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Arthropoda
An Andi Hayes Murder Mystery
Detective George Donavon doesn’t plan to stay in Charleston long. Skeptical and by-the-book, he’s on the fast track to the top, and he won’t let anything derail his career. Especially not Andrew Hayes, his grumpy, awkward new partner—and not the chief’s secret order to find out how said partner solves even the most difficult cases.
George and Andi can’t agree on anything except their mutual dislike, but when three dead girls turn up at a storage unit, they must put their differences aside before the suspected trafficking ring claims another victim.
There is no crime without witnesses. Andi knows George suspects his always-right “hunches” point to corruption, but he doesn’t care. All that matters is catching a killer… and keeping his secret. But with leads on this sprawling conspiracy drying up, he has no choice. He just can’t let his partner find out how he’s getting the information.
Andi’s on the verge of losing his life, his mind, and his career. He could take George down with him…
If the violent criminals who are always one step ahead don’t get to them first.
Genres Bisexual / Mystery/Suspense / Paranormal.
Detective George Donavon doesn’t plan to stay in Charleston long. Skeptical and by-the-book, he’s on the fast track to the top, and he won’t let anything derail his career. Especially not Andrew Hayes, his grumpy, awkward new partner—and not the chief’s secret order to find out how said partner solves even the most difficult cases.
George and Andi can’t agree on anything except their mutual dislike, but when three dead girls turn up at a storage unit, they must put their differences aside before the suspected trafficking ring claims another victim.
There is no crime without witnesses. Andi knows George suspects his always-right “hunches” point to corruption, but he doesn’t care. All that matters is catching a killer… and keeping his secret. But with leads on this sprawling conspiracy drying up, he has no choice. He just can’t let his partner find out how he’s getting the information.
Andi’s on the verge of losing his life, his mind, and his career. He could take George down with him…
If the violent criminals who are always one step ahead don’t get to them first.
Genres Bisexual / Mystery/Suspense / Paranormal.
254 pages, ebook
First published March 2, 2021
About the author
Xenia Melzer
144 books89 followersXENIA MELZER was born and raised in a small village in the south of Bavaria. As one of nature’s true chocoholics, she’s always in search of the perfect chocolate experience. So far, she’s had about a dozen truly remarkable ones. Despite having been in close proximity to the mountains all her life, she has never understood why so many people think snow sports are fun. There are neither chocolate nor horses involved and it’s cold by definition, so where’s the sense? She does not like beer either and has never been to the Oktoberfest—no quality chocolate there.
Even though her mind is preoccupied with various stories most of the time, Xenia has managed to get through school and university with surprisingly good grades. Right after school she met her one true love who showed her that reality is capable of producing some truly amazing love stories itself.
While she was having her two children, she started writing down the most persistent stories in her head as a way of relieving mommy-related stress symptoms. As it turned out, the stress relief has now become a source of the same, albeit a positive one.
When she’s not writing, she translates other authors’ manuscripts to German, enjoys riding and running, spending time with her kids, and dancing with her husband.
Even though her mind is preoccupied with various stories most of the time, Xenia has managed to get through school and university with surprisingly good grades. Right after school she met her one true love who showed her that reality is capable of producing some truly amazing love stories itself.
While she was having her two children, she started writing down the most persistent stories in her head as a way of relieving mommy-related stress symptoms. As it turned out, the stress relief has now become a source of the same, albeit a positive one.
When she’s not writing, she translates other authors’ manuscripts to German, enjoys riding and running, spending time with her kids, and dancing with her husband.
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June 23, 2024
Wow. I don't normally read murder/mysteries without the promise of 'in my face' romance, and when I started the book I imagined there would be the usual whodunnit romance scenes, and then completely forgot about that. This is an unnerving, brilliant book, that has a romance that is way deeper than kissing and sex. It's about understanding, and love and support, and connection, and all against the backdrop of a brilliant murder mystery. Andi's *curse/gift* was so beautifully handled, and I can't imagine the chaos in his thoughts.
The story was pushed along by character and by the end of it I could see Andi and George together forever...
I can't wait for book 2.
The story was pushed along by character and by the end of it I could see Andi and George together forever...
I can't wait for book 2.
