Talk:1999 Jacksonville Jaguars season

Latest comment: 8 months ago by Mpdaly86900711 in topic The opening paragraph

The opening paragraph

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@Mpdaly86900711 Good job, you took a sentence that was very well written, with a natural cadence even, and turned into a stunted mess. The old sentence made it obvious that the Rams and the 49ers were both in the NFC West, but that's gone too, because the addition of a full stop in the middle of the argument the sentence was attempting to make was sorely needed. Well done you. DragonFury (talk) 16:31, 17 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

ok Clark Kent what can you actually fix? All you do is undo revisions! Mpdaly86900711 (talk) 16:42, 17 February 2024 (UTC)Reply