User contributions for Jackhammer111

27 January 2023

• 03:3603:36, 27 January 2023 diff hist −220‎ The Painted Bird ‎ →Accusation of plagiarism: even if you look at Wikipedia's article on the book you can clearly see that it's nothing like being there which is likely why the accusation was ignored. The criticism wasn't even made in a review of the book.

26 January 2023

• 00:5900:59, 26 January 2023 diff hist +265‎ Talk:Battle of the Philippine Sea ‎ →the Tradewinds were not a Factor

25 January 2023

• 23:3923:39, 25 January 2023 diff hist +698‎ Talk:Battle of the Philippine Sea ‎ →Air Crew Losses
• 23:1523:15, 25 January 2023 diff hist −602‎ Battle of the Philippine Sea ‎ →Perceived advantages for the Japanese: detailed battle maps showed that both tasks forces were west of the Marianas. the Americans launched one the next day while also headed Northwest. Prevailing winds had nothing to do with this battle. I'll add some detail on The Talk page
• 22:5022:50, 25 January 2023 diff hist +15‎ m Battle of the Philippine Sea ‎ →Advantages for the Americans
• 22:4622:46, 25 January 2023 diff hist −769‎ Battle of the Philippine Sea ‎ →Initial stages: something written on Angel Fire with doesn't pass the reliable sources test. The author gives a book reference but that's not the same thing as an editor here claiming they've read the book and has put the reference here including page numbers.

24 January 2023

• 05:1805:18, 24 January 2023 diff hist −5‎ m Talk:Bruce W. Carr ‎ →F190 incident
• 05:1605:16, 24 January 2023 diff hist +894‎ Talk:Bruce W. Carr ‎ →F190 incident: new section Tag: New topic

19 January 2023

• 19:2119:21, 19 January 2023 diff hist −1‎ German submarine U-166 (1941) ‎ →Fate: publicly accessible source says it was 30 July 1942. It can't be sunk on two different days.

17 January 2023

• 23:4023:40, 17 January 2023 diff hist −64‎ Neil Armstrong ‎ →Test pilot: I meant to remove this in my previous edit as it was debunked in the Smithsonian article. It's a part of the folklore that has no basis in fact.

14 January 2023

• 02:1502:15, 14 January 2023 diff hist +124‎ Neil Armstrong ‎ →Test pilot: the wording could be confused with the rank of Commander. The wording of the X-15 incident as too long infers that he made a mistake which is not supported by other reliable accounts including the Smithsonian article that I added as a reference. It was caused by the failure of a new G limiting flight control system that never even "kicked in"

13 January 2023

• 18:5718:57, 13 January 2023 diff hist −2‎ m The Prince and the Showgirl ‎ →Plot
• 18:5518:55, 13 January 2023 diff hist +285‎ The Prince and the Showgirl ‎ →Plot: Elsie doesn't fall asleep she passes out on the floor. I also corrected a word that was misspelled four times.

9 January 2023

• 20:5720:57, 9 January 2023 diff hist −306‎ Horten Ho 229 ‎ →Operational history: removed the reference to Operation Paperclip which had nothing to do with the discovery, and made other Corrections based on the source given and removed and unsourced reference to a second test pilot.

3 January 2023

• 16:1516:15, 3 January 2023 diff hist −137‎ Perpetual motion ‎ Removing a comment apparently injected for no reason since there are no examples or Clues as to what the person was talking about.

2 January 2023

• 21:5921:59, 2 January 2023 diff hist −236‎ Under Fire (1983 film) ‎ →Cultural references: this is simply trivia that doesn't mean any of the guidelines for inclusion that's a cultural reference. the fact that it is true is simply not enough.

19 December 2022

• 05:1605:16, 19 December 2022 diff hist −11‎ Apollo program ‎ Changed awkward wording. You only land the first humans the first time not over a. Of 4 years. And I think it's appropriate to mention how many times it was done. Tag: Reverted

16 December 2022

• 23:0023:00, 16 December 2022 diff hist +5‎ Josh Johnson (quarterback) ‎ Signed with the 49ers the day after Jimmy Garoppolo got hurt.

14 December 2022

• 16:3616:36, 14 December 2022 diff hist −169‎ Pontiac V8 engine ‎ →301 Turbo: if that's true the auditor should have documented it.
• 16:0316:03, 14 December 2022 diff hist +65‎ Pontiac V8 engine ‎ →428: added a proper source.
• 03:4903:49, 14 December 2022 diff hist −722‎ Pontiac Fiero ‎ →History and design: blocky... lol I'm removing unsourced material. I will be back for more.

11 December 2022

• 05:1405:14, 11 December 2022 diff hist +375‎ William Calley ‎ Undid revision 1126759345 by 2601:1C0:C802:13D4:2DAD:B50C:3D1C:D0F7 (talk) I don't like the fact that public opinion was divided but it was and it's properly sourced here. Tag: Undo
• 05:1005:10, 11 December 2022 diff hist −2,191‎ 40-yard dash ‎ →Records: it's time to remove the improperly sourced claims about 40 yd records. Bo Jackson claims would be self sourcing and none of the other side removed were sourced.

7 December 2022

• 23:3623:36, 7 December 2022 diff hist +134‎ Fernando Alonso ‎ →Ferrari (2010–2014): giving balance to the rampant biased excuse making that this page is full of Using one of the references given. If his fans are going to be permitted or make excuses then verified outside criticism should be permitted as well.

