Looking for beta readers for Distracted Magic - A cozy fantasy fairytale inspired by ADHD.
It's a "long short story" ("novelette", properly speaking) of about 14,000 words (~50 pages), and I need quick feedback (preferably within a week). I'm using StoryOrigin's system for gathering feedback.
☆ BLURB ☆ ADHD is magic. Sometimes, dark magic.
Kay is a new fairy, who’s a bit too much for some tastes. Rather than granting wishes, her distracted, forgetful and impulsive nature leads to miserable accidents. Things aren't getting any better when society accuses her of purposeful offence, calling her a witch.
She wouldn’t wish to wish the wish the witch wishes, but how to tell a fairy from a witch?
ADHD, fairytale retellings and magic meet in a charming, yet often quick to judge, world.
It's a "long short story" ("novelette", properly speaking) of about 14,000 words (~50 pages), and I need quick feedback (preferably within a week). I'm using StoryOrigin's system for gathering feedback.
☆ BLURB ☆
ADHD is magic. Sometimes, dark magic.
Kay is a new fairy, who’s a bit too much for some tastes. Rather than granting wishes, her distracted, forgetful and impulsive nature leads to miserable accidents. Things aren't getting any better when society accuses her of purposeful offence, calling her a witch.
She wouldn’t wish to wish the wish the witch wishes, but how to tell a fairy from a witch?
ADHD, fairytale retellings and magic meet in a charming, yet often quick to judge, world.
Comment/ DM if interested.
Thank you so much! 💜
Adva