The Jeff comics are far better done than this one. There's more of a plot to the Jeff ones, and a better delivery on the humorous punchlines. In this comic the pizza delivery is running late so Lucky decides to investigate. He ultimately saves the day, as one might expect. That's... just it. It wasn't quite as clever or as ridiculous as the Jeff comics have been, so it landed a bit flat.
I wouldn't mind seeing other comics done in this style, but it both wasn't as cute as the Jeff comics or as well delivered an executions as Fraction's iconic "Pizza is My Business" issue of Hawkeye.