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In the Shadow of Lightning

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From Brian McClellan, author of The Powder Mage trilogy, comes the first novel in the Glass Immortals series, In the Shadow of Lightning , an epic fantasy where magic is a finite resource―and it’s running out.

"Excellent worldbuilding and a truly epic narrative combine into Brian's finest work to date. Heartily recommended to anyone who wants a new favorite fantasy series to read."―Brandon Sanderson

Demir Grappo is an outcast―he fled a life of wealth and power, abandoning his responsibilities as a general, a governor, and a son. Now he will live out his days as a grifter, rootless, and alone. But when his mother is brutally murdered, Demir must return from exile to claim his seat at the head of the family and uncover the truth that got her the very power that keeps civilization turning, godglass, is running out.

Now, Demir must find allies, old friends and rivals alike, confront the powerful guild-families who are only interested in making the most of the scraps left at the table and uncover the invisible hand that threatens the Empire. A war is coming, a war unlike any other. And Demir and his ragtag group of outcasts are the only thing that stands in the way of the end of life as the world knows it.

"Powerful rival families, murderous conspiracies, epic battles, larger-than-life characters, and magic."―Fonda Lee, author of The Green Bone Saga

"Engaging, fast-paced and epic."―James Islington, author of In The Shadow of What Was Lost

"Clever, fun, and by turns beautifully bloody, In the Shadow of Lightning hits like a bolt through a stained glass window."―Megan E. O'Keefe, author of Chaos Vector

576 pages, Hardcover

First published June 21, 2022

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Brian McClellan

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Brian McClellan is an American epic fantasy author from Cleveland, Ohio. He is known for his acclaimed Powder Mage Universe and essays on the life and business of being a writer.

Brian now lives on the side of a mountain in Utah with his wife, Michele, where he writes books and nurses a crippling video game addiction.

Brian's novels include the Powder Mage Trilogy (Promise of Blood, The Crimson Campaign, and The Autumn Republic), Gods of Blood and Powder (Sins of Empire, Wrath of Empire, and Blood of Empire), and Valkyrie Collections (Uncanny Collateral)

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750 reviews54.8k followers
November 9, 2023
ARC was provided by the publisher—Tor Books—in exchange for an honest review.

Brian McClellan’s return to the epic fantasy scene is a good one, but it didn’t feel as explosive as his Powder Mage universe.

In the Shadow of Lightning, the first book in The Glass Immortal series, was one of my most anticipated releases of 2022. It has been three years since Brian McClellan concluded his Powder Mage universe series with Blood of Empire, the third and final book in his God of Blood and Powder trilogy. I have read the entirety of the Powder Mage universe, and since then, I have wondered what kind of series and world will McClellan create next. When I saw the cover art to In the Shadow of Lightning being revealed, the illustration done by Dan Burgess, my interest in it was sparked immediately. Plus, Brandon Sanderson, Fonda Lee, and James Islington (all three are some of my favorite authors) gave their praises for this book made me even more excited to read this. Sanderson even said this is McClellan’s best work to date! Unfortunately, I have to disagree with him. The book didn’t click as much as I expected it would.

The novel started with a super powerful prologue, and I was feeling incredibly positive that this would indeed be McClellan’s best book so far. But the compelling charm of the story seems to decrease quickly after the first 15% of the book. Demir Grappo is an outcast by choice—he fled a life of wealth and power, abandoning his responsibilities as a general, a governor, and a son. Now he will live out his days as a grifter, rootless, and alone. But nine years later, this is within the first two chapters by the way, when his mother is brutally murdered, Demir must return from exile to claim his seat at the head of the family and uncover the truth that got her killed. Demir must also find allies to help him accomplish this mission. As you can probably guess, a murder mystery is one of the main driving forces of the narrative. And was it done well? In my opinion, yes and no.

Here is my gripe with In the Shadow of Lightning. Everything just felt... okay. None of the stories, characters, or world-building, ever felt like they were poorly done. However, there was also nothing special about them. Outside of his urban fantasy novellas, McClellan has taken a break from traditional publishing for three years, I expected more out of him. And to put it simply, the biggest issue with this book is that the POV characters just felt so... okay. Again, they were there for the plot to move, but that's about it. I never felt invested in any of the character journeys. There were no characters I felt interested enough to read about like Taniel, Ka-poel, or Ben Stykes from his Powder Mage universe. Baby Montego was the only one that I felt was great. I personally felt like the writing in this book tends to be put aside too quickly to my liking. For example, as I said earlier, the event in the prologue plunged Demir into becoming an outcast. The assassination of his mother's understandably brought him back. But I never felt like he was truly remorseful or regretful about what happened nine years ago as he did in the prologue. Suddenly, he's back in charge, and everything just moves smoothly because of his intellect and power. This is just one example out of many instances in this book.

The world-building and actions were the best parts of the book for me. The world in this novel still felt similar to the industrialized/flintlock setting of The Powder Mage universe. And the hard magic system, godglass, was reminiscent of Allomancy from Sanderson's Mistborn. There are many types of godglass, and each godglass brought out different capabilities and power from its user: glassdancer. The creation and the usage of godglass were sections I highly enjoyed reading in this book. But then again, as I said, it felt like all the good things in this book never elevated to something more. In the Shadow of Lightning seems like a book that would be more enjoyable for those who haven't read many epic fantasy books yet.

This review is shorter than my usual reviews, but I really have nothing to add than to repeat what I said at the beginning of this review. In the Shadow of Lightning is a good start to The Glass Immortal series. Although the second half of the novel did show potential for the sequels to be better, due to my lack of investment in the characters and the gigantic number of books on my TBR pile, I doubt I will be continuing with the series anytime soon. Do remember, however, that I wasn't too much of a fan of Blood of Empire by McClellan, too, so there is always the possibility that I am on the unpopular side again. If you are a fan of Brian McClellan's book, do not let my review sway you from giving this a try.

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September 12, 2022
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Exciting start to a new epic urban fantasy that largely succeeds at setting up the broader story.

As an avid fan of Brian McClellan's previous works set in The Powder Mage universe, I was extremely excited to read his new foray into epic fantasy.  By and large I thoroughly enjoyed my reading experience, and it definitely goes down as one of the best 2022 releases I have read.

The story feels unique and fresh, the world is well crafted, and the magic system - while a bit similar to some others I have read - was enjoyable.  I think it sets a good framework for future books to come in and really expand this story, and definitely look forward to the next book coming out.

I was a bit disappointed at how black/white the story was here, and while I recognize this is a cognizant choice on the authors part, I prefer a bit more grey to my characters.  I also kept on wishing that it would emulate more of what made the original Powder Mage trilogy so good, which was that true epic style large fantasy world, but what I got was more similar to the second trilogy in that universe (Gods of Blood and Powder) which was more of a fantasy mystery book.

Story: 4/5

Importantly, the story is engaging from start to finish and the pacing feels well done.  In general, the story on the grander scale without spoiling things involved a world dependent on magical substances that are slowly running out of supply - a political assassination by unknown assailants - and a war between neighboring cities.  There is heavy political intrigue, and a fun unravelling of the mysteries that surround these concepts.  

It's nothing really groundbreaking, but is consistently fun to read about.

