Riki in Apathia and Guy looks more into the secrets of Midas. Great story, but too many repetitions/recaps again. Each book is only 1.5 hours at the moRiki in Apathia and Guy looks more into the secrets of Midas. Great story, but too many repetitions/recaps again. Each book is only 1.5 hours at the most per book. So many repeats arent necessary and hinder it. By skipping them, its only 1 hour at the most....more
Riki is back at Iasons and has to be introduced to the blondies again - penalties occur. Guy seeks information about Kiries and Rikis whereabouts. TheRiki is back at Iasons and has to be introduced to the blondies again - penalties occur. Guy seeks information about Kiries and Rikis whereabouts. The author repeats too often in the books about how strange Iasons behaviour and Rikis slum mongrel is or the latest revelations about furniture, at least in each book 2-4 times. Without the repetitions, the books would be one less....more
DNF couldnt bring myself to like the characters and the plot. Typical Aliens made them do it. Hidden love with stupid -no-sex-allowed rules and then cDNF couldnt bring myself to like the characters and the plot. Typical Aliens made them do it. Hidden love with stupid -no-sex-allowed rules and then comes too much lovey-dovey sentences from the slave while being "raped". Sex drugs and bad overlords/ministers not missing either. Oh and dont forget the healing magic and the telepathy. Why do the saviours of the universe have to rape each other infront of the bad one instead of giving him an ass-full for threatening with genocide? And why does the bad one wait for stupid ambassadors instead of just destroying the planet? Better write a PWP instead of this "plot"....more
That i would say this: no story at all, no highlights in the book. Just one sex after another again and again. Although different, very repetitive. WoThat i would say this: no story at all, no highlights in the book. Just one sex after another again and again. Although different, very repetitive. Woman meets man, plan sex without partnership goes wrong and live happily ever after after 60 pages. In the next 300 pages sex, his loss of job and her taking flowers from her ex. Sorry, but this cant even be counted as "spoiler". No drama, no nothing....more
Better than the first one although there was more Torture and kinky stuff. The ending felt a bit too fast. Few more pages would have been better. ShorBetter than the first one although there was more Torture and kinky stuff. The ending felt a bit too fast. Few more pages would have been better. Short book. Read it in 2,5 hours...more
too much snuff and horror. just too much. This is NOT a hardcore BDSM, but a torture book and because of its setting way beyond what would be humanly too much snuff and horror. just too much. This is NOT a hardcore BDSM, but a torture book and because of its setting way beyond what would be humanly possible to survive. I like hard fanfiction including slavery, but this was beyond everything i have read...more
I love and adore xanthes fanfiction of Stargate Atlantis and ncis. the characters the actors play here reminded me of ncis and I liked it. but the stoI love and adore xanthes fanfiction of Stargate Atlantis and ncis. the characters the actors play here reminded me of ncis and I liked it. but the story was too lengthy with not enough plot so I stopped in the middle....more
The beginning was very promising, although I found it very strange and unrealistic that her new gay boss helped with the BDSM problem after just a dayThe beginning was very promising, although I found it very strange and unrealistic that her new gay boss helped with the BDSM problem after just a days work and that she told him about it. No one would do that! But well, it could be overlooked.
But why does every BDSM book have to have the same stupid story (aka Fifty shades of grey). Naive girl meets rich guy, he plays with her, goes too hard on her. Then either she runs away at that moment or he wants her to be hard on him. They get back together because he sees the error of his ways and they live - of course normally - happily ever after.
Through the book in the trash can when the had their loving normal make-up-sex....more
I´ve read a lot dark erotica, but this was way too much snuff and horror. Because of its setting, it gets way beyond what a human can normally endure I´ve read a lot dark erotica, but this was way too much snuff and horror. Because of its setting, it gets way beyond what a human can normally endure without dying. This was not sex or hard bdsm, but pure torture. That bridge was where the book totally ended for me, just skipped to the ending and that was way less of a revelation than I had thought. Not worth reading....more