March 7, 2021
It is not a review, just a short note:
If you hope for a romance, be aware that there is none. It is purely detective work, with one detective being gay, which is briefly mentioned in the beginning, and the other one being some kind of a psychic, which helps him solve cases. Not bad in overall, 3/5
If you hope for a romance, be aware that there is none. It is purely detective work, with one detective being gay, which is briefly mentioned in the beginning, and the other one being some kind of a psychic, which helps him solve cases. Not bad in overall, 3/5
March 6, 2021
This book is so unique, it would be crime if the next in the series is not forthcoming.
June 15, 2021
Amdist the plethora of M-M investigative procedurals / romance titles ... human sleuths with paranormal abilities, paranormal beings passing as human sleuths, those who can see, hear and talk to the deceased spirits, some who can conjure up demons or other other-worldly beings as informants, the rare few with precog who may even avoid a killing from happening ... we have this little specialized 'gem'. Andi barely copes with his 'special gift' and ostracizes everyone to preserve his notable reputation and uncanny 'solve-rate'.
Poor Andi is paired up with relentlessly ambitious George who might do anything (even betray secrets) to achieve his primary goal (to be police chief sooner rather than later). The crimes being investigated are truly awful (and full of triggers for survivors of C.A). However, the ease with which leads are found, tracked down and arrested almost seem too easy with not much threat posed to the MCs; by midway, I was beginning to wonder why the bad guys hadn't already physically attacked either MC in the privacy of their homes. Andi and George make likeable characters but there is no (zilch) romance action between them despite strong feelings duly generated from their partnership roles. I have a strong suspicion we may find demisexual / asexual factors coming into play in future books of this decent and interesting series. 3.5 stars.
Poor Andi is paired up with relentlessly ambitious George who might do anything (even betray secrets) to achieve his primary goal (to be police chief sooner rather than later). The crimes being investigated are truly awful (and full of triggers for survivors of C.A). However, the ease with which leads are found, tracked down and arrested almost seem too easy with not much threat posed to the MCs; by midway, I was beginning to wonder why the bad guys hadn't already physically attacked either MC in the privacy of their homes. Andi and George make likeable characters but there is no (zilch) romance action between them despite strong feelings duly generated from their partnership roles. I have a strong suspicion we may find demisexual / asexual factors coming into play in future books of this decent and interesting series. 3.5 stars.
March 18, 2021
MM read, but not.. Really enjoyed. look forward to more of these two.. Also, really enjoyed the fact that they didn't get all sexual.. A little tension, a little maybe but nothing overt or annoying. Story driven by good characters
March 27, 2023
** 3.25 stars**
This is a new to me author and I didn't dislike what they had to offer. The "gift" that one of the MC has is rather unique and I liked how the author used it. I liked both MCs actually. The relationship that turned from hostile to something akin to tentative friendship developed organically and I enjoyed reading about it. I do not know if this is going to turn into romance but anything is possible. I liked the case and the book would have been great had the author invested some time into police procedural research. Its lack took me out of the story a lot. They used a lot of creative license here in regards to that. I do not mind some of it but when it comes to police work, I prefer more truth than fiction. This is a big pet peeve I have with this book. Hope it improves in the next since I like Andi and George and am rooting for something between them enough to stick with the series.
This is a new to me author and I didn't dislike what they had to offer. The "gift" that one of the MC has is rather unique and I liked how the author used it. I liked both MCs actually. The relationship that turned from hostile to something akin to tentative friendship developed organically and I enjoyed reading about it. I do not know if this is going to turn into romance but anything is possible. I liked the case and the book would have been great had the author invested some time into police procedural research. Its lack took me out of the story a lot. They used a lot of creative license here in regards to that. I do not mind some of it but when it comes to police work, I prefer more truth than fiction. This is a big pet peeve I have with this book. Hope it improves in the next since I like Andi and George and am rooting for something between them enough to stick with the series.
April 6, 2023
Some poor editing, including poor English, including a few words that don’t exist.
But I enjoyed the hell out of it anyway and am on to the next one. With proper beta reading, editing and proofing, this could have been an amazing book.
But I enjoyed the hell out of it anyway and am on to the next one. With proper beta reading, editing and proofing, this could have been an amazing book.
March 19, 2021
The author said she had no experience with the crime genre before this - and it shows - but not disastrously so.
