User contributions for KXF

2 May 2019

• 14:3114:31, 2 May 2019 diff hist −2 m Mel Lyman changed "stated" to "said," added one comma and deleted another

21 June 2018

• 16:5916:59, 21 June 2018 diff hist −2 m Moisturizer corrected verb tense

10 June 2018

• 15:3215:32, 10 June 2018 diff hist +2 m Hereditary (film) corrected various grammatical mistakes

24 May 2018

• 14:0314:03, 24 May 2018 diff hist −53 m Francis Davis Millet improved some awkward phrasing and grammar

16 May 2018

• 17:4217:42, 16 May 2018 diff hist +165 m Augustus Saint-Gaudens added citation for information on ASG's appointment to the Senate Park Commission
• 16:5316:53, 16 May 2018 diff hist +369 m Augustus Saint-Gaudens added a sentence on Saint-Gaudens' appointment to the McMillan Commission
• 16:4516:45, 16 May 2018 diff hist +3 m Augustus Saint-Gaudens added "was," deleted a comma
• 16:4316:43, 16 May 2018 diff hist +1 m Augustus Saint-Gaudens added comma

26 April 2018

• 13:1613:16, 26 April 2018 diff hist −1 m Phil Freelon added and removed commas

13 April 2018

• 18:3418:34, 13 April 2018 diff hist +19 m J. Carter Brown deleted an "also" or two, added that he remained chairman of Commission of Fine Arts after his retirement from the National Gallery of Art
• 18:3118:31, 13 April 2018 diff hist +22 m J. Carter Brown added a clause about the Frank Gehry design for an addition to the Corcoran Gallery of Art
• 18:2418:24, 13 April 2018 diff hist +3 m J. Carter Brown added a missing word - "of"

14 February 2018

• 15:0015:00, 14 February 2018 diff hist −3 m Sam Rayburn improved grammar, added semicolon and removed word "in"

27 November 2017

• 15:1815:18, 27 November 2017 diff hist +1 m Declaration by United Nations changed "phase" to "phrase"

24 August 2017

• 17:1917:19, 24 August 2017 diff hist −9 m W. Nathaniel Howell shortened a wordy sentence
• 17:1817:18, 24 August 2017 diff hist +3 m W. Nathaniel Howell changed a too-familiar first-name reference to this person to last name

23 August 2017

• 14:1514:15, 23 August 2017 diff hist −1 m Laurance Rockefeller Jr. changed to present tense because the way it was written made it sound like the subject is dead
• 14:1414:14, 23 August 2017 diff hist −2 m Laurance Rockefeller Jr. changed "he DID work for" to "he worked for" - because the original construction was incorrect

22 August 2017

• 13:3313:33, 22 August 2017 diff hist −3 m Steven Mnuchin grammar mistake - eliminated "as" from "born . . . AS the second-youngest son of"

9 August 2017

• 17:2617:26, 9 August 2017 diff hist −2 m Colonialism changed "from" to "of": "Othering is the creation OF those who discriminate" etc.

15 March 2017

• 17:1617:16, 15 March 2017 diff hist +1 m John Franklin Carter punctuation - added a comma
• 17:1617:16, 15 March 2017 diff hist −8 m John Franklin Carter grammar

9 December 2016

• 18:0518:05, 9 December 2016 diff hist +2 m Marguerite Henry corrected grammar, changed "to" to "for"

1 December 2016

• 15:0515:05, 1 December 2016 diff hist −21 m Benjamin Bristow improved sloppy writing, substituting "he" for a string of "Bristows".
• 14:5914:59, 1 December 2016 diff hist +1 m Benjamin Bristow grammar: changed "forbid" to "forbade"
• 14:5714:57, 1 December 2016 diff hist −2 m Benjamin Bristow misspelling of "Klansmen"

22 November 2016

• 18:3218:32, 22 November 2016 diff hist −278 W. Clement Stone very badly written. cleaned up, simplified.

15 August 2016

• 18:3918:39, 15 August 2016 diff hist 0 m Orville E. Babcock corrected misspelling of "capital" as "capitol".

21 June 2016

• 20:4020:40, 21 June 2016 diff hist −1 m Metadata corrected punctuation error in second paragraph

13 May 2016

• 16:5416:54, 13 May 2016 diff hist +15 m Who Framed Roger Rabbit corrected grammar mistakes in first paragraph

4 March 2016

• 19:5219:52, 4 March 2016 diff hist −193 William Frawley corrected many grammatical mistakes in the first section

17 December 2015

• 18:1918:19, 17 December 2015 diff hist +3 m National Security Resources Board changed verb form "follow" to "following" in third paragraph

19 November 2015

• 17:3317:33, 19 November 2015 diff hist 0 m The Hunger Games changed "gift" to "give" as better verb choice

26 October 2015

• 18:2818:28, 26 October 2015 diff hist +3 m Adele Chatfield-Taylor added an "and" in one sentence to correct grammar

22 October 2015

• 16:1416:14, 22 October 2015 diff hist −247 Nelson Shanks To make this entry more objective, I removed some overly laudatory and partisan language - a few adjectives, and a couple of sentences that praised the artist without adding any information.

16 September 2015

• 13:2213:22, 16 September 2015 diff hist +8 m Adele Chatfield-Taylor changed wording of one phrase

15 September 2015

• 16:3616:36, 15 September 2015 diff hist +8 m Adele Chatfield-Taylor adding correct code for italics
• 16:2916:29, 15 September 2015 diff hist +1,287 Adele Chatfield-Taylor additional information with citations for subject of this article

29 January 2015

• 16:3216:32, 29 January 2015 diff hist +2 m M. Paul Friedberg word change
• 14:2914:29, 29 January 2015 diff hist +153 m Shipstead-Luce Act →Bibliography: added a reference

8 October 2014

• 19:1319:13, 8 October 2014 diff hist +189 m Henrik Shipstead corrected information about the Shipstead-Luce Act

29 September 2014

• 14:3114:31, 29 September 2014 diff hist +175 m Shipstead-Luce Act corrected some factual errors about the Shipstead-Luce Act and the U.S. Commission of Fine Arts, most importantly that the Act modified but did not establish the Commission.
• 14:0114:01, 29 September 2014 diff hist +23 m Robert Luce corrected information about Shipstead-Luce Act

15 July 2014

• 20:2520:25, 15 July 2014 diff hist −1,426 Frederick Hart (sculptor) corrected grammatical errors, eliminated some empty purple prose
• 19:1619:16, 15 July 2014 diff hist −10 m Frederick Hart (sculptor) corrected punctuation mistakes
• 19:1419:14, 15 July 2014 diff hist +4 m Frederick Hart (sculptor) added a missing word
• 19:1319:13, 15 July 2014 diff hist +1,760 Frederick Hart (sculptor) eliminated some additional purple prose and added information
• 17:0517:05, 15 July 2014 diff hist −807 Frederick Hart (sculptor) removed inappropriately hagiographic writing about Hart
• 16:0116:01, 15 July 2014 diff hist −49 m Egerton Swartwout eliminated some extraneous information
• 15:5915:59, 15 July 2014 diff hist +214 Egerton Swartwout corrected factual, grammatical, and spelling errors, added last sentence.