5 December 2022

• 19:4919:49, 5 December 2022 diff hist +546‎ User talk:Karelvandam ‎ →Image:DSC03163.JPG listed for deletion: flat rated current
• 18:3018:30, 5 December 2022 diff hist +1,421‎ Talk:Flat rated ‎ →External links modified (January 2018)

4 December 2022

• 20:3320:33, 4 December 2022 diff hist +836‎ Talk:Cessna 340 ‎ →External links modified
• 20:2120:21, 4 December 2022 diff hist −600‎ Cessna 340 ‎ →Variants: this article is about the Cessna Aircraft. There are several companies that did conversions on the 340. There's enough information Out there that If someone wanted to make a page about Riley aircraft company they could. see the talk page

3 December 2022

• 04:2004:20, 3 December 2022 diff hist −77‎ Sky King ‎ →Television synopsis: the second half of the sentence has nothing to do with the first half.
• 04:1104:11, 3 December 2022 diff hist +501‎ Talk:Sky King ‎ →External links modified
• 04:0204:02, 3 December 2022 diff hist −532‎ Sky King ‎ The Source given doesn't say anything about that person, or anything related to the show. That's the text itself said it was unverified I don't know what it was doing here. All Google search connections are incestuous to this article.

2 December 2022

• 20:4620:46, 2 December 2022 diff hist −504‎ Fernando Alonso ‎ →Ferrari (2010–2014): this implies got Alonzo would have won the championship if he passed Petrov. That is not true. He would have scored two more points by advancing that position. Moving up any further is pure speculation.
• 19:1019:10, 2 December 2022 diff hist +332‎ Talk:Fernando Alonso ‎ →Overview citation needed

27 November 2022

• 01:2701:27, 27 November 2022 diff hist +106‎ Battle of the Philippine Sea ‎ Japanese weakness shouldn't be placed ahead of American superiority as the reasons for the outcome. lack of parts or fuel is a consideration for why they lost the war not this battle. btw, there were a lot of American pilots with no combat experience in this fight too.

26 November 2022

• 03:0903:09, 26 November 2022 diff hist +172‎ CAC CA-15 ‎ →Operational history: this source has a wealth of information about the craft including mentioning of leveling out of the dive, although that still is misleading.
• 03:0603:06, 26 November 2022 diff hist +17‎ CAC CA-15 ‎ Undid revision 1123860715 by Jackhammer111 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 02:4602:46, 26 November 2022 diff hist −17‎ CAC CA-15 ‎ →Operational history: saying "after leveling out" creates the misimpression that the craft was capable of maintaining that speed in level flight. actually, there is no significance in how fast it would go at the end of a 4000 ft dive. It's clear that someone is overstating the performance of this aircraft. Tag: Reverted
• 01:0001:00, 26 November 2022 diff hist +181‎ User talk:Eem dik doun in toene ‎ →Dutch East India Company

19 November 2022

• 23:4623:46, 19 November 2022 diff hist −617‎ Sebastian Vettel ‎ →2009–2010: Championship runner-up and youngest world champion: The DHL fast lap award is not noteworthy in regards to that season. It's not found in any other F1 driver bios that I can find. Maybe it could be mentioned elsewhere that he won it 3 times which is second all time behind Hamilton's 6 times. Tag: Reverted
• 22:2822:28, 19 November 2022 diff hist −1‎ Abitur ‎ Undid revision 1120158500 by Fgnievinski (talk) Tag: Undo

18 November 2022

• 23:2823:28, 18 November 2022 diff hist −189‎ Jenson Button ‎ →2011: Faint praise indeed in a season with 19 races. Do I really have to do the math?

16 November 2022

• 22:4322:43, 16 November 2022 diff hist +368‎ Talk:Diamond DA42 Twin Star ‎ →External links modified (January 2018)

15 November 2022

• 22:4522:45, 15 November 2022 diff hist +203‎ User talk:Sweetpool50 ‎ →Uploading album covers to Commons
• 22:4222:42, 15 November 2022 diff hist −115‎ Once Upon a Time in the West ‎ Undid revision 1121449035 by Sweetpool50 (talk) Tag: Undo

12 November 2022

• 05:2005:20, 12 November 2022 diff hist −115‎ Once Upon a Time in the West ‎ →Casting: Bronson was the lead actor, not fonda. He gets far more screen time than Fonda. The story is about Bronson's character seeking revenge on the villain. Tag: Reverted

9 November 2022

• 00:0900:09, 9 November 2022 diff hist +3‎ Ray Evernham ‎ →Pit stops: making it shorter so it doesn't clutter the point. and a grammar correction.
• 00:0100:01, 9 November 2022 diff hist −52‎ Ray Evernham ‎ →Pit stops: TMI. It was just a reference to the paint scheme of the car. There is no need to go beyond that to describe why they were called the rainbow warriors.

1 November 2022

• 20:4620:46, 1 November 2022 diff hist +660‎ 2022 British Grand Prix ‎ →Race report: some corrections of fact and elaboration on this exceptional and dramatic event.

30 October 2022

• 22:4322:43, 30 October 2022 diff hist −529‎ Nakajima Ki-84 ‎ Even if properly sourced as factual it would be a cherry-picking of data with no real world meaning because combat aircraft don't fight at specific altitudes. It lacked high altitude performance and was not an effective fighter and has a poor combat record. This whole page seriously lacks documentation.

28 October 2022

• 03:0903:09, 28 October 2022 diff hist −3‎ Rick Scott ‎ I was just going to delete the part that was not true but decided to change it to what was true. It's fully described and documented in the Investigation and settlement section below. It caught my eye because I'm the editor that added most of that section when he first ran for Governor of Florida. It has survived pretty much intact.