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In this thrilling Afro-fantasy, the first set in the lush, opulent kingdom of Galla, a girl raised in secret must leave her sheltered rural home for the subtle dangers of the royal court, where she becomes caught up in deadly power struggles and romantic intrigue.

Kalothia has grown up in the shadows of her kingdom, hidden away in the forested East after her parents were outed as enemies of the king. Raised in a woodland idyll by a few kindly adult caretakers, Kalothia can hunt and fish and fend for herself but knows little of the outside world. When assassins attack her home on her sixteenth birthday, she must flee to the king’s court in the West—a beautiful but lethal nest of poison, plots, and danger, overseen by an entrenched patriarchy. Guided by the Goddess herself, can Kalothia navigate this most worldly of places to find her own role? What if she must choose between her country and her heart? Excitement, romance, and a charismatic heroine shine in this first book set in the unforgettable kingdom of Galla.

276 pages, Hardcover

Published September 12, 2023

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Shade Lapite

2 books28 followers
Shade Lapite is British-Nigerian and has drawn on her heritage to create the world of her debut novel. She spent a significant slice of her childhood nestled in the library, inhaling books by Diana Wynne Jones, Tamora Pierce, Lois Duncan, and Mildred D. Taylor. Her love for the arts led her to a degree in media arts at Royal Holloway, University of London. She now lives in Toronto and juggles writing with her career in digital marketing. Her blog, Coffee Bookshelves, celebrates writing and promotes titles by authors of color. You can find her fangirling over Korean dramas on Twitter @TheShadyFiles or sharing her favorite books on Instagram @shadelapite.

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Profile Image for bee 🍉.
351 reviews88 followers
January 19, 2024
You know a book is good when you have to keep pausing while you’re reading to audibly say “This book is so good”

I knew going into this that Goddess Crown was going to be fantastic but I was actually pleasantly surprised how fantastic it truly was.

The world-building was beautiful and so immersive. I really found myself getting so lost in the writing that I would read four chapters without even realising it. I can’t stress enough how great this was.

I loved that it also touched on the challenges that women face in male-dominated spaces and how often, they need to work ten times harder to be respected or seen as even close to equals.

The romance subplot also took me by surprise but I loved it so much.

I can’t wait to see what this author does next.
Profile Image for Zana.
535 reviews161 followers
February 16, 2024
This fits The Diverse Baseline February Prompt A: A book by a Black author.

3.5 stars rounded up.

This started out really strong with the FMC escaping an assassination. That scene really gripped me and was definitely 5 stars.

But after that, it was typical royal court politics. If you're into that, then this might be your thing. But I was mostly bored tbh and was hoping for more action.

Kalothia is a great FMC though. Very resilient and highly adaptable to new situations. She's one of those young characters who are old souls.

Anyway, despite feeling meh about this book, I'd still love to read more from this author.
Profile Image for Melissa.
45 reviews1 follower
February 11, 2024
Unfortunately I didn’t enjoy this despite being initially very excited. It began at a very slow pace and then hurtled at break-neck speed at the end. There was minimal world building beyond letting us know that they worship a Goddess and yet function as a patriarchal society. Kalothia, the main character, rarely has anything to say/is left speechless when she encounters sexist/misogynistic behaviour and comments. In fairness, as a coddled 16yr old that maybe isn’t surprising. Overall this felt very disappointing and not as exciting and engaging as I would have liked. The fantasy and romance aspects were lacking and not as well developed as they could have been, and the plot was predictable.
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129 reviews28 followers
September 9, 2023
Wow. Such a beautiful face paced read with some black girl magic action thrown in story. In Goddess Crown we are introduced to Kalothia she’s 16 & we go on this journey with her. She’s brought up by guardians in a rural area basically living away from her birth parents who are King & Queen to keep her out of harms way. Kalothia is kind & smart from the very beginning. But we also get to see her use other skills & strengths when she has to prove herself in front of the Kings Court.

