Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/Florence Farr

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The result was fail due to lack of comment.

I've made considerable expansion of this article since it received its 'B' rating, and I've gotten help from other editors to "wikify" the formatting and references by using the peer review process. I've also added more very good academic references. JMax555 08:02, 23 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

• Support - No serious objections, although it would be nice to know whether there might be potentially more content which could be included. Other than that, the only thing I might like to see is an image of The Golden Stairs if such is available. Also, adding a few more relevant categories, if they exist, wouldn't be out of line. John Carter 15:40, 23 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

As I posted to the Talk page, there are the copies of letters from Yeats and Shaw in the Irish University collection that I'm going to view next week at the UC-Berkeley Library. I'd like to know how those letters were obtained, and any other interesting material that they might contain.

I've got an image of "The Golden Stairs" that I found on an eBay auction for a repro of it, but I'm unsure of what the copyright restrictions might be. Since the artist is over 100 years dead, is it OK to use an image captured from a commercial website? JMax555 15:36, 24 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

• Comment The referencing should be more coherent. Some citations have page references, some don't. First sentence is to much. Divide it up and make better prose of it. This would extend the intro a bit, too. Otherwise I have no major objections. - Duribald 05:02, 28 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I'm gathering the refs together - like the actual letters to Shaw and Yeats - and I plan to fix it with page #s and such all at once in a week or so. I broke up the opening sentence and added some more content (as per other editors' suggestions) and trimmed the infobox. Thanks for the suggestion! I think it reads better now. JMax555 06:03, 28 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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