World Building: 4/5

The world gets fleshed out rather quickly here, and while it doesn't cover a particularly enormous scope, the areas that are covered are very well done and feel life-like.  The author does a great job explaining things so that you can mentally draw a great picture of the events that are unfolding, and how this all takes place within the larger world.  Again, it's definitely not the most intriguing world ever crafted, but it is good enough to keep the reader entranced and unique.

Fantasy Elements: 4/5

The magic system in this book, while fun, feels extremely similar to some other systems - most notably Mistborn.  There are different types of glass that can give characters who use it temporary superpowers like enhanced strength, healing, etc.  It keeps the plot moving in fun ways, but just doesn't feel terribly unique.
There are also extremely unexpected creatures that appear later in the book that end up giving a strangely horror aspect to this book that was appreciated even though there was zero leadup to it.

Characters: 4/5

I really like the main characters in this book, they are compelling and easy to root for.  I enjoy the dynamics between the different combinations of main characters when they are around each other.  Unfortunately, I really felt like the author missed the mark by not including some main characters on the other side of this conflict.  It just unnecessarily makes the reader not able to connect with both sides of this story, and gives it too much of a good vs. evil vibe, which lacks the depth one would commonly expect from an epic fantasy.

Writing Style: 3/5

The writing style is decent, but definitely nothing to be truly memorable.  The prose is pedestrian, and just doesn't quite feel like it's to the normally higher standard I would associate with this author.
I also had a problem with how the main love interest is portrayed in this book - it feels very YA, and just made me eye roll at how predictable it was and just not really fitting with reality.  

Enjoyment: 4/5

I really enjoyed my reading experience here and am excited to keep reading the series.  I felt like this book was extremely fun towards the beginning of the book, but just didn't develop into a 5/5 as the book progressed.  Still a fun read, and I'm hoping the next book takes it up to the level that I know this author is capable of.

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3,609 reviews11.1k followers
October 7, 2022
*Thank you Julia/Tor for a physical copy of this book!!! ** Gah, I’ve had it since May and it took me until October to get to it. I waited until the library had the audio.

I did enjoy the book. I’m not sure if it was my mood or something else but I did skim through some of it. I feel like it was my mood as I did enjoy the story and the audible narration. With all of this in mind, I’ll have to think if I want to get the hardback in a sale (I don’t keep physical arcs) or just collect the trilogy in a kindle sale. Probably the sale in kindle like I did with his first trilogy. I do own his second trilogy in paperback as I enjoyed it more. Decisions decisions.

The characters in this book and the world building were very good!

Mel 🖤🐶🐺🐾




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June 21, 2022
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In the Shadow of Lightning is one of the most unconventional fantasy books I’ve read in a while.

There are a lot of weird components that probably shouldn’t work, but somehow McClellan managed to weave them all together in a (mostly) seamless manner. Truth be told, it’s a bit more bizarre than I usually prefer. I’m not sure I would’ve given the benefit of the doubt had it been from any other author. But seeing as both Powder Mage trilogies are among my all-time favorites, I went in with a huge level of trust that McClellan would be able to deliver. Thank goodness he did, in flying colors (or glass shards, as the case may be).

My favorite thing about the book was the magic system. Magic-forged glass of varying colors, each type offering a different benefit to the user. It went into some good details on how the glass was created and used, which were among the best parts of the story for me – I love reading about people who are exceptional in their field of work. I also really enjoyed seeing the magic used in the many hand-to-hand combat scenes. Really cool.

The only element that didn’t quite land for me was the mystery. Have y’all ever read those Nancy Drew / Hardy Boys mash-up novels where the plot and mystery are much more exciting than either ND or HB on their own… but they’re still kids books and you can totally see the formula for the mystery where the breadcrumbs are all in a neat little row for them to follow? That’s how the mystery in this book came across to me. I gave it the benefit of the doubt from the beginning to see how it would develop and unfortunately had everything figured out hundreds of pages before I think I was supposed to. Oh well.

Lackluster mystery aside, at least I enjoyed the characters enough to go through the motions with them. There were several POVs, and all of them added a different flavor to the story. I’d be hard-pressed to pick a favorite, as they all contributed in a meaningful way towards the bottom-line and I liked them all. One of my favorite things about McClellan’s writing in the PM trilogies was how he was able to create such deep connections between characters. It’s one of the best examples of amazing character work that I’ve ever read, and a huge part of why he’s one of my top authors. I saw a bit of that brilliance peek through here and there in this story, but not to the degree I was expecting. I’m hoping for a bit more in the second book, as I will definitely be reading on. No spoilers, obviously, but he dropped a bomb (figuratively) in the epilogue that had me going… “wth did I just read?!” So now I really need to get my hands on the next one.

Recommendations: this is an incredibly creative and original fantasy that has the power to jolt (pun) anyone out of a reading rut. Truthfully, I don’t think I would’ve been quite so accepting of the wild ideas if the author hadn’t already established my trust in the Powder Mage trilogies. So proceed with caution if this is your first McClellan. While wildly entertaining, it didn’t strike the same chord with me as other works have. At least not yet… the series is young.

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Other books you might like:
Promise of Blood (Powder Mage, #1) by Brian McClellan Foundryside by Robert Jackson Bennett The Kingdom of Liars (The Legacy of the Mercenary Kings #1) by Nick Martell The Legend of Eli Monpress (The Legend of Eli Monpress, #1-3) by Rachel Aaron The Final Empire (Mistborn, #1) by Brandon Sanderson
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2,659 reviews4,093 followers
July 8, 2022
4.0 Stars
This was such an enjoyable start to a new epic fantasy series. I really enjoy Hard Magic Systems so this book was right up my alley.

As a student of Brandon Sanderson, this author is also known for writing similar concrete rules to how the world and magic work. The prose, story and character perspective were all quite strong. The plot was perhaps not especially new or unique but I felt it was well executed. I have never read Brian McClellan's work before but I am definitely interested in reading more.

I would highly recommend this fantasy novel to anyone looking for a solid new fantasy story with a fantastic magic system.

Disclaimer I received a copy of this book from the publisher.
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June 10, 2022
4 of 5 stars at The BiblioSanctum https://bibliosanctum.com/2022/06/07/...

In the first epic fantasy by Brian McClellan since his Powder Mage series of novels concluded, In the Shadow of Lightning begins a new adventure in the world of the Glass Immortals, a universe featuring magic powered by colorful forged godglass. We begin with a miscommunication—one that leads to massacre and the ruination of a military rising star’s career. Nine years later, Demir Grappo is a disgraced outcast, but when the news of his mother’s death reaches him, he returns to the capital to uncover the truth behind her killing.

But untangling this mystery won’t be easy. Demir has been gone too long, and is unfamiliar with the city’s politics. He hires a dear friend, Kizzie, to help him in his investigation. In the process of hunting his mother’s murderer, he also tracks down a siliceer, someone who can forge godglass. Not only is Thessa one hell of a glass smith, she is also a great scientific mind with many projects going, and one of the most disturbing developments she is studying is the depletion of raw materials used to create godglass. As Thessa scrambles to build a device capable of recharging used glass, Demir and Kizzie find more allies to aid them in their mission to unravel a plot that runs deeper than all of them imagined.

