great writing. same old draco and his antics, yet not. i mean theres only so much u can varies in malfoy without actually changing his characterizatiogreat writing. same old draco and his antics, yet not. i mean theres only so much u can varies in malfoy without actually changing his characterizations the ff readers love, but this one was a bit boring. still attractive at times coz fr look at who we’r talking bout, but yeah rlly couldve been better. some examples of the dracos (& dramione full of angst circumstances) i actually adore and always looked for in these ff are the ones from manacled, breath mint battle scars, dont look back & the fallout. overall not much to write home ab. they just kept fucking the whole time and this shits no ordinary 400pgs book. if ur into eating the same stuff for bf lunch dinner everyday for the rest of ur life ur gon love this. the connection just wasnt enough for me to stay...more
absolutely not enough buildup for the sexual attraction to make sense (and other attraction, the trust etc were not rlly developed/shown well enough),absolutely not enough buildup for the sexual attraction to make sense (and other attraction, the trust etc were not rlly developed/shown well enough), which is whats preventing me from giving this a 3, but it was actually still pretty good. best part is that hand holding knuckle brushing part coz ew thats exactly what i want, not make out scenes that sprang out of nowhere. 2.8✨...more
’There is a strange, nagging feeling in the back of his mind, and Snape uneasily suspects that just as breaking Luna Lovegood has become somewhat o
’There is a strange, nagging feeling in the back of his mind, and Snape uneasily suspects that just as breaking Luna Lovegood has become somewhat of a pet project for him, Miss Lovegood has made somewhat of a project out of him as well.’
great enough writing, great buildup, snape’s voice fits well, exactly how id imagine him to be, (since it was from his pov we were told the book from, it affected the enjoyment a lot) for all of that it gets a 3 coz i didnt rlly love it. I COULD. had things were spiced up a lil more. (not like that u dirty minded hoes. ok a tad like that but other stuff too). there was no romance tho, and ig that make sense coz itdve been weird coz the ‘friendship’ started since shes 11-12 yo but still. such a shame. i stand by my statement, snuna is one of the best non cannon hp ship (NOT THAT IVE READ ANY FAV FEATURING THEM. okay i can be down to any ship as long as i connect w the author and how they write the characters there, but snuna in my head is just gold. actually, luna with any grumpy mean ass untouchable men could be perfect)...more
i left by the mark 50% but this was good. a nice read objectively, just not MY kind of nice read. got a heck of a diff definition for that word than ti left by the mark 50% but this was good. a nice read objectively, just not MY kind of nice read. got a heck of a diff definition for that word than this.
if u like memoryloss/blankcanvas draco getting forced to be a muggle (as a form of punishment from the ministry), him falling for hermione coz she was his ‘social worker’ & the only person he interacted / is forced to interact with…. also coz she (and some ‘polices’) is the only person who knows bout the ‘head injury’ (coz he has no core memory bout his personal life before he woke up from the ‘coma’ whatsoever, as little as fav color/madre’s name so how tf would he date / have any other relationship), then do it? i cant think of any specific name of the syndrome other than stockholm but yeahhh issa no from me
the premise i liked at first (proven by the way i didnt ditch it sooner), the execution was far from perfect but still really could be worse,, writing too. characters had banter i guess, but it was stale anyway for me
real rating : 2.2✨
ps. how do u expect the mission to fully work, on full effect by giving them shitty ass names like drake malfford, and tulip pafinsosdnnsnsnsns. i mean it did w the others but be real ...more
operation trying to find a gripping fic w a writing i like has been a big fat major fail lately. also this one, it was so fucking weird reading the hpoperation trying to find a gripping fic w a writing i like has been a big fat major fail lately. also this one, it was so fucking weird reading the hp characters from 1st pov?...more
it was okay. dramione got stuck in the library, by circe(?) who showed up out of nowhere, casted some spell and bam bam bam theyre married, draco 2.8✨
it was okay. dramione got stuck in the library, by circe(?) who showed up out of nowhere, casted some spell and bam bam bam theyre married, draco confessed his long crush to her, the only way they could get out of there is if they shag
malfoy was a lil cutie here
’It occurred to her after the first several attempted conversations that he was a nervous talker. Whenever the silence grew slightly awkward he would start prattling. Given his ridiculous memory, once he got started on a subject, he didn't know how to stop detailing it. Wittering on and on. Hermione apparently made him very nervous given the length at which he would carry one. Then, when he'd abruptly realize he was rambling, his immediate reaction was to slip back into his habitual nastiness and start trying to insult her before apparently catching himself, blushing, apologizing quickly—to Hermione's astonishment—and stalking off.’
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^ how i imagined him here. (dunno the artist, i found it on pinterest) totally not the one on the cover. not in a million years. that one looks like a grump, which i usually lurvee but totally not this draco
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