Ellie's Reviews > Boy Tangled

** spoiler alert ** I really wanted to like this book as I enjoyed the first two before it. It started off quite well and moved at a fast pace which I enjoyed, it's a killer waiting for the action to start sometimes! What really ruined the story for me was the editing. Aaron was Jake and Jake was Aaron and the continuity was shot to pieces and I was ripped from the moment of reading to re-read paragraphs to work out if I was going crazy or it just wasn't right. The other thing that annoyed me was that Aaron said I love you, then said he wasn't ready to be a sure thing then next minute he's all in. I was also really confused when Anna seemed to appear from nowhere. There'd been no hinting or lead up so that was frustrating to not see that develop properly.

It was fine as a filler book for what happens next in the series, but if I would have read it as a standalone I wouldn't be going back for more.