I follow the author on social media & she explained how the setting is Africa-inspired. And I love that ! Well done.
Thank you so much Hear Our Voices for my ARC. #GoddessCrown #HearOurVoices #HOV
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919 reviews43 followers
September 6, 2023
Goddess Crown is the kind of story that grabs your attention and won't let it go until you reach that final page. There is so much action that your riveted to see what happens next, so your flipping pages and waiting on pins and needles to see how Kalothia can escape capture and even navigate her way through the palace to avoid danger. Such a wonderful escapism read, and I was certainly in the mood for the palace intrigue. At 288 pages, Lapite really pacts in the action, and even leaves some room for a little romance, yep looking at you Nahir. Overall, I quite enjoyed the world building of the story, but I kept wanting to know more about this fantasy inspired country. Also wanting to know more about Padma, Galla's enemies whose territory borders them, and more about King Osura. There are also quite a few lords and occasionally I had difficulty keeping them straight. Going in I was expecting something along the lines of Children of Blood and Bone, part fantasy and mythology. And this isn't quite that, although there is a Goddess who comes to help Kalothia from time to time. But oh, how I did love Kalothia. Her determination, strength, willingness to break through any barrier placed in front of her. Also, her desire to help her country to begin to recognize women for their potential and all the skills that they bring. To finally allow them to have a voice. Such a wonderful story that has me eagerly awaiting a sequel. ** A huge thank you to Walker Books US for the paperback ARC in exchange for an honest review.**
Profile Image for Brandie Shanae Bridges.
203 reviews165 followers
September 10, 2023
This book was a breath of fresh air. This book will literally keep you on your toes because there is always something happening from either a huge reveal to finding out the someone is trying to wipe out your entire family which also includes you. In this book we introduced to Zalothia who is under the care of Teacher and Aunty. As she is being cared for in the forrest and is protected by Clarit and Nahor it is Zalothia's 16th birthday and her life immediately begins to change. Everything that she was told was a complete lie. Literally as she was being raised in a forrest in the Kingdom of Galla she was told that her parents had to go into hiding from the king because their lives were in danger, but the truth was that the king that was supposedly trying to kill her parents was actually her father and he had executed her mother based on rumors of infidelity. Honestly I highly recommend this book because as the story progresses it keeps getting better and better.
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204 reviews10 followers
September 4, 2023
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When I tell you to have a novel in your fingers that allows you to see a female character that looks like you and uplifts herself through her power, strength, courage, and tenaciousness even though a patriarchal society driven by oppression of women tried to stand in her way, it’s phenomenal!!

These characters stories spoke to me with each turn of the page, and discovering how many of the characters were falsely accused because they were woman struck emotional cords that made me want to go into battle to fight for Justice in this Kingdom!!

I absolutely love an Afro fantasy and spending time in the opulent kingdom of Galla, I feel I too grew to be the Goddess Crown!!

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Profile Image for DOMINIQUE Davis.
469 reviews24 followers
September 9, 2023
I voluntarily read and reviewed an advance copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

This story follows Kalothia. On her 16th birthday her home is attacked. She loses Aunty and Teacher in the aftermath and flees with Nahir just to lose him too. She deals with the fact that the place where she flees doesn’t accept her for who she really is and the position that she will hold. I love that Kalothia is the one to shut down the old ways of forced marriage to have a man in charge. Some of my favorite quotes from the book come from the discussions between Nahir and Kalothia as they explore new feelings.

“Your skin makes me think of midnight. Dark and clear and serene.” He chuckled. “Which is funny because you are the furthest point from serene.”

“Your hair is exactly like your personality. Curls, twists, strong, unpredictable, beautiful . . .”

Thank you Walker Books, and Edelweiss for the opportunity to read this ebook in exchange for an honest review. Overall 3.5/5 stars
Profile Image for Sophie.
60 reviews21 followers
December 3, 2023
3.5⭐️
Thank you to Walker books for the arc!

This was a fun read! The main character, Kalothia, was fierce and strong despite the heartache she has endured. I loved the setting of the book and of the different cultures described. A feminist fantasy book that was well written, with lots of action as Kalothia tries to navigate her new life and the enemies that come with it. Full of twists and turns that I didn’t see coming.