This is going to be hard but I am going to try to explain why this book was not bad - but neither did it feel like the kind of solid, adrenaline and waiting game detective romance I encountered before - and trust me, the differences are subtle enough it may be kind of hard.
Sometimes it was just some... moments. A piece of text where my inner author/editor rose from slumber and wanted to rave about how such things are unacceptable and screaming at my reader side we can no longer fully respect the book. Moments like suddenly exhibiting a 3rd person assessment of a situation that not only felt out of place but like we're being led, like telling instead of showing and jarred me, basically.
Some are in the whole plot and its workings. It's good, it has some scenes that do fit my idea and expectations of a good detective story. But that is what it felt like - fragments used right but still not really "consistent" with the rest of the book.
And comparing is such a nasty habit but I think I can safely compare my feelings and if I take, for example, just PsyCop (a fair comparison otherwise, no?) I can definitely say the feeling from the plot and characters I get from it and from this are still far enough apart I want to place it somewhere on the scale between those romances that only pretend to be about catching the killer and those where the romance feels like something that happened alongside the normal, daily life a cop/detective/agent...
The gift was also not that fortunate. I can't imagine the amount of creativity and fact-finding and research that went into this but some part of me is like: "insects? get the fudge away from me and my mind!". It repels some inner freak that is perfectly okay with having a spider for a roommate but is deeply repulsed by other crawly thingies that may be around and I want to pretend are not.
It also helped to bridge some gaps - necessarily so. The detective work seemed solid enough but it was like it was designed to get them only so far so they actually HAD to rely on his "gift". That already seemed like such a stretch! I am not saying it's completely impossible but it also feels improbable. Some psychic gifts are logical and get the reader to nod along happily and I get it's not always like that but this felt like really stretching anything by a large margin.
The romance was also just not enough for me. I'd call it slow burn but the snails in our garden are quicker than those two. Yes, it would feel quick since they knew each other for days and it's nice getting them into friendship before going further but together with other aspects that made the book skirt that line where I am enjoying it and want to know more or bored and waiting only for something to finally get better.
So basically, while this would make for a good debut, it is not enough for me and I am, most probably, dropping the series. Hope someone else will have better luck - the reviews do seem positive.
This is going to be hard but I am going to try to explain why this book was not bad - but neither did it feel like the kind of solid, adrenaline and waiting game detective romance I encountered before - and trust me, the differences are subtle enough it may be kind of hard.
Sometimes it was just some... moments. A piece of text where my inner author/editor rose from slumber and wanted to rave about how such things are unacceptable and screaming at my reader side we can no longer fully respect the book. Moments like suddenly exhibiting a 3rd person assessment of a situation that not only felt out of place but like we're being led, like telling instead of showing and jarred me, basically.
Some are in the whole plot and its workings. It's good, it has some scenes that do fit my idea and expectations of a good detective story. But that is what it felt like - fragments used right but still not really "consistent" with the rest of the book.
And comparing is such a nasty habit but I think I can safely compare my feelings and if I take, for example, just PsyCop (a fair comparison otherwise, no?) I can definitely say the feeling from the plot and characters I get from it and from this are still far enough apart I want to place it somewhere on the scale between those romances that only pretend to be about catching the killer and those where the romance feels like something that happened alongside the normal, daily life a cop/detective/agent...
The gift was also not that fortunate. I can't imagine the amount of creativity and fact-finding and research that went into this but some part of me is like: "insects? get the fudge away from me and my mind!". It repels some inner freak that is perfectly okay with having a spider for a roommate but is deeply repulsed by other crawly thingies that may be around and I want to pretend are not.
It also helped to bridge some gaps - necessarily so. The detective work seemed solid enough but it was like it was designed to get them only so far so they actually HAD to rely on his "gift". That already seemed like such a stretch! I am not saying it's completely impossible but it also feels improbable. Some psychic gifts are logical and get the reader to nod along happily and I get it's not always like that but this felt like really stretching anything by a large margin.
The romance was also just not enough for me. I'd call it slow burn but the snails in our garden are quicker than those two. Yes, it would feel quick since they knew each other for days and it's nice getting them into friendship before going further but together with other aspects that made the book skirt that line where I am enjoying it and want to know more or bored and waiting only for something to finally get better.
So basically, while this would make for a good debut, it is not enough for me and I am, most probably, dropping the series. Hope someone else will have better luck - the reviews do seem positive.
