to include info on your new sections. There are a couple of sentences in passive voice but otherwise it is very readable with good grammar. Most importantly, I would also add more context to your sections like author and date in order to not make it seem like it is your opinion. For example, in the “Systemic Inequality” section, it seems as if your opinion is shown however that can be changed by adding more context to your sections. Overall, I would add more context to all of your sections. Atsang99 (talk) 04:01, 27 March 2020 (UTC)