However, I did want a little more interaction with our love interest. I didn’t feel as connected to their friendship and feelings because it felt like not much happened between them. It would be nice if he was more involved but again, I can understand why he wasn’t as I was getting the “women don’t always need men” vibe.

I did enjoy the ending and felt like it fit really well with the feminist narrative— Kalothia doesn’t need a man to rule well. It was refreshing to read!
Profile Image for Liv Delinicolis.
312 reviews3 followers
July 18, 2023
4.4 🌟 I LOVED THIS SO MUCH!!! I can’t even express how much this book has me filled with emotion. I can’t even speak. I adore the MC, she’s excellent. I loved the world building, Ye-Ye is a cherub, I loved all the side characters. I can’t wait for more with the romance, such a good build up. I usually don’t care about court intrigue but this story had me flicking the pages for more!! I just adored everything about this book. Such an amazing story and one of the best YA debut’s I’ve read in a very long time!!
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69 reviews6 followers
June 29, 2024
When the action in this book started at page 25 I knew I was in for a ride! Yes I figured out who the perpetrator was early on but still enjoyed how it played out. The massage of this book was clear strong black women and I ate up!
Profile Image for Brittney Notaro.
102 reviews2 followers
September 27, 2023
Now we all know that this is not the genre I normally read, so my knowledge of YA Afro Fantasy is limited… but all hail Shade Lapite because this was absolutely incredible.

This one was fast-paced while still maintaining amazing and understandable world building. I was never once confused about who was who, where they were, and what was going on. It is also sooo beautifully written, it’s hard not to get lost in the rhythm on the pages.

The setting (Galla) gave me all the amazing pre-technology-but-not-medieval vibes I could dream of.

This book really illustrates a time of women living in a strictly male-run world: where tradition & faith run deep and are never questioned. I love that the book has a main themed of women trying to break free of their given “norms” and show their true powers to become equals. The FMC, Kalothia, is such a shining star of a heroine. I love her character!

Goddess Crown is also action pact and I was zooming through the pages, wondering how the FMC was going to get out of all the situations that feel upon her!

This story sprinkled in a bit of romance and I’m all here for it! It was done wonderfully and wasn’t at all overpowering the true tale being told!

The ending of the book wrapped up so quickly (almost too quickly 😢) that I’m HOPING there is a sequel because I need to further get lost in the Gallan world. My deep need to know about Kalothia’s next adventures & how she handles the weight of the world her shoulders, is taking over!

Thank you so much @penguinrandomhouseca for the Review copy, I highly recommend!
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73 reviews7 followers
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October 5, 2023
The cover of this book is absolutely stunning! It made it an easy decision to want to read this book, but the content is equally good! The female MC Kalothia is headstrong, courageous, and an easy character to love. However, the side characters are just as enthralling. I loved that there were some twists along the way, and how Kalothia continues to push forward even in the face of adversity; especially when dealing with a patriarchal society. Even as a teen, she’s a force to be reckoned with!

This Afro-fantasy is definitely worth the read! I devoured it in a couple of hours. I loved reading about a character I could see myself in.

I’m excited to see what is next from this author! Be sure to add this one to your TBR! 📚
Profile Image for Rebecca Elida.
18 reviews
June 15, 2024
Not great, not bad. This is a YA fantasy debut novel. The plot and idea for this book was good, but the writing felt slightly immature. Looking forward to this author growing and her writing improving to support her plot ideas
Profile Image for Emily.
239 reviews1 follower
July 10, 2023
"What did you come here to say?" "That I'm yours."

This book was a wild ride. We start with a girl named Kalothia who lives in the forest with her two caretakers, Aunty and Teacher as well as a guard to keep her safe. She's spent her whole life in the forest, unable to go into the cities because the King would kill her. Her life turns upside down when her home is attacked, and everyone shes ever known and loved is killed. She flees her home, desperate to find safety.