In the Shadow of Lightning is an incredibly unique and imaginative novel—but I wouldn’t have expected anything less from the author. I was definitely impressed with the world-building and this new magical system based around godglass. If you’re familiar with McClellan’s Powder Mage series, or even his mentor Brandon Sanderson’s work, you’d probably have some idea what it might be like, but at the same time, it’ll also be completely different than anything you’ve ever read. Depending on the type of Godglass, magic users called glassdancers can manifest various abilities by tapping into their power. If you’re thinking this sounds a little like Mistborn’s Allomancy, that thought had occurred to me as well.

Then there are the characters. Out of this relatively large cast, Demir is the closest we have to a protagonist. From the beginning, he made for a powerfully sympathetic figure. A general who walked away from a life of privilege to become a vagabond, he is forced to return to his roots and reclaim his seat at the head of his family following his mother’s death. He is the reluctant hero, and wears that mantle well. The supporting cast was also very compelling, including a couple of strong female leads who play important, memorable roles in the story. A bit of comic relief is also supplied by Baby Montego, a famous fighter who is just so out there that you can’t help but find his bravado and antics endearing. In fact, I found the many moments of levity quite surprising, given how many of the characters came from tragic and/or dark backgrounds.

Still, a lot of the backstories and character flaws come across as a bit cliched. Granted, I think it would help ease a new reader into the plot and settle in more comfortably, given how much there is to take in. The plot slowed considerably after the first few chapters, as the author shifted gears towards more explanation and world-building, resulting in a mystery that was more slow-burn and going nowhere fast. Luckily, we started easing off the brakes again once we hit the second half, and with the introduction of some of the more, er, monstrous elements of the story, I found the last sections of the book really hard to put down.

All in all, I enjoyed In the Shadow of Lightning. In some ways it was pure Brian McClellan, but it also held a lot of surprises, and alas, some disappointments as well. That said, I don’t feel discouraged, as this is just the first book of a new series. I remember having similar thoughts after finishing Promise of Blood when it first came out, feeling excited despite having some doubts, but knowing deep down it was the start of something special. I’m confident we’re building up to something great here as well, and I look forward to diving deeper into the rest of the series.
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June 14, 2022
This book is unfortunately a DNF at 25%.

The deck was stacked against this book with all the people I know who also got approved for an eARC either not really enjoying it or DNFing. I cannot pretend that I exist in a vacuum where I wasn't aware of that, and it for sure had an impact on my reading experience. And I also didn't get very far, and nothing about the book struck me as bad or egregiously done, so I cannot say I do not recommend the book. Perhaps its great. Maybe in a while from now I will try this again and be head over heels. Unfortunately, though, the reality currently is that I have spent 14 days trying to read this book and failing. In 14 days I should finish any audiobook of this length. And I just kept stopping and doing something else. Nothing about the book was sucking me in.

The magic seems incredibly similar to Allomancy from Mistborn, but without the narrative giving you enough explanation of what each type of godglass does, at least early on. I'm told there is a list in the physical version, but in the audiobook I was mostly trying to assess why something mattered and what it did. The book is primarily a murder mystery/detective novel with some elements of rebellion in the background, but I did not care about any of it. The characters did nothing to stick out to me so far. Again, none of these elements were bad. They just weren't captivating for me personally, either. I've heard very mixed things about Powder Mage as well, and this book certainly has scared me off of McClellan for awhile, at least.

Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for a copy in exchange for an honest review.
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Author 6 books492 followers
May 17, 2023
It has been 7 years since I read the Powdermage trilogy, and this is my first foray back into McClellan. Once again, I thoroughly enjoyed his work.

In the Shadow of Lightning is an easy read with a clear destination that takes a surprising turn toward the end. Not the ending itself—that was everything you expected it to be, in a good way—but the direction of the world and series. There is a lot to enjoy about this book, but it is the promise of where the series is headed that excites me the most.

My favorite parts of this book were the pacing and the magic. Once again, McClellan has created a fully fleshed out magic system that interacts gracefully with the world, cultures, and economics. It's also just super cool, which, honestly, is also important. As an author, I found myself feeling similar pangs of jealousy as when I read Jade City, wishing I'd come up with it! And for the pacing, this really just kept me engaged throughout with the mysteries, investigations, engineering, and more.

While there were a few beautiful moments between characters, I do think that those readers looking for more character-driven books will find this one lacking. For me, I liked each of the characters and enjoyed this quite thoroughly.
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March 23, 2022
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Glassdamn! This was a fantastic read! As a Brian McClellan virgin, I wasn’t really sure what to expect from this first book in his new series, or from him as a writer in general, but the sci-fi / fantasy nerd in me was definitely not disappointed!

This bad boy took me about 5 days to read, which is much longer than I will typically allow any single book to take me under for, but the book hangover is real!!! I’m a sucker for intense worldbuilding, ragtag groups of underdogs, coinciding timelines, and a bit of romance. This book had all of these things in spades!

What I liked about the book:
1. The worldbuilding was so well thought out and fantastical. There are several ongoing, linked storylines going at once, but they are done so well you don’t get confused by the jumps between characters.

Some things to expect while reading:

• A secret society that is particularly closed off to outsiders, but is down with the Assembly…

• Devia Kerite, aka the Purnian Dragon. The greatest battlefield commander in the world

• 1 traitor…2 traitor…3 traitor…GORE!

• A return to the battlefield

• Back-to-the-Future-style lighting powers
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• A priest of Horuthe, a prominent death god

• Cthulhu-style monsters!

2. With worldbuilding and interconnected timelines this intense, the characters also have to be solid. I love a good ragtag, underdog team story and this one had all the great elements of that.

Demir – I love how he have no intention of following tradition or the thoughts of the Assembly, he just wants to make the best life possible for his people. That is a true leader!

“The greater guild-families had tried to push him around when he was a young politician. They hadn’t succeeded then because he could outthink them. They wouldn’t success now because he had proper steel in his spine.”

With that said, he is definitely a flawed hero. He is cocky and arrogant at times, as well as plagued by deep self-doubt and PTSD because of the events of Holikan. He has this constant thought of wanting to abandon ship again when the going gets tough. Fortunately, he sticks it out and ends up finding himself / finding clarity on the battlefield again. He gets rid of his crutch on glass, thinks up something masterful without the use of witglass, and joins his soldiers in the melee like the great leader we know he can be.
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Thessa – I love that she is so f*cking brilliant!!! She is the true master!

Not only does she do a bunch of sh*t that no other siliceers have been able to do, but SHE SAVES HIM! I love a good the-girl-saves-the-guy storyline.
YES

I also love that she is kind to everyone she meets, but she is not weak.

“Do not mistake my compassion for weakness. If you whisper a word…you will have an accident. You might lose an eye, or a hand, or get locked in a furnace when no one can hear your screams. Test me, and you will lose bits of you. That’s a promise.” – Damn! Thessa is not playing around!

Like Demir, she is flawed for sure. She jumps to a lot of conclusions, especially with Demir, and she tends to not think things through fully. Both of these can get her in a lot of trouble if she isn’t careful…Also, what the hell is with the “I could be Lady Grappo”-sh*t? Girl, you haven’t even slept with him, tone it down a bit until you find out if every bit of him is magical.

Kizzie – God, I f*cking love Kizzie. That’s what’s going to make my assumptions going into book 2 hurt so bad.

I love how much of a total fighter she is, metaphorically and physically. As the bastard Vorcien, she definitely gets dealt low blows that she constantly has to rise against. She hunts down weak links like Magnum PI, fights like Elektra, and solves riddles like Alan Turing. She is basically the older sister I always wanted.

Idrian – I really love the harshness that Idrian and his viewpoint brings to the table. We see Idrian having to react mostly to battlefield and mental strategy situations, and the dude is FIT!...except the whole thing about hearing voices and whatnot…BUT OTHERWISE, HE IS FIT! He is the heart and soul of his warrior group, the Ironhorns, and a real key player throughout the book.

I’m so sad for him because of his abusive past and how he won’t allow himself to get close to anyone. I mean, I get it, but still….

“As was his habit, he would bury his feelings until the end of the conflict, at which time he would properly grieve.” – Awwww, boo!

However, I will say, as much as he tries to shut himself off from people, he can’t help but jump in wherever help is needed and put his life on the line in front of others.

I love his relationship with Braileer, his vastly underqualified armorer who he wants to fire for the first week he knows him. Once Braileer shows that he will not leave Idrian’s side, even in intense battle, Idrian knows that he will not dismiss him despite his greenness. Because of this, and despite Idrian’s tendency to shut himself off from people, they grow close. In fact, there comes a pivotal moment towards the end of the book where Idrian makes a personal sacrifice for Braileer. Let’s hope that one works out!

Also…ok…I’m just going to throw this out there. Idrian gives off major dom vibes which I’m totally ok with.

Basically,
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Baby Montego – aka Demir’s adopted brother / best friend. Aka Kizzie’s childhood sweetheart. Aka world cudgeling champion.

Cudgeling – the national sport of the Empire. “Two contestants in the arena wore powerful foregeglass earrings to make them stronger and faster, and then beat the shit out of each other with weighted sticks until one of them forfeited. Or died.”

Dude is a beast! There is no other word for him. He is a normal person who scares people more than a glassdancer, which is badass. I wish we had more of him, but I have hope for this going into book 2!

3. This book really has so many great lines.

“Madness and greatness are separated only by the degree of success.” – Fact

“He’s said a lot of good things about you.” “That’s because he has a very poor judgment of character.” – Self-doubt is a b*tch.

“Purpose – not just pursuit of wealth or fame or sex or revenge but real purpose – had been thrust upon him.”- Yay! I love when the hero finds his/her purpose!

“Your optimism is foolhardy.” “And your despair is pointless.” – Only a brother can throw this kind of shade at you and get away with it.

“Remember, Demir, you can’t conquer your enemies until you conquer yourself.” – I tell myself this every day.

“The more you know, the better you can plan. Primary plans, secondary plans, tertiary plans. Plans for failed plans. Plans for the failed plans of failed plans. Information is not just useful, it is everything.” – Oh geez, this hits way too close to home.

“Don’t die. I’m starting to like you.” – Dawwww, Idrian <3

“You’re far too wise for your age.” “And you’re far too haunted for yours.” – Oh my god, age-gap romance! This is the start people!!!

“You are sending me to fail.” “Others would fail worse.” – Thanks for the vote of confidence, bro.

Why I knocked half a star off my rating:
1. This was super long. I should have known better when I saw that page count. It’s really not Brian’s fault. It’s not you, it’s me.

Assumptions going into book 2:
1. Baby Montego and Kizzie will get that tea date.

2. Thessa and Demir will definitely…(what’s the equivalent of Netflix and chill here?)…tempt fate and copulate? Eh, you get the gist.

3. Volos (hidden gem / reference for those who read the book!) actually is good and will probably die because of that.

4. I don’t think we’ve seen the last of Devia Kerite.

5. We definitely haven’t seen the worst of Papa Vorcien.

6. Please, Kizzie, don’t do it…I have minimal faith you won’t, but there is faith nonetheless.

7. I don’t think Braileer is going to play his fiddle anymore…

8. Idrian, I swear to god, I have a really bad feeling you are going to get hurt and it just might break me.

9. Godglass is the only glass a glassdancer cannot manipulate. So, that’s probably going to come back as a common theme for problems going forward.

10. That little girl Demir held in Holikan…yeah, I bet she’s Thessa’s little sister.

Special thank you to NetGalley, Macmillan-Tor/Forge, and Brian McClellan! I am leaving my review voluntarily.

4.5 stars!
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2,172 reviews1,742 followers
February 28, 2023
This is the first instalment in the Glass Immortals series.

The powerful guild-families seem untouchable until one of them is murdered and the hunt for who is responsible begins. With the elite turning on each other, old faces returning to their old positions, and magic's supposedly infinite source turning out to be quite the opposite, each individual soon finds they must look for allies in unlikely places or stand alone and face the enemies approaching them from all angles.

I initially adored everything about this novel. The world was unique and yet not too dissimilar to other fantastical settings that I have read about, so easy to immerse one's self in. The characters were varied and nuanced, meaning I got a feel for their distinct personalities, easyily and immediately. The magic system was well-constructed and the panic surrounding it easily felt by the readers. And, finally, the murder that formed the primary focus for the novel added thrills, chills, and tension to the proceedings.

As the storyline progressed, however, I found small sections to feel a little stagnant. Perhaps the abundance of characters meant that not all could have action-orientated narratives or that this novel needed time to build for the latter books in the series. Either way, I lost a small portion of my initial love but closed the novel very satisfied with all I read and eager for the following instalments.

I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Thank you to the author, Brian McClellan, and the publisher, Tor Books, for this opportunity.
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January 8, 2020
Cons: Not related to the Powder Mage universe. Pros: It's Brian McClellan.

If Glass Immortals has as much political intrigue and epic battle sequences as The Powder Mage Trilogy and the Gods of Blood and Powder Trilogy, I'm a happy man.
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2,653 reviews4,352 followers
July 31, 2022
3.5 stars rounded up

The first in a new fantasy series, In the Shadow of Lightning is a multi-POV fantasy novel with a hard magic system, set in a moment of political conspiracy and upheaval. It has a strong start, and a strong finish, but it definitely lags through the middle and did not need to be 550 pages.

In this world, glass can be imbued with different powers that the wearer can use. But the catalyst for making this glass is a limited resource and it's running out. Political factions divided into houses are plotting against each other and racing to control access to glass. A war is brewing, and sightings of strange monsters seem like a figment of imagination, but are they really?

The central mystery tying the plot together is the murder of a house matriarch. Her estranged son returns home to investigate and becomes involved in a sprawling web of violence, deception, and power. There are some romantic elements, and interesting twists toward the end.

Overall, I had a good time with this book. But it definitely feels bloated through the middle, dragging on the pacing and not giving us enough depth in the characterization. The last 150 pages had me riveted though, and also included more real moments with characters that made me care about them. I would be interested in trying the next book in the series to see where things go. I received a copy of this book for review from the publisher, all opinions are my own.
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292 reviews91 followers
April 19, 2022
I received this book for free from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

In the Shadow of Lightning is the first work I’ve read by Brian McCellan. I picked up this book after reading the blurb from Brandon Sanderson, who recommended it to anyone looking for a “new favorite fantasy series.” Unfortunately, In the Shadow of Lightningwas not my new favorite series by any stretch. Though the novel had really interesting premises, like glass known as “godglass” that grants the bearer special abilities, I really didn’t care for the writing style or most of the characters.

The biggest hurdle for me in reading In the Shadow of Lightning was the writing style. I found the dialogue to be incredibly cheesy and like everyone delivering those unbelievable lines was simply trying too hard to be cool. I perhaps could have gotten over this cringe-inducing dialogue, if it weren’t that on top of it, everything is simply told to readers. Characters even talk to themselves to make their feelings even more abundantly clear than they already are, rather than them being hinted at or shown through actions. There is absolutely no subtlety whatsoever. What’s worse, is that events in In the Shadow of Lightning happen far too quickly. Conflicts, reveals, and reconciliations are never given any time to sink in, which ultimately robs these situations of any gravity.

‘“I am the greatest killer in this world,’ he declared, his voice rising as he spoke, his eyes taking on a terrifying fire. ‘I will not concede that title to a freak from an adventure novel. I am Baby Montego!’ He was roaring at the door now, shoulders thrown back, chest thrust out. ‘You hear that, Tall Man? I am Montego, and I will end you.’”


The previous quote gave me strong, “My name is Inigo Monoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die,” vibes, but without all that essential irony and humor of The Princess Bride. In the Shadow of Lightning is regrettably 100% serious with lines such as these, and they are unfortunately frequent. It doesn’t help matters that characters love referring to themselves as their titles, like the Lightning Prince. Other characters sincerely refer to people beneath their class or rank as "insignificant ants" and I wonder how I am supposed to believe anyone actually speaks this way.

The characters for me were similarly shallow. Though I enjoyed reading from the perspective of a female enforcer named Kizzie the most, I found that all of the characters, including her, were more examples of archetypes and tropes than actual developed characters. For instance, main protagonist Denmir is the former prodigal son of a powerful guild family who returns home for vengeance after running from his previous disgrace. Kizzie is the bastard daughter of a guild family who isn’t afraid to get her hands dirty, despite hating to lie, and not-so-secretly longs to be recognized as a legitimate member of the family. Thessa is an orphan from nowhere with a tragic past that is perhaps the greatest siliceer (godglass smith) to ever live and coincidentally, perfectly suited to help Denmir. Indrina is the killing machine who cares more about his fellow soldiers than his own personal well being. All of these characters read more like tropes than actual nuanced characters.

By far my favorite parts of In the Shadow of Lightning were the parts involving the godglass and glassdancers. I found the idea of a glass that granted so many different abilities quite unique. I also really thought glassdancers, mages born with the ability to control glass, (think Magneto from X-Men but with glass and not metal), pretty interesting as well. I think author Brian McCellan did a good job showing the fear and awe with which normal characters regarded glassdancers too.

Though I was also interested in some of the politics and conspiracies between guild families as well, I just could never quite manage to get truly invested in anything going on in the novel. Mysterious monsters appearing and leaving a trail of bodies in their wake? No. Secret organizations sending assassins? No. Denmir being vindicated of his past? No. Betrayal? No. Romantic feelings being acted on? No. It’s a shame, because I think In the Shadow of Lightning had a lot of good ideas, but was really held back by the writing.

Though I enjoyed the ideas of godglass and glassdancers, In the Shadow of Lightning really just wasn’t the book for me and I did consider DNF-ing it multiple times. I think that those that love reading about unique magical systems, political scheming, and battle scenes might enjoy this novel. But personally, I don’t see myself reading future entries in the series.


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1,143 reviews371 followers
December 9, 2022
Demir Grappo was a great man, a young governor, heir to a guild family house, and an excellent military strategist. That all changed when orders were given in his name to destroy a city. Demir broke mentally and fled public life altogether. That all changed when his mother was brutally murdered. Demir was it forced to either let another guild family take over his family or he had to come back to run it. He chose the latter only to find the world truly in disarray and its most valuable resource godglass is running out. Demir has trouble on all sides while he attempts to rescue his guild family, his country, and magic from total devastation.

In the Shadow of Lightning was derivative yet ok. Brian McClellan seemed to largely lean on his initial Powder Mage trilogy for inspiration. There are so many parallels between the two series. Some of which are largely everyday such as mystery and a conspiracy to unfold. Others are far more specific such as magic users with telekinetic control over certain objects. In the Powder Mage trilogy mages could control gun powder, in book one of The Glass Immortals glassdancers control glass to devastating effects. Both series have vague and unknown villains. They also have characters that have missions, but lack personality.

I really didn't appreciate the godglass that the story revolves around. We know it's a magical substance that everyone relies on, but that's all. It hardly seems like the world would collapse without the substance though it would be a difficult adjustment initially. It is also said to help one character in particular to fight his madness. Why? No idea. Because it's magic I guess. The glassdancers don't need godglass for their magic, just glass. So if the godglass disappeared for them it wouldn't impact their magic.

The characters were lacking to me outside of Demir Grappo. Demir is well fleshed out with a clear backstory. He had such pressure on him that when he failed and thousands died he simply couldn't take it. Demir is brilliant yet racked with doubt. Baby Montego was likely the only other character of note but his personality can be summed up in three words: strong, smart, and loyal. Strong probably isn't descriptive enough as he's truly freakishly strong. His physique reminds me of Mad Ben Styke from the Gods of Blood and Power series though he's not nearly as quick to violence.

Unfortunately there were a number of things I didn't enjoy about In the Shadow of Lightning. The main thing remains it's far too similar to the Powder Mage trilogy yet it lacks the character types that made the Powder Mage trilogy a success. I'm not sure I would bother continuing with this series.
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Author 3 books499 followers
July 19, 2022
I loved this book so much I stayed up till the early hours until I finished it. The magic was cool, the bad guys frightening, and our heroes are worth rooting for. Highly recommended
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1,297 reviews232 followers
July 24, 2022
In the Shadow of Lightning is an excellent introduction to McClellan’s new Glass Immortals series. Told from four perspectives, In the Shadow of Lightning is full of magic, politics, and war.

In the Shadow of Lightning has an incredibly interesting magic system. I would describe the magic system as a mix of elements from Sanderson’s Mistborn and Stormlight Archive series. There are different types of glass that give its users different enhancements, however the glass pieces run out of magic and physically affects the users if they’re used too long. Magic systems with limitations and/or consequences are what make a magic system truly great.

As mentioned previously, In the Shadow of Lightning is told from four perspectives: Demir, Kezzie, Thessa, and Idrian.

The novel opens with Demir as he’s at the end of a hard fought and won war campaign against rebels when everything falls apart and he goes into exile before being called back nine years later when his mother is murdered. Demir’s chapters are a mix of political intrigue, mystery, and war all while developing the magic system.

Kezzie is a disgraced bastard desperate to be accepted back into her family when she’s asked by Demir to investigate his mother’s murder.

Thessa’s chapters were my favourite as they were slower paced and focused on the intricacies of the magic system. Thessa is immune to the magic, meaning she’s able to forge the glass pieces that enhance its users.

Idrian’s chapters were my least favourite and the reason I rated the novel four stars instead of five. His chapters were almost solely focused on the war. I’m not a big fan of big battle sequences, however his chapters help lay the groundwork for the end of the novel and the future of the series.


All I’ll say about the ending of the novel is that I absolutely loved it. It sets up what is going to be an excellent series that will surely become a favourite.

Overall, In the Shadow of Lightning is an excellent introduction to the Glass Immortals series featuring an interesting magic system, dynamic political machinations, and well developed characters.
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308 reviews7 followers
July 18, 2022
Excellent! Another promising start to epic fantasy series, with compelling characters and fantastical elements that are somewhat unique to Brian McClellan.
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930 reviews98 followers
December 10, 2023
Very good 4 star book. McClellan seems to be avoiding the complaints I have of other authors (Weeks, Sanderson, etc) in that he isn't rambling on ad nauseum without an editor reigning him in.

This is a new world, new magic system from his Powder Mage and Gods of Blood and Powder series which I loved. It isn't vastly different from his first couple of series, a flintlock fantasy, nations fighting amongst each other. I think I just like how he writes characters. Not overpowered, as my son likes to say, slightly flawed not tragically and generally reasonable. Relationship issues exist because of unavoidable real world problems, not misunderstandings of events.

It started slowly, probably because I felt like I had seen this book one too many times but it fully captured me towards the end. Sadly book two is no where near being published so again, I wait.
If you like McClellen or flintlock you will enjoy this. There isn't much to distinguish this from dozens of others except for the good writing.
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1,087 reviews192 followers
June 18, 2022
Demir Grappo was a successful politician and general, until a misunderstanding led to the slaughter of an entire settlement. Although he wants nothing less than to return from his self-imposed exile, he has no choice when he discovers his mother was murdered during broad daylight. He finds himself thrown again into the world of politics, shadowy puppet masters, and potential war, and must find the allies he needs to discover his mother’s killers and their motives.

This was truly a work of epic proportions. While I do enjoy epic fantasy, I felt that the author tried to include too much into a singular work. The story was told from the POV of Demir, Thessa, Kizzie, and Idrian. While the first three POVs’ plots were interwoven almost from the very beginning, Idrian’s plot started off as separate from them and slowly merged with the other plots. While this added some detailed background concerning the setting and the broader war, it detracted from the main plot of the story. His storyline only really became relevant during the last 30%, and its inclusion before that point unnecessarily slowed the primary plot.

That being said, I enjoyed the characters. I found them to be well written and mostly compelling. I enjoyed Thessa and Demir and loved Kizzie. The author did an excellent job at adding depth to the characters through flaws and independent motivations, though I did feel that there wasn’t much character growth throughout the work. Their POVs were woven together extremely well, complimenting each other and adding to all of the main characters’ storylines in a meaningful way. The characters had deep and meaningful connections to each other, which was a big plus.

The magic system in this world was fascinating, and I enjoyed the information included concerning its manufacture and use. However, there were some pretty big blanks still left concerning it – maybe it will be explored more in the next work. Similarly, the worldbuilding was solid in this work. The author included some decent descriptions of the world; my favorite was the concept of The Forge. I also enjoyed that this world appears to be one that doesn’t suffer from gender inequality – it was fun to read about one of the best generals in this world being a woman, as well as several of the council members being female.

My only real complaint for this work was the inclusion of Idrian’s POV. It did slow the work down, and I found myself impatiently waiting for his chapters to be over so I could get back to the “real” story. It did make the work as a whole slow down significantly.

This is a strong, creative, and original work of fantasy with amazing characters. I’m looking forward to continuing the series.

I received a complimentary copy of this work through NetGalley. All opinions expressed in this review are my own.
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1,459 reviews44 followers
September 21, 2023
Kiedy w ręce wpada mi książka, która już z okładki krzyczy ciekawym systemem magicznym, to mnie od razu świecą się oczy. Tak bardzo podekscytowałam się magią szkła, że kompletnie nie przyszło mi do głowy, że będą inne aspekty, które zachwycą mnie bardziej. Najgorsze jest to, że o tym najważniejszym nie mogę powiedzieć, bo byłby to spoiler. Dla tych, którzy już czytali szepnę tylko, że chodzi mi o plot twist na końcu. I tutaj też od razu mogę napomknąć o ogromnym minusie tej książki - drugiego tomu jeszcze nie ma 😭, a ja chyba pęknę z ciekawości zanim się doczekam. Tym bardziej, że zupełnie nie wiem czego się spodziewać, bo już w pierwszym tomie autor pokazał, że schematów fabularnych nie uznaje.

No dobra, ale o czym jest ta książka? Właściwie można powiedzieć, ze o ratowaniu magii, a co za tym idzie, o ratowaniu świata. I to stanowi tło dla tej ważniejszej warstwy, bo według mnie to bardziej tu chodziło o pojedynczych bohaterów, a wierzcie mi, ci są arcydobrze skonstruowani. To co mnie najbardziej ucieszyło, to że autor nie poszedł w nowoczesne silne kobiece postaci, którym to wszystko wychodzi, bo tak. Tutaj babki są z charakterem, ale też i z wadami. Są świetne w swoim fachu, ale nie są geniuszami z urodzenia.

Gdzieś w połowie książki byłam przekonana, że wiem dokąd to wszystko zmierza. McClellan tak budował fabułę, że - jak mi się wydawało - finał mógł być tylko jeden. I właściwie był, ale tylko po części, bo to, w jakim kierunku zmierza cała seria, to po prostu klękajcie narody! Mówię Wam, możecie główkować tygodniami i nie wymyślicie tego.

Wróćmy jednak na chwilę do magii. Autor stworzył nowy, w pełni rozbudowany system, który nie tylko jest, ale idealnie współgra ze światem, ekonomią i polityką. I za to ja się kłaniam w pas 😊 Plusem jest też to, że jeszcze nie wszystkie karty w tym temacie zostały odkryte i jest na co czekać w kolejnych tomach.

Na koniec dodam jeszcze, że nie jestem fanką scen walk. Tutaj nie było ich wiele (albo raczej nie były długie), za to było sporo strategicznego planowania, a to jest to, co tygryski lubią najbardziej. Momentami miałam wrażenie, że wpadłam do HOMM i będę zaraz walczyć 😊

Krótko mówiąc - czytajcie, bo to jest złoto!
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1,224 reviews493 followers
June 21, 2022
Ahoy there me mateys!  I received this fantasy eARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.  Here be me honest musings . . .

I have only read one novella by the author and I loved it so I was excited to give his longer works a shot.  This is the start of a new fantasy series where the economy is run by glass magic.  It was a decent read for me and I will be reading the next in the series.

The characters were the best thing about the book. Demir (who feels like the main character) was a member of the elite and a promising general before a betrayal broke his mind.  He lives as a self-imposed outcast until his mother's murder brings him back into politics.  Other POV characters include Kizzie (a type of investigator), Tessa (who works with glass magic), and Idrian (a soldier who uses magic).  There is a larger cast portrayed though.  A favorite was Baby Montego who should come across as ridiculous but instead is endearing.  I also enjoyed that men and women are fairly equal in society.  The female characters in this book actually tended to be the more interesting.  None of the characters seemed to have a lot of depth but I was rooting for them.

But while I liked the characters, the rest of the book felt derivative and rather unoriginal.  Not bad per se but not enthralling.  The magic system of using glass felt rather boring overall.  The economy runs on it but I never felt that it was particularly practical or even widespread.  The rich families have a lot but can't use a lot because of the side effects.  The author's idea is that glass making is coming to an end and thus the economy is going to fall apart but I didn't really feel that the world is better off with it or that the stakes of it disappearing would frankly really matter after the initial shock.  The glass certainly didn't seem worth dying for.

The murder mystery of who killed Demir's mother and the other mystery of the secret society were also lackluster.  I didn't feel that there really was a big mystery and watching the characters flail around and make no real progress was frustrating.  And the reveal when it came was rather expected even if the overall why of it hasn't been explained completely yet.  And the bad guys all felt rather one-dimensional.

Also the book felt too long and dragged in many, many places.  I liked individual moments in character stories and the interpersonal relationships but the overall conflict felt cliché and rather short-sighted.  Aye, this book was flawed but I do not regret reading it.  I just think I was expected more given how much the crew loves the Powder Mage trilogy.  Arrrrr!
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1,218 reviews1,218 followers
March 14, 2023
3.5 stars rounded down. I agree with the reviewers - who read the author's Powder Mage trilogy - saying that the book does not live up to the expectation. I think it's bloated, especially in the middle. It does not have to be 570 pages and could have better pacing. It is still readable, but we've been spoiled with the PM series so don't blame us for high standard LOL

Another thing is the characters. In PM, we have Tamas, Taniel, Nila, and the inspector guy. All flawed in their own ways but remained to be very engaging characters. So does in the Gods of Blood and Powder. The POV characters in this novel were not there yet. I liked Kizzie and Idrian, but could not warm up to Demir and Tessa. The first with his tiring 'Lightning Prince' moniker is kinda corny, and the amout of navelgazing among these two were too much. Meanwhile, Tessa is competent in her field as a siliceer and I like it when she's in her nerd mode but the rest was just too YA for me (she's a grown woman).

I think their character development is strange and some of the choices made to describe their relationship did not do the plot any favor. I'd love to have one whole novel about Kizzie being a kickass investigator/enforcer and Idrian with his combat engineer troops. Military fantasy is one of my most fave subgenres anyway, and the Ironhorns have captured my heart. Artilleries traps! Explosions! Exclamation marks!

Anyway, I still enjoyed this novel. I finished the ebook in fewer than three days since I was engrossed with it. My rating is just because I know the author could do better, that's why I cannot wait for the next installment.

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64 reviews9 followers
September 29, 2022
Pues libro terminado.
Es redudante decirlo, pero lo siguiente es obviamente mi opinión personal que puede coincidir por completo, parcialmente o en nada con la que pueda forjarse cualquier otro lector.

No quiero extenderme mucho, así que intentaré ser breve.
En general me ha gustado bastante, tanto a nivel de worldbuilding, a nivel de personajes y a nivel de la historia.
Bajo mi percepción me ha parecido el habitual primer tomo introductorio en el que presentan el tablero de juego, los participantes y el tono que tendrá a grandes rasgos la historia y su trama. Además de un "pequeño" plot twist hacia el último tramo del libro que reconozco no me esperaba pero que luego reflexionando sobre ello, y habiendo leído ya algo de McClellan, tendría que haberlo esperado.
McClellan mueve la historia de In the Shadow of Lightning a través de varios personajes principales: Demir, Idrian, Thessa y Kizzie. Me han encantado los cuatro. Además, hay un buen número de personajes secundarios (como Montego, Tadeas, etc) interesantes que aportan su granito de arena en la trama y la historia, lo cual siempre es de agradecer.

En cuanto a la ambientación, al menos en la parte en la que se centra este primer libro que son dos ciudades (ciudades estado) y las tierras entre ambas, esta cuenta con las habituales reminiscencias propias del género hacia culturas de nuestra historia. Todo en un contexto de cierto desarrollo tecnológico e industrial, bastante similar diría al que plantea en su serie Powder Mage.

Sobre el sistema de magia solo diré que McClellan sigue demostrando que es digno alumno de Sanderson.

Podría extenderme más pero ya entraría en spoilers.

P.D. Lo malo de haberme leído el libro ya es que ha sido novedad este pasado junio así que me toca esperar para poder leer cómo continuará todo.
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June 22, 2022
DNF @ 40%

I received an eARC of this via the publisher and was very much looking forward to it as my first McClellan read. The setting was definitely an interesting one, and I liked the majority of the glass magic. The overall storyline was also mostly quite interesting.

I'm not quite sure what it was but I just couldn't get going with this one. I had genuine interest in what was going on, and wanted to follow what was happening with various characters. The overall package though just didn't grip me for whatever reason, and after only reaching 40% after several weeks of reading, I eventually admitted that it was time to move on.
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737 reviews847 followers
August 26, 2022
This was just fine? There's nothing inherently wrong with it; nothing I really hated or didn't like, but there is also nothing that super worked for me either. All of the characters felt like they were just there to move the plot and were as flat as a cardboard box until about 80% of the way in. This might be okay, but the plot was just too drawn out and simply okay to me. I loved the magic system that is a mix of Jade City and Mistborn. Sadly, we really don't get much of the magic. We TALK about it a lot, but we don't see it used much. I wanted to love this, and I've heard good things about Powder Mage, but this was just okay for me.
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328 reviews190 followers
July 5, 2024
“I’m going to go stress-shit my brains out,” he said to the empty hall. “Then I’m going to take command of the Foreign Legion and pit myself against the world’s greatest strategist. This’ll be fun.”


I had an absolute blast reading it. Oddly enough, it gave me the same vibe that I had while reading Six Of Crows. Maybe it was the multiple POV aspect of it, where each piece was set in motion towards a common goal by a grandmaster.

“If you live to see tomorrow, you will regret it.”
“I’ve regretted living for a new sunrise for nine years. Why should tomorrow be any different?”


The book had it‘s strength and its weaknesses. One of the best aspect were the fight sequences, the one-on-one fights, the rough street style brawls, duels, armies battling at the front, the political butt heading between Demir and Kerite. Had such a fun time reading through it. My favourite part definitely has to be both how Demir’s character was presented as well as the character he was struggling to become. I would have loved if instead of repeating multiple times about what a prodigy Demir was in the past, maybe if we had been shown it through flashbacks or anecdotes, I would have loved him more. (That in no way says I don’t believe he is a prodigy. Loved his mental tactics. Even loved how he did lose his bearings at one point.) There were a lot of cool moment with him at the centre. Im curious to follow his character arc further now that he’s gained his confidence.

“We have all failed at times, but failure has not kept us down. We rebound stronger than before. My friends, prove yourselves to me and I swear to you that I will prove myself to you.”

I really enjoyed the other characters POV too. Idrian and his army life threw in a different perspective to the story. I think the mental health rep along with the disability rep was done well. Kizzie and the mystery aspect was handled really well too. I was equally invested in her detective parts as I was in the battles and politics. I would have liked it better if the solution to it wasn’t just that. The only POV that didn’t intrigue me as much was Thessa’s. I found myself skimming through her chapters. Wasn’t able to connect to her as much as I did with the others. Baby Montego was a breath of fresh air. I’m a sucker for well portrayed friendships. Definitely going to read the prequel to know more about his relation with Demir and Kizzie.

Although I may not be the biggest fan of the twist at the end, I’m going to read the sequel because I liked the character, the battle scenes were fun to go through, it was a very fast read and I want to see where everything leads.

“Now,” he said, “we have a battle.”
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300 reviews36 followers
June 15, 2023
3.75 stars.

Okay, okay, where to start? I have a bit mixed feelings about this book so let's go through what I enjoyed and then what I felt conflicted about.

- McClellan is really good at creating worlds and magic systems. I enjoyed both of these aspects a lot!
- I find it really fun and entertaining how we see the plot through the eyes of four POV characters that are distinct and have different "jobs"
- The pacing was good and the story proceeded nicely
- I enjoyed the horror elements immensely in this! I felt that this was a new thing for McClellan to write and my hands were sweaty on couple occasions

The characters and dialogue:

- I liked Kizzie, Idrian and Montego and most part of Demir, but I felt that Thessa's POV was cliched and somehow too rushed. Also when Thessa and Demir were in the same scene, it just didn't work. It needed much more flesh around the bones. However, there were couple nicely written Thessa/Demir scenes at the end of the book which I liked a lot.
- The dialogue felt a bit awkward, but mostly in Thessa's and Demir's parts.
- Overall, in my opinion the character work was the weakest part in this book. The only character I ended up really worrying about was Montego.

Thet being said, I still mostly enjoyed this book and would recommend it. And I look forward on continuing to read this series. Next up is Montego of which I own a nice little hardcover :)
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78 reviews3 followers
August 5, 2024
Kniha začíná na bojišti, všude teče krev, řinčí zbraně a ve vzduchu je cítit zrada. Hlavní hrdina Demir, borec na koni, zažije strmý pád do bahna viny a sebemrskačství. Na několik let se zdekuje do ciziny, aby využíval svých schopností v podsvětí. Když však zabijí jeho matku, vrací se jako mravokárný mstitel a využívá veškerých zbraní, aby se dopátral pravdy. Pravda, kterou odhalí, však může způsobit kolaps celé civilizace, neboť magická síla, která udržuje společnost v chodu, dochází. Damir, skleněný tanečník, si musí sáhnout takřka na dno, aby pochopil, že zákulisní hry, probíhající válka a možný konec života, jak ho svět zná, to vše je v neviditelných chapadlech něčeho mnohem silnějšího. Má vůbec šanci zachránit říši bez krvavých obětí?

Kniha je šťavnatě akční, autor nenechá ani jednu z postav odpočívat. Nesledujeme jen Demira, ale i velmi talentovanou sklářku, neporazitelného šampiona v boji na blízko (Montega 🥰), cílevědomou vyšetřovatelku vraždy, řadové vojáky… Všechny postavy mají své vlastní pohnutky, které je velmi zábavné sledovat. Je velikou (a jedinou) škodou, že postavy jsou vesměs černé nebo bíle. Ale nemůžu mít všechno. Hlavně, že mám Montega 😉!

Fungování magie, práce ve sklárně s magickými skly a jejich následné využívání, to vše je opravdu nápadité. Koncept skleněných tanečníků mne bavil. Postavy jsou sympatické. Světofungování má svou logiku. Příběh má jiskru zažehnutou ve sklářské peci a končí totální tmou, masakrem s velkým otazníkem.

Na konci opravdu dojde k překvapení. Těším se na další díl!
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294 reviews122 followers
September 14, 2022
It appears that five stars does not really do this book much justice. I'd rate it twenty out of ten if it was possible. Alas, I have to settle for what already is.

Anyway, I'll go straight to the point - In the Shadow of Lightning is a banger of a fantasy book with enough thrill and suspense to pass for a world-class Thriller.

In recent years, Brian McClellan has made it a habit to release spectacular books, each one with a unique magic system. With his latest book, he's clearly outdone his own freakishly scary-good standards. And, in years to come, he'll be heralded as one of the very elite authors to have ever penned a letter in the genre.

In the Shadow of Lightning introduces a magic system similar to, yet vastly removed from his flintlock Powder system of Powder Mage and Gods of Blood and Powder.

This time around, the source of the magic is glass. If you haven't read the book, this probably sounds mediocre. However, what's truly astounding isn't the fact that he weaves a cool magic system out of something seemingly ordinary. Instead, the main selling point is how it transforms ordinary characters into something beautiful and deadly. The characters are more than just individuals- they're symbols, mini-gods, and certainly superhuman. It's like reading a fantasy book based on MK characters- awesome stuff!

The magic is expertly segmented in the traditional manner so beautifully encapsulated in Robert Jordan' and Steven Erikson's legendary works- a style emulated to great effect by another living legend, Brandon Sanderson.

Even better, it appears we haven't yet seen the full extent of the magic system. There's so much potential for it, that my body positively vibrates with excitement as to the endless possibilities that abound for exploration in subsequent books in the series.

For the sake of spoilers, I usually avoid giving a synopsis in my book reviews. But, I'll break my own rule this time. However, fear not- there'll be no obvious spoilers!

In the Shadow of Lightning tells of the fall, and rebirth of a promising war general. The cruel machines of state, and it's even crueler contraptions threaten to turn his entire world apart. Even exile is no solace for him, as he's dragged back into the very mires that sought to drown him earlier in his life.

Back in his city-state, he launches into a series of investigations and schemings to discover his true enemies, while taking up the mantle, and responsibilities of a fallen matriarch to restore his good name and save his world from impending disaster and wolves looking to scavenge and reap the fruits of his labour.

His prodding and seeking brings into his path a brilliant, orphaned engineer who may hold the key to his salvation, and perhaps the exorcism to the demons of his past.

In the midst of it all, a bigger battle is brewing beyond the reach, and sight of mortal eyes. And, in the end, the true prize may not be just what you think...

Ahem!

This is as far as I go without giving spoilers.

Before I wrap up, I'd like to add that the characters are awesome. The entire story is told from the POV of 4 MCs. The world seems vast, but in this book, the author has bared explored more than two cities. Nevertheless, it's a truly epic adventure, with enough politicking and intrigue to make G.R.R Martin proud.

Plus, there's the trademark military and action-packed scenes that we've come to know Brian McClellan for.

P.S: I know a certain bibliophilic friend who's read this book and rated it just 3 stars. She says she found the twists predictable, but what I truly suspect is that her aversion for action and battle scenes came to the fore- she tends to skim these parts! Incredible, don't you think???

Anyway, don't be like her. The din, gore and screams of battle are like a classic opera in my mind's ear. And, if you're the sort who avoids such reads, then you're certainly missing out!!

There! I'm throwing shade at you! You know yourself!
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264 reviews25 followers
June 9, 2022
Thank you to Macmillan Audio for sending me the audiobook in exchange for an honest review.

This is the first Brian McClellan book that I have read and I liked it but it had a pretty slow start after the prologue ended. The narrator for this audiobook did a great job though, by making every character feel discreet. I think some character perspectives were better than others but I really liked the writing style of this book so I didn't mind too much. I am considering checking out the first powder mage book after hearing a lot of good things about it over the years.
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