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400 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 16, 2021
"So a harem it is? Fin laughs. "I like it, Peyton's Harem. We could get shirts with funny names, like captain cock, first cock, second cock."
"Please stop," I grouse.
"I wouldn't want it any other way. I can't think of a better man to protect my-" I suck in a breath as jealousy flares, but I push past it. "Our girl."
I've imagined fucking you for seven years. Seven hard, long years, princess, with nothing but my hand to satisfy these urges. So you will shut your goddamn mouth for once and lie back like a good girl and take what I have to offer."
Feminism flies out the window as I beg Kalen to tell me to shut my goddamn mouth again."you can't get rid of me that easily, princess." Scooping up my dripping release, I push my finger back inside her. She cries out, writhing as I fuck her with my digits, forcing my cum back inside her before pulling free.
Riggs (second cock)
➣ The nerd
➣ Calculates the probability of everything
➣ The nice guy
➣ Angel on the streets, devil in the sheets
Fin (third cock)
➣ Shameless flirt
➣ despite being a flirt he isn't a fuckboy
➣ Peyton's best friend
➣ Yea, that's all, nothing else interesting about him.
I loved the lowkey competition the men were having over Peyton. The suppressed jealousy. I rarely ever see that in RH, since authors try to paint the least toxic environment possible. But this, oh I freaking love this. Four men panting and head over heels in love with one girl, all agreeing to share her but subconsciously try to dominate and mark her as her own.
I'm sorry but that's hot and you can't tell me otherwise."I wonder if Tyler fucks you like this...or Kalen. Did they, darling? Did you come all over their fingers for them?"
The problem is the men are all supposedly different characters but they all felt like different variations of each other, especially in sex.
I feel like the heroes all took the same course in ✨how to fuck✨ because every single sex scene was the same with slightly different details.
◉ According to two of the men, her pussy tastes fresh and sweet like the ocean
◉ It is literally a crime, a crime how many times the word "cream" was used to describe the heroine's wetness. Spoiler alert, it was every time.She tastes like the ocean, fresh and so sweet, I can't help but dip my tongue inside, searching for more of her cream.
◉ It was mentioned on multiple occasions that Briggs might act like a nerdy virgin, but in reality the man will tear you apart. Peyton was literally warned about his savageness. I must say, I was rubbing my hands in anticipation, just waiting for Riggs to show his true nature and prove to me just how ruthless he is in bed😏Fuck, you love that. Knowing that after your innocent, friendly cuddles and interactions he fucks himself? Yea, you thought I was going to be the one to wreck your body, but baby, Riggs is going to ruin you. All those years of pent-up desire? He's going to make you feel every second of it, and I will be there to watch you come apart for him, for us, again and again. You have no idea what you have unleashed, Peyton Andrews. You created possessive, lust-filled monsters in all of us."
*reads the scene between Pey and Riggs*
Did I just read the exact same sex scene as with the previous two heroes or am I glitching? There was absolutely nothing savage about it. A little rough fuck IS NOT SAVAGE, it's borderline vanilla!!
◉ BUTTT, I guess it's fair to admit that even though the smut gets pretty repetitive the dirty talk was almost enough to make up for it, as evidenced in all the quotes.
◉ Besides the unoriginal smut, they keep referring to each other as family. Which should be cute, but not when they do it after every fucking sentence in this book. We GET IT. The boys are family, Peyton is family, Michael is family, you are family, my grandmother's great aunt is family
WE ARE ALL ONE BIG HAPPY FUCKING FAMILY. How many times are you going to repeat that?
Do you know what the book ended with? Peyton reminding us that they are all a family🙃
I won't even begin to get into the subject of the "APEX PREDATORS"🤪. Get out of here with your quirky bullshit.
Previously I described this book as a Shakespearean tragedy, that's because this is the most dramatic book I've ever read and it had me on a fucking roll.
Peyton is the heroine of this book. And when I say "heroine", I mean bring this woman a cape and some spandex if she doesn't stop sacrificing herself for these men.
this bitch killed herself about a million times during this story, all to save her boyfriends.
I'll admit, I absolutely love when men worry and suffer while their woman is in danger. But the 𝒹𝓇𝒶𝓂𝒶𝓉𝒾𝒸𝓈 whenever they think she died🤣
In any other situation, it probably would've been heartbreaking watching them distraught and crying, but I was fucking dying over here people
We all know she ain't dead okay? So their howling had me laughing my ass off. Especially at the end. No seriously, chefs kiss...
The tears?
The pain?
The misery of not knowing?
The grief?
THE COMEDY??I sob harder as he helps me down, rocking me back and forth as he cries too. Her name is on both of our lips and stamped across our hearts. Our love for her is deeper than any ocean, any cave.
Fin and Riggs keep searching until I hear them start to cry, realising there is no way. Their arms wrap around us, and we huddle together, sniffing, sobbing...broken.
I'm just picturing these buff ass, scary motherfuckers crying in a group hugLet them kill us. At least in the next life, I will be with my love again."
Oh look at this Romeo looking ass. William sir, come look at these poets, you'll be proud.
I can't finish this review without mentioning one of the best parts of this book. The atmosphere. It was pretty unique and that was the initial reason I was drawn to it (besides the gorgeous cover).
Obviously, I'm no rock climber or diver so I can't comment on the accuracy of the research put into this book, but by the vivid details and descriptions, I'd say miss Knight did try and put a good amount of effort into the writing. You can tell how passionate the characters are about their job and it was pleasant to read.
If you're an action lover like me then it's your happy day because there was A LOT of it. I mean these guys couldn't catch a fucking break. I was actually getting tired of all the near-death situations, thrill and coincidences. They even encounter a goddamn shark after fighting off actual bat monsters for half of this book. Just what this story was missing, a fucking shark.
BY THE WAY
Remember that orgy I was wishing happened? Well it did, at the very last chapter. By that time I was so unbothered with their fuck fests that I skipped it. I can already tell you what happened without even reading it:
Lot's of cream being licked and released🤢
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They have to tell us that she has a pretty pussy, they can't start before they do.
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Step 1; eat her out,
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Followed by fingering.
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She has to orgasm at least twice before the actual sex happens.
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Then maybe they'll have double penetration & a blowjob, perhaps all at the same time.
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They basically start going off the rails on her.
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Everyone cums at the exact same time:) or close
Update: Okay fine, after I wrote this review I wanted to know how it really went, and guess the fuck what.
To a T bitch.
“Fine,” Tyler snaps. “But if you’re here to work, you will dive and do your part, nothing more. I will expect no drama or complaints on this.”
“Not a problem, same goes for you. I’m not your employee, I’m here on behalf of my friend to ensure this runs smoothly. I’m joint lead. Do your job, and we’ll have no issues.”
“Don’t stand there and say you left because you loved me! You left because you were scared, too fucking scared, so you ran, and now you feel bad. Well, don’t. It’s over. It’s done.”
“I can’t believe you still wear your bracelets.”
“Of course I do. Even when I hated you, I still loved you,” he murmurs against my pulse. “I’ll always love you. I wore them to carry a piece of you with me at all times, so we could explore the world together like we always promised.”
“No. Fuck that, you don’t get to pull this shit again. I don’t care if it fucking hurts or if it’s hard. You don’t get to hide because of that. Fucking fight,” I demand.
“Shut the fuck up!” she yells.
“Make me, Andrews,” I growl. “Because right now, I don’t think you can. You’re not the woman I love. You’re nothing but an empty shell hurting those you love most again.”
“I don’t want you here, none of us want you here, so get that through your selfish skull, Andrews. We aren’t going to be friends, or family, or even get along. So keep your mouth shut for once and just do your job,” I growl out and step back.”
“If you’re here to hate on me some more, to tell me I’m a horrible person and kick me while I’m down, please just don’t,” she implores, her voice hoarse.
“I’m not, darling, I promise. I’m here to see if you’re okay.”
“Darling, stay safe and come back to us.”
“He’s right. I’ll monitor from here…but please, Peyton, don’t do anything stupid. I couldn’t bear to lose you again,” Riggs whispers.
“She won’t even be able to move if we fuck each hole,” Riggs muses. “Ass, pussy, mouth. Fill each one and fuck her hard, and she’ll pass out filled with our cum without being able to leave.”
“Enough fucking talking, or I’ll go out there and fuck your brother instead. Or Riggs or Fin or all bloody three.”
“I love you, Minnow! Let me save you the way I couldn’t save my family. Go! Get out of here! I love you!”