This book is just wow. When I started reading I could not put it down. This world is so easy to get lost in! I adored everything about this book, how fast paced it was and all the different kinds of trouble our heroine got into. When the Goddess appeared to help guide Kalothia, I was shocked. I loved the whole reasoning behind the goddess showing up and what she wanted Kaolthia's help with, I to would be mad if men took what I said and twisted my words so horribly to make sure they would forever be in power.

Overall this was an incredible read, I absolutely adored all the characters (espeically Nahir) and I fell head over heels in love with the plot. I am clawing for another book I NEED a second book set in this world (even though this one hasn't come out yet crying) please please please read it!!

Thank you so much to penguin random house for giving me an ARC in exchange for an honest review :)
Profile Image for Teneisha (Teesbookjourney) .
935 reviews25 followers
February 3, 2024
"The Goddess Crown" by Shade Lapite takes readers on an incredible journey filled with intrigue, mystery, and the challenges of ruling a kingdom. The narrative is fast-paced and riveting, making it a compelling read from start to finish.

The story unfolds as Kalothia is thrust into immense responsibility after the king's death. The division of power that was once shielded from her now rests in her hands, and she must navigate the complexities of running a country while unravelling the mystery of the king's killer.

Lapite skillfully weaves a tale of political intrigue and personal growth, drawing readers into a world where every decision holds weight. Kalothia's journey is both relatable and inspiring as she grapples with the challenges of leadership, making "The Goddess Crown" a fantasy tale and a compelling exploration of character development.

The anticipation for the second book is palpable as Lapite leaves readers eager to uncover the following chapters in Kalothia's story. The book's accessibility makes it an excellent choice for new fantasy readers and a younger audience, offering an engaging introduction to the genre.

In conclusion, "The Goddess Crown" is a standout work in fantasy, offering a rich and immersive experience for readers of all ages. Shade Lapite's storytelling prowess shines through, creating a world that captivates and leaves a lasting impression.
Profile Image for Diane Rembert.
1,004 reviews30 followers
September 10, 2023
Kalothia has been raised and heavily protected, in secret, after the death of her parents. No one has disclosed the actual story, so on her 16th birthday, she is determined to find out for herself. Along the way, she is met by extreme opposition. Again…she didn't know why.

Once she gets to her destination, an encounter encourages her to pursue the truth, and change several lives forever.

I went into this book, not knowing what to expect, and I was pleasantly surprised. I loved the underlying theme of Women's Empowerment. My favorite character was Nahir, because he stood by Kalothia's side through it all. My least favorite character was Hadley. You'll have to read the book in order to find out why. I highly recommend this book for all coming of age young women and their village.

I would to thank @hearourvoicestours and @shadelapite, for allowing me to be a tour host for this book.

Pre-order your copy today.
Profile Image for Aria.
422 reviews54 followers
May 3, 2024
Also on Snow White Hates Apples.

Filled with lush imagery and gorgeous prose, Goddess Crown is a fast-paced Afro-fantasy that follows Kalothia who grew up believing that her parents were on the run from the King which meant that she had to be hidden in the forest with caretakers all her life. It’s not until her 16th birthday that she finds herself having to flee her home and ends up at the royal court where she learns that contrary to her beliefs, she is actually the King’s daughter and now that he’s dead, she must ascend the throne. But, of course, this is not an easy task because this strictly patriarchal society is against women leading, plus there are snakes abound in the court. So, what can Kalothia do in this situation?

Why, she goes with the flow! She goes with the flow despite her many reservations and feelings of indignation. She goes with the flow even when she can take matters into her own hands and stop things because why put her smarts and training into more practice when she can have others solving things for her? Why be the main, active protagonist of her life when so many others are willing to guide her, placing her here and there so it suits them and sometimes, indirectly suits her as well?