April 20, 2021
This story is creepy (with creepy crawlies) but intriguing and well-written. It has interesting characters and imagery that adds to the overall story. The paranormal part of the story is from detective Andi Hayes in that he can “hear” insects. All kinds of insects. All the time. He can’t shut it off, which causes problems for him on multiple levels. His secret is emotionally and physically draining but does help him solve cases that no one else seems to be able to. He doesn’t work well with others because he can’t open himself up to someone suspecting his secret. Until George comes on board. George is in this precinct strictly as a steppingstone to bigger and better things, but then he meets Andi. Though they fight each other at first, George can’t deny that Andi has “something” that helps him find the perps. This particular story centers around human trafficking, especially young teens.
The secondary characters are there strictly as backup to the main characters. We really don’t know much about them—and don’t need to—but they definitely help the dynamic duo out with solving the case. George and Andi form a good team once they accept each other and work well together. But don’t expect any romance here. This is a suspenseful paranormal mystery, not a romance.
The one thing I didn’t “get” was the head villain – he knows Andi and George are looking into the case, and he has dozens of people helping him, so why doesn’t he go after Andi and George? And yes, I knew who the perp was—or at least strongly suspected—from his description.
Recommendation: Highly recommended. I enjoyed the story, even with all the creepy crawlies. It had the right amount of suspense and the bad guys all got caught (come on, that’s not a spoiler, they usually do) and Andi and George form a good enough team that I want to read more of their stories. Definitely looking forward to more from this author.
Disclosure of Material: I received a final and/or advanced reader copy of this book with the hope that I will leave my unbiased opinion. I was not required to leave a review, positive or otherwise, and my opinions are just that… My Opinions. I am posting this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising”
The secondary characters are there strictly as backup to the main characters. We really don’t know much about them—and don’t need to—but they definitely help the dynamic duo out with solving the case. George and Andi form a good team once they accept each other and work well together. But don’t expect any romance here. This is a suspenseful paranormal mystery, not a romance.
The one thing I didn’t “get” was the head villain – he knows Andi and George are looking into the case, and he has dozens of people helping him, so why doesn’t he go after Andi and George? And yes, I knew who the perp was—or at least strongly suspected—from his description.
Recommendation: Highly recommended. I enjoyed the story, even with all the creepy crawlies. It had the right amount of suspense and the bad guys all got caught (come on, that’s not a spoiler, they usually do) and Andi and George form a good enough team that I want to read more of their stories. Definitely looking forward to more from this author.
Disclosure of Material: I received a final and/or advanced reader copy of this book with the hope that I will leave my unbiased opinion. I was not required to leave a review, positive or otherwise, and my opinions are just that… My Opinions. I am posting this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising”
July 13, 2021
“Definition of arthropod: any of a phylum (Arthropoda) of invertebrate animals (such as insects, arachnids, and crustaceans) that have a segmented body and jointed appendages, a usually chitinous exoskeleton molted at intervals, and a dorsal anterior brain connected to a ventral chain of ganglia.” – Merriam-Webster
Insects, arachnids, and crustaceans – as a group – are not animals I ever spent a lot of time thinking about and, to be honest, I am not much of a fan except I do like spiders. But in this paranormal-light murder mystery, the author has managed to open my eyes to a very different world. One of the two detectives who are the main characters of this fascinating novel has the unique ability to sense how arthropods perceive the world. Seen through Andi’s eyes, these little critters suddenly become a fascinating source of information as well as providing a whole new way of observing all kinds of events. And since they are everywhere, including some places of which you’d rather not imagine them inhabiting, they “see” everything. This enables Andi to find evidence and solve murder cases nobody else could come close to unravelling.
Please find my full review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
Insects, arachnids, and crustaceans – as a group – are not animals I ever spent a lot of time thinking about and, to be honest, I am not much of a fan except I do like spiders. But in this paranormal-light murder mystery, the author has managed to open my eyes to a very different world. One of the two detectives who are the main characters of this fascinating novel has the unique ability to sense how arthropods perceive the world. Seen through Andi’s eyes, these little critters suddenly become a fascinating source of information as well as providing a whole new way of observing all kinds of events. And since they are everywhere, including some places of which you’d rather not imagine them inhabiting, they “see” everything. This enables Andi to find evidence and solve murder cases nobody else could come close to unravelling.
Please find my full review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
April 21, 2023
I've read all three books in this series, which I highly recommend. The MC has a unique set of skills, no, not `a la Neeson. His skillset involves solving crimes in a unique way. I've never read of another character with Andi Hayes ability. George Donavon is the partner whom the mean-spirited police chief foists on him, to aid her attempt to destroy Andi. Hayes and Donavon solve three engaging mysteries without UST, constant inappropriate erections, or lengthy sex scenes. So, if erotica is a must have for you, these well-written mysteries are not for you. However, if you want good mysteries, interesting characters, a very unique p.o.v., and good length sans filler, read all three books in this series, and you definitely must start with Book 1.
July 10, 2022
July 2022 Update
I re-read this, in preparation for reading Book 2, and have to admit I still stand by my original review, but I definitely think I should have rounded up to 4* instead of down to 3*. I went into my re-read remembering this as a slow-start book that grew in interest and pace, and that's exactly what it is. But, after re-reading my review, I found myself more engaged long before the 30% mark than with my initial reading. Perhaps because I knew what I was getting myself in for, or maybe because my frame of mind has changed since my first reading.
Whatever the change, I definitely feel the story was *more* engaging and intriguing on my second read, and it definitely deserves to go up to a 4*. I'm hoping, with my fingers crossed, Book 2 is just as good.
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** I WAS GIVEN THIS BOOK FOR MY READING PLEASURE **
Reviewed for Divine Magazine
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Arthropoda
Andi Hayes Murder Mystery, Book 1
by Xenia Melzer
★★★☆☆
254 Pages
dual character, 3rd person POV
Themes: criminal investigation, politics, criminals, abuse of minors, mental health, corrupt cops
Triggers: violence, murder, forced drug use, human trafficking, prostitution, and investigation of off-page rape, kidnap and abuse of minors
Genre: crime, investigation, murder mystery
World-Building: ★★★☆
Heat: ★★★☆
Chemistry: ★★★☆
Plot: ★★★☆
Romance: ★★★☆
Arthropoda is only my second book by Melzer, but I couldn't resist giving it a try. From the cover to the blurb, everything begged me to read it.
Starting was daunting. Even just looking at page 1, I felt overwhelmed. The entire page was ONE paragraph. It brought back memories of trying to read Casto, by the same author, which wasn't a book that I gelled with. But, I'm always willing to give an author more than one chance to impress me, and with this being a different genre/series, I came in with my hopes high and my previous experience wiped clean, for a fresh start.
I'm glad I gave Melzer another chance, because I found Arthropoda to be an interesting, unique story with a lot of potential. Yes, some of the old problems are still present, but by the halfway point I'd gotten used to the phrasing and language choices, to the point where they didn't bother me or stand out so obviously.
I was torn between rating this a 3 or 4, but decided to settle on a 3.5. While there were aspects of the book I really liked, there were also a lot of issues that I found hampered my enjoyment.
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I always prefer to start with the bad news, so that I end on a positive note. I also don't want to harp on about it forever, so I'm going to stick to a simple list for now. The most important things.
The story was littered with an excess of information, info dumps, literal one-page paragraphs and long sentences. There were sometimes page-long or 1/3 page descriptions of things that really didn't need to be explained or mentioned. They added nothing to the story, and could have easily been cut, to allow for more character development, such as the lacking relationship and chemistry between Andi and George. Adding on the fact that the language felt stilted, old-fashioned and unnatural, and it made beginning the story difficult, awkward and daunting. At times, George sounded twice his age, due to the odd word choices and phrasing choices. There was a lot of repetition, often covering the same detailed information at two different points, but in almost the same detail. If they'd been split so that only one instance was used, it would have propelled the story rather than feeling bogged down by lots of repetition.
Personally, I felt the story wanted to be a 1950s noir, at times, struggling to become a contemporary novel until the 25-30% mark, where it finally settled into itself. Because of this, the characters felt stilted, a little unnatural and awkward until that point. Thankfully, after then, the story felt more comfortable. It almost felt as if the author was nervous, or unfamiliar with the concept of a police/murder mystery story, and it took them time to get more comfortable and settled into the plot and characters. But, once they did, I could feel their confidence growing from the 30% mark, as the investigation expanded and came into its own, and by then the characters had started growing more natural, on page.
Honestly, after reading the entire novel, I could see the intention the author had of including a lot of these issues – the info dumps, the extra details, the long sentences and excess information – but, I feel that a good editor and set of Beta/Alpha readers should have kindly reached out and let the author know the story was good enough to stand on its own, without those things. Sometimes, like in this case, less really is more. I think the novel could have been at least 50 pages less than it was, and would have had a greater impact for losing that excess information. For instance, some conversations took (for example, George and the Chief's first meeting) 6 pages when it should have taken at least half of that.
I was also really disappointed that there was no romance, though I understand why. The relationship is only weeks old, by the end of Book 1, but I hoped for at least a hint of chemistry, which was lacking. I would have liked a little suggestion of attraction, flirtation, something that would hint these two were interested in each other as more than just work partners, but it just wasn't there.
There were times when I started the book, before the 3% mark, and would honestly have DNF'd. I would have stopped reading and never come back to the story, because there was such a flood of unnecessary detail, which reminded me of the same situation with Casto. I was afraid both books would have the same failings, and I spent until around 35% of the book worried that I'd end up DNF'ing, despite being intrigued by the overall concept.
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Luckily, I didn't DNF, and the story got better.
I found the whole arthropods concept really intriguing, original and clever. It allowed Andi to explore avenues that wouldn't normally be possible for a cop, without hi-tech equipment at least. Though this makes the story somewhat sluggish, in places. The story lacked a sense of excitement, because of the excess information that was required, to explain Andi's connection with the arthropods. The way the insects help to solve the case – along with good, solid policework – was super incredible and clever.
For me, the case was highly intricate, requiring a lot of moving pieces, but tallied with complex police cases. Both fictional and non-fictional, that I've read about. The way all the connections were made, the pieces were joined together, and the way that George and Andi came to their conclusions were entirely believable to me, within the confines of the plot woven through the story.
Though the Pros don't take up a lot of space in my review, it held a lot of weight for me. I was intrigued by the story, by the working relationship between Andi and George, and the way they bonded from complete strangers to work partners.
The exploration of Andi's condition – called geschenk – was well thought out and used throughout the book. Whenever it could be used in an investigation, it was. Whenever it was awkward or odd for Andi to know something by his gift, George questioned it. I loved the resistance Andi had of explaining it, at first, and then how he chose to share the information with George. The way George trusted in his 'instinct' and worked his way through the geschenk truth, was really well done.
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Overall, I feel the story had good bones, a strong plot, and good characters. It was the execution that let it down, for me. I feel that if this had a different/another editor, a group of experienced Alpha/Beta readers, and someone to give the author a gentle nudge to say “I see why you want to add it, but it's really not needed” or “trim this, and the whole thing becomes clearer and more interesting”, then it would be greatly improved. It needs a hand experienced in editing/reading murder plots, mysteries, and criminal works, so that someone can point the author – who is admittedly new to the genre – in the direction of how to condense their elaborate world-building into what is needed/necessary to the story. If that had happened, this could have easily been a 4* review.
Despite the problems, I have high hopes for Book 2 in the series. I'm interested in the characters and their growth, both as work partners and as potential lovers, if that's in the cards for them.
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Favourite Quotes
“If having a partner means I don’t have to lead on interrogations anymore, thus limiting my interactions with people who breathe and therefore annoy me, I’m all for keeping you.”
I re-read this, in preparation for reading Book 2, and have to admit I still stand by my original review, but I definitely think I should have rounded up to 4* instead of down to 3*. I went into my re-read remembering this as a slow-start book that grew in interest and pace, and that's exactly what it is. But, after re-reading my review, I found myself more engaged long before the 30% mark than with my initial reading. Perhaps because I knew what I was getting myself in for, or maybe because my frame of mind has changed since my first reading.
Whatever the change, I definitely feel the story was *more* engaging and intriguing on my second read, and it definitely deserves to go up to a 4*. I'm hoping, with my fingers crossed, Book 2 is just as good.
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** I WAS GIVEN THIS BOOK FOR MY READING PLEASURE **
Reviewed for Divine Magazine
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Arthropoda
Andi Hayes Murder Mystery, Book 1
by Xenia Melzer
★★★☆☆
254 Pages
dual character, 3rd person POV
Themes: criminal investigation, politics, criminals, abuse of minors, mental health, corrupt cops
Triggers: violence, murder, forced drug use, human trafficking, prostitution, and investigation of off-page rape, kidnap and abuse of minors
Genre: crime, investigation, murder mystery
World-Building: ★★★☆
Heat: ★★★☆
Chemistry: ★★★☆
Plot: ★★★☆
Romance: ★★★☆
Arthropoda is only my second book by Melzer, but I couldn't resist giving it a try. From the cover to the blurb, everything begged me to read it.
Starting was daunting. Even just looking at page 1, I felt overwhelmed. The entire page was ONE paragraph. It brought back memories of trying to read Casto, by the same author, which wasn't a book that I gelled with. But, I'm always willing to give an author more than one chance to impress me, and with this being a different genre/series, I came in with my hopes high and my previous experience wiped clean, for a fresh start.
I'm glad I gave Melzer another chance, because I found Arthropoda to be an interesting, unique story with a lot of potential. Yes, some of the old problems are still present, but by the halfway point I'd gotten used to the phrasing and language choices, to the point where they didn't bother me or stand out so obviously.
I was torn between rating this a 3 or 4, but decided to settle on a 3.5. While there were aspects of the book I really liked, there were also a lot of issues that I found hampered my enjoyment.
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I always prefer to start with the bad news, so that I end on a positive note. I also don't want to harp on about it forever, so I'm going to stick to a simple list for now. The most important things.
The story was littered with an excess of information, info dumps, literal one-page paragraphs and long sentences. There were sometimes page-long or 1/3 page descriptions of things that really didn't need to be explained or mentioned. They added nothing to the story, and could have easily been cut, to allow for more character development, such as the lacking relationship and chemistry between Andi and George. Adding on the fact that the language felt stilted, old-fashioned and unnatural, and it made beginning the story difficult, awkward and daunting. At times, George sounded twice his age, due to the odd word choices and phrasing choices. There was a lot of repetition, often covering the same detailed information at two different points, but in almost the same detail. If they'd been split so that only one instance was used, it would have propelled the story rather than feeling bogged down by lots of repetition.
Personally, I felt the story wanted to be a 1950s noir, at times, struggling to become a contemporary novel until the 25-30% mark, where it finally settled into itself. Because of this, the characters felt stilted, a little unnatural and awkward until that point. Thankfully, after then, the story felt more comfortable. It almost felt as if the author was nervous, or unfamiliar with the concept of a police/murder mystery story, and it took them time to get more comfortable and settled into the plot and characters. But, once they did, I could feel their confidence growing from the 30% mark, as the investigation expanded and came into its own, and by then the characters had started growing more natural, on page.
Honestly, after reading the entire novel, I could see the intention the author had of including a lot of these issues – the info dumps, the extra details, the long sentences and excess information – but, I feel that a good editor and set of Beta/Alpha readers should have kindly reached out and let the author know the story was good enough to stand on its own, without those things. Sometimes, like in this case, less really is more. I think the novel could have been at least 50 pages less than it was, and would have had a greater impact for losing that excess information. For instance, some conversations took (for example, George and the Chief's first meeting) 6 pages when it should have taken at least half of that.
I was also really disappointed that there was no romance, though I understand why. The relationship is only weeks old, by the end of Book 1, but I hoped for at least a hint of chemistry, which was lacking. I would have liked a little suggestion of attraction, flirtation, something that would hint these two were interested in each other as more than just work partners, but it just wasn't there.
There were times when I started the book, before the 3% mark, and would honestly have DNF'd. I would have stopped reading and never come back to the story, because there was such a flood of unnecessary detail, which reminded me of the same situation with Casto. I was afraid both books would have the same failings, and I spent until around 35% of the book worried that I'd end up DNF'ing, despite being intrigued by the overall concept.
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Luckily, I didn't DNF, and the story got better.
I found the whole arthropods concept really intriguing, original and clever. It allowed Andi to explore avenues that wouldn't normally be possible for a cop, without hi-tech equipment at least. Though this makes the story somewhat sluggish, in places. The story lacked a sense of excitement, because of the excess information that was required, to explain Andi's connection with the arthropods. The way the insