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20:2220:22, 22 April 2022 diff hist +1‎ Distributed firewall →Basic Working: rest -> rests

22:5022:50, 10 April 2022 diff hist −161‎ Distributed firewall →White papers and reports: I looked at the primary source material to make some edits. I provided a reference and more accessible link to this material in the References section, so I am removing the extra reference to the same source, from a different place.
22:4722:47, 10 April 2022 diff hist −2,153‎ Distributed firewall I changed the title of the "threat comparison" section to "effectiveness", because the article is about defining the distributed firewall; comparing the conventional and distributed firewall seems to detract from this purpose because it may confuse the reader with information that has not been provided in the article, as the objective of comparison implies a thorough understanding of both subjects. This section seems to be ambiguous about the position of distributed firewalls in handling threat
22:3822:38, 10 April 2022 diff hist −18‎ Distributed firewall The section subheadings were difficult to distinguish the more subordinate they were to other headings, which was a result of my copying the sections from the sandbox draft on my user page.
22:3222:32, 10 April 2022 diff hist +3,005‎ Distributed firewall For the features section, I took parts of the evolution of the distributed firewall section and those of the existing "Components of a distributed firewall" section, as well as the policies section, to make one section of multiple subsections. The outstanding features of the distributed firewall are also the reasons why it was developed, it seems.
22:2722:27, 10 April 2022 diff hist +81‎ Distributed firewall For the "Basic Working" section, I tried to clearly establish the basic concept of the distributed firewall.
22:0822:08, 10 April 2022 diff hist −6,654‎ Distributed firewall Deleted the "Evolution of distributed firewall" section for the reasons listed on the talk page. It seemed like an abstract background for the development of the firewall without providing concrete facts. The first four paragraphs deliberate the advantages of the distributed firewall over the conventional one, and discussion of the history of the firewall does not begin until the fifth paragraph; but there is no clear process whereby the distributed firewall was created.
21:5421:54, 10 April 2022 diff hist +137‎ Distributed firewall Instead of using the lead to describe a firewall, I took the second paragraph of "Evolution of distributed firewall" to define the distributed firewall, and left a shorter description of the firewall for context (second sentence). I removed several other sentences that did not seem necessary- such as the implications of the firewall being able to filter from both ends of the network. Replaced the word "policy" with "security rules" and added a link to the policy Wikipedia article.
21:3421:34, 10 April 2022 diff hist −5,173‎ Talk:Distributed firewall No edit summary

05:2205:22, 29 March 2022 diff hist +6,192‎ User:.stughi./Toph Beifong →Article Draft: Character Overview Creation and Conception -I think that the beginning of the second sentence could be a little clearer by making it more direct. I decided to remove the nominalization of "introduction" to this end. I decided to remove the detail about the earthbender being designed to die later on because it's a little distracting and it's not mentioned or addressed again.
02:5802:58, 29 March 2022 diff hist +885‎ User:.stughi./Toph Beifong No edit summary
02:5302:53, 29 March 2022 diff hist +556‎ Talk:Toph Beifong →Student Editor: Reply Tag: Reply
02:4102:41, 29 March 2022 diff hist +1,956‎ N User:.stughi./Toph Beifong General To-do: -Need to find secondary sources -Improve encyclopedic tone -Remove sections about appearances from comic books (WP:FAN- lack of popularity) LEAD -In the first sentence, the relationship between Avatar and Legend of Korra isn't entirely clear, so I will add 'Airbender and its sequel Legend of Korra,' -I found an article from the guardian that echoes the opinion that Toph is a seen as a "prodigy" in earthbending. Tag: Visual edit: Switched