As you can probably tell by now, Kalothia has lesser spine than desired. She’s not the charismatic rebel I’d imagined her to be, which is really disappointing because she has so much potential. Although naive and sheltered, she’s educated, can fight and has a lot of room for growth. Moreover, she’s chosen by the Goddess herself to challenge and change the system! So, why is she in the backseat for most of the story? Why isn’t she the driver, the leader — the one who makes her own choices and tries hard to fight against the flow??

This inaction of hers takes away the tension and excitement of the story, making the action-packed moments forgettable. Everything is conveniently solved and more often than not, what should be life-or-death trials feel no more grave than a little stumble on flat ground. Also, what happened to the court politics and intrigue? I had expected something more complicated and with more gravity than everything that was presented here. Instead, it was all child’s play.

Furthermore, there’s no character growth and though I enjoyed the characters, they’re all archetypal. Other aspects that are also lacking are the worldbuilding which contrasts poorly with the lush imagery, and the romance which feels too rushed by the final quarter of the book.

Overall, Goddess Crown has so much promise but ultimately, it didn’t deliver. Many aspects lack depth and layers, leaving us with this surface-level story when it could’ve been a wholly gorgeous and complex tale.

Thank you so much Pansing for sending me a copy of this in exchange for an honest review! Goddess Crown by Shade Lapite is available at all good bookstores.


Profile Image for Nachiketh (thedocreadstoomuch).
126 reviews3 followers
July 18, 2024
Do you ever go into a book with a ton of expectations and the book somehow manages to exceed them all? This was one of those books for me!

We follow Kalothia, a royal who has been in hiding in the forest after the Queen was murdered by the King and her parents, as supporters of the Queen, went into exile. She has no clue who or where her parents are and is living a peaceful life in the forest until a bunch of assassins from the neighbouring country attack and kill everyone close to her heart. What follows is a fast-paced fantasy brimming with action, immersive world-building, gasp-worthy plot twists, court politics and drama, and so much more! And yes, a smidge of romance that is bound to make you feel all warm and cozy!

Fantasy has always been one of my go-to genres and this one inspired by West Africa with stellar world-building definitely takes the cake! The author manages to build the world with just the right amount of political intrigue without making it info-dumpy and you can’t help but wish to visit Galla too! I would have loved to see a map in the book and I would be super glad to see one in the sequel.

If you are worried about the book being dreary and taking time to set the stage, fret not! The plot is so fast-paced you won’t realise time fly as you fly through the pages! With just the right amount of anticipation to keep you hooked, and some well-placed plot twists to make your jaw drop, this book is bound to become a favourite! And shoutout to Ye-Ye too!

As someone who greatly values women friendships in life, the blossoming of friendship between Kalothia and Bukki had me smiling from ear to ear. We all need that one cheerleader of a friend who stands by us through thick and thin and Bukki is the poster girl for a perfect friend and companion! I can’t wait to see more of her in the upcoming books!

If you are someone who loves their fantasy with a hint of romance, you’re in the right place! The romance between Kalothia and Nahir was warm and comforting and felt like an oasis in a desert full of scorpions and didn’t feel forced one bit! It was the perfect respite in the vulture-infested court!

Who doesn’t love a book that screams SMASH THE PATRIARCHY??? Galla is a deeply patriarchal and misogynistic society, much like our own, where women are perceived to be the weaker sex. Kalothia plans to uproot the system and usher in a new era where women are treated as equals. This book sets the perfect stage for this subplot and I can’t wait to see it explored in the future books!

I mean, who doesn’t love some drama? This book is replete with courtroom drama and palace politics and if you happen to enjoy those, you’re in for a ride!

We need more books like these full of characters of color written by authors of color! Not only does this book draw inspiration from African culture and mythology, it also shows how rich and beautiful it is! I can’t wait to read more books by Shade Lapite!
Profile Image for Stephanie Augustine.
Author 1 book27 followers
September 11, 2023
**2.5 stars** - originally posted on YABC

Kalothia had grown up in the forest her whole life. She was told it was for her protection. Kalothia's parents were supporters of the traitorous queen and she had to be tucked away for safety. During her time in the forest, she was taught by Teacher and cared for by Aunty. There was always a guard in place too and Nahir, the Captain's son who helped trained her and ensured her safety. The day before Kalothia decides it's time to leave and try to find her parents, her home is attacked and sends her on a quest to fulfill her destiny.

The things I liked: I loved this world. This whole culture was created and there was so much history behind it. I also really like Kalothia's personality. It was clear that without Teacher, she wouldn't be as independent as she was. Through the Goddess' teaching (as told by Aunty) women aren't supposed to be thinkers or readers but rather supportive. Teacher neglected this and taught Kalothia how to read and write and how to think for herself. This obviously comes in hand later down the line and I'm grateful for Teacher's persistent. I also really liked the relationship between Nahir and Kalothia. It was natural and I enjoyed how it played out.

The things I didn't like: All of the best aspects of this story felt incomplete. The beginning would have been such a good opportunity to learn more about this world and Galla. I felt like I didn't know anything about what I was reading except for the conflict with Padma. But why was Galla so strong and revered? What about their other neighbors? I just wanted more from this world than what was provided. The Goddess' interventions. While I understand why she doesn't show up more - I wish there was still more of her. It didn't have to be intervention but the fact that the Goddess' shows herself to Kalothia is so interesting and I wish that was utilized more. Kalothia's "proving". The way Kalothia was supposed to prove her lineage was summed up in a chapter. A single chapter. It didn't present any danger or really much of anything. It was there and done. The pacing was off for me as it felt like it jumped from one idea to the next without fully flushing it out.

Overall, Goddess Crown by Shade Lapite was an okay read. It absolutely was not horrible but it fell short for me as I wish there was more to it. The premise was great and I enjoyed the characters but the best ideas of this book were just there. Nothing more to it than just presented. I do recommend this book to those who like Political Fantasy stories where your main girl comes in and crashes everything in the best possible way. There is a little bit of murder mystery here which I enjoyed as well but don't expect the most interesting parts of this book to be anything more than there.
Profile Image for Andrew.
882 reviews140 followers
January 29, 2024
I had such high hopes for this but it didn’t quite stick the landing.

I expected more from you

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Review Taken from The Pewter Wolf Reads
***Proof gifted by UK publisher, Walker Books, in exchange for an honest review/reaction***

Kalothia has grown up in the shadow of the her kingdom, hidden away after her parents were outed as enemies of the king. But when assassins attack her home and kill her guardians on her sixteenth birthday, Kalothia is forced to flee and finds herself in the king’s court.

But the king’s court is no safer. Men think they are entitled and someone is plotting against her. How far will Kalothia be willing to go to keep herself and the kingdom safe?

You know that feeling when you randomly discover a book and you go “I need to read this as soon as I can”? It’s almost a physical reaction. Well, that was me when I first heard this book. It just ticked all the boxes for me: a standalone fantasy with deep inspiration of Nigerian mythology. And as soon as I got an Advance Reader Proof copy front the publisher, I practically dropped what I was reading and started this.

And, honestly? I feel let down by my excitement.

I mean, there’s nothing wrong with this. The writing is good, the characters are ok, the story is good. Everything works.

But it all feels a little meh, and I can’t help feeling that if this was a duology, Goddess Crown would have been better. It would have allowed the story is breathe, the characters and relationships to grown naturally and made us care for them. Same with the world building, which is something I wanted more of, and the themes that this book wanted to tackle.

Also, it would have helped with pacing. The pacing felt all over the place (even though it does take place within two/three weeks so the story did move at pace) - slow at the start (even though events happen that mean it shouldn’t) and breakneck fast at the end (it felt almost rushed and, if the story and relationship took time to grow and allowed readers to care, the stakes would have felt higher).

Also, the feminism elements felt very heavy handed at times. Not that it’s a bad thing, but there are YA/teen books out there that have tackled sexism, misogyny and feminism with more subtlety and with layers. Compared to those, Goddess Crown does feel at times that it’s hitting you round the head

This book wasn’t bad (I am very intrigued over what Shade writes next!), but I had such high hopes for this and it let me down, affecting my enjoyment. I do think this would be perfect for younger YA readers, though, so I will be pushing this on my socials…
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202 reviews18 followers
April 4, 2024
i was promised court politics and intrigue, not a monologuing villain and a resolution where everything conveniently & quickly works out for her, and that even though nobody's respected her or listened to her thus far, suddenly her decisions are taken seriously and followed, even though one of the biggest decisions she makes is a blatantly terrible one if you stop to think about it for more than a few seconds.

perhaps the key issue here is that the story is significantly more simplistic than other ya fantasy court politics books i've read and enjoyed before.

there are other things about this book that didn't work for me, some being preference-based (and thus haven't negatively affected my rating) and some being this-is-an-actual-issue-based (and thus, have) but i don't actually enjoy being negative all that much, so i'm gonna tap out here! but, all this being said, i wouldn't necessarily rule out reading more books from lapite and/or more books set in the world of galla. despite my frustration with the court politics aspect of this court politics book, there's still a lot of potential here, and a lot of strengths, so i do genuinely look forward to seeing what lapite does going forwards
Author 2 books45 followers
January 26, 2024
I received an ARC from the publisher in exchange for an honest review. It has not affected my opinions.

3.5 stars

GODDESS CROWN is a fun debut with lots of series potential.

I quite liked Kalothia as a character. I wasn't sure if I would, as she starts off very competent (I like a weakness in a character to hold them back!). However, as the book goes on and she leaves the environment she's used to, her naivety is exposed. She still handles her problem, but how little she's been prepared for reality gives her this vulnerability I wanted to protect.

This is quite a short book (barely 300 pages) meaning it's a good option if you want something fun and engaging but quick. Being this short leads to it being quite pacy - there's a fair amount Kalothia has to survive then do, so there's not much time to sit around with her, meaning you keep reading as there's always something going on.

As someone who prefers political fantasy to almost any genre, I was a little disappointed that it was marketed as full of political intrigue as I wouldn't call it a political fantasy. Kalothia doesn't get to the court until the halfway point, where the intrigue begins to come in, and this is when the book's length starts to bite - the book could easily have stood being 100 pages longer to give the politics space to become something.

It simply feels like the intrigue doesn't get enough space to breathe and become a solid plot line. A problem occurs and she solves it in about five chapters. I would have liked more time with the different factions, to see who they are and what they want (or claim to.) Instead, the five politicians all seem to be painted with the same brush - men who think nothing of women, and that's it. If this is a series, I hope the later books have the space for more intrigue.

This said, I did enjoy what there was of the intrigue. It's a challenge Kalothia isn't used to facing, forcing her to think differently about these people, and also exposing how dangerous the world of supposed safety really is. Not to mention the fact that it sets up so much potential for later books to develop on her precarious political situation and run with it.

I am guessing this is the first book in the series - it certainly ends with her promising to change things (and it's also marketed as a romantasy but only has one moment of romance which doesn't come to a conclusion.) There is certainly plenty of potential for this to have follow ups as Kalothia tries to take the country in hand.
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172 reviews12 followers
January 26, 2024
I'm going to round up to 3 because this is a first novel and it's not bad but there are some....things.

Let's just take this bit from the blurb: A fast-paced, romantic and feminist YA fantasy full of danger and courtly intrigue.

Fast-paced is not wrong. The whole thing seems to happen in the course of about three weeks I think? The pacing just felt off. This girl was raised for 16-years in a forest but is ousted dramatically by assassins, who kill everyone that has looked after her, and means she has to flee to the capital. (That's not a spoiler, it's literally in the blurb.) My issue is, for an extremely sheltered young woman, she recovers from this pretty fast. Sure, she cracks a few times but once she's in the royal court, she's so focused on finding the killers that it feels just unrealistic in terms of pacing and character development. Obviously I don't expect pages and pages of grieving but it just sort of became like a footnote in her motivations in the court.

I'll add to that, this sudden "I have to do this to make things better for every woman in Galla." Admirable but again just not well presented. We're beaten over the head with the whole 'women are inferior' thing, which is wild since they worship a goddess but at least that's kind of addressed to a point, so it's like you can't forget that 'Oh btw, women don't have it good in this world but our 16-year-old MC has it covered. Don't worry.'

And she's just good at everything. Suddenly scaling palace walls? Well she climbed trees in the forest. I'm not an architect or engineer but those don't seem to be indistinguishable structures.

The big reveal wasn't particularly dramatic but that's fine. Not everything has to be jaw dropping revelations. But it was fairly telegraphed. There was definitely a minute in everything where I said to myself, "I don't entirely know why but he did it." And sure enough there we were. My big complaint with it was it happened quickly with the confrontation and resolution. This goes back to the pacing issue.

It's not a bad book by any means, it is just very simplistic. I'd argue it's more suited to younger readers in the MG area if we're using traditional publishing labels for this, or even really, really early YA readers.

(As a side tangent: Vervet monkeys do not mewl. They don't headbutt nuzzle and given their size, the MC would need very large shoulders to hold up an adult vervet monkey that are 3-5kg and 40-60cm.)
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November 22, 2023
3.5 Stars. While it’s refreshing to sit down with a fantasy that isn’t an overstuffed eight hundred page commitment, there were moments here that I wished had been expanded upon, such as the quest Kalothia is sent on, which zipped along faster than I thought it maybe should have, and I also wished this had gone a little more descriptive with the setting as well as the cultural aspects, especially since it’s noted that this was in part inspired by the author’s Nigerian roots, a place and people I’m curious to know more about.

Although I didn’t mind their chemistry, the pacing of the romance didn’t quite work for me, between Kalothia somewhat understandably hung up on animosity towards her love interest for much of the book, and that love interest being a less than stellar communicator for much of that time, too, it left me wanting a few more moments of them genuinely connecting.

As for something I outright loved, Ye Ye, Kalothia’s pet monkey topped the list, I adored this mischevious, smart, loyal little guy.

I also thought Kalothia made for a good heroine. I’m not a big fan of books where someone’s immediately skilled at something they’ve never done before, so I liked that it’s immediately established that Kalothia trained her whole life in physical fighting and she was also taught to take things in intellectually and strategically, so when the circumstances of the story require Kalothia to step up in those areas, you can easily buy in that she can handle herself.

If you’re in the mood for fantasy that moves briskly, this one’s a solid choice with plenty going on storywise, touching on everything from women’s rights to palace intrigue and a murder mystery. As mentioned there were certain things I wanted fleshed out a bit more, but overall it entertained and I’d give the potential sequel a try, I thought this left off in an interesting place for Kalothia (without a cliffhanger).
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September 14, 2023
This book was a delightful African royalty story. There are two main things that I will attempt to analyze from my perspective. I just wanted to reiterate this is from my perspective. The first theme is the theme of the divine black feminine. In this story, there is a mythological, religious system by a divine black woman. This Goddess is prayed to; she has parishioners, and she has temples. She has a religious system dedicated to her, which I like to see emphasized in literature. I think that this is a positive attribute to have in the story because it shows that black women can be divine. They have power; they can facilitate change, not only in the secular world but in the spiritual world, and they can lead people to make the right decisions.

The second attribute that I recognized was the theme of family. It was sad that her parents, unfortunately, had to leave the kingdom that they were part of because they were targets. She had a family with her aunt and teacher that was rarely important for her foundation and her upbringing in regards to being a warrior princess and also about staying connected with the Goddess; it does play out differently in the story, which I won’t view what happens to her parents really, but I like the emphasis of really having a tight family network to, take growth and prosperity in life.

Overall, I enjoyed the book. I enjoyed Kalothia’s character. The book was action-packed from the beginning, with her being trained literally as a warrior. She asserted herself from the start, fighting for herself, her family, and her kingdom. I am excited to see the next steps of her development in this series. Thank you, @hearourvoicestours and Shade Lapite, for letting me participate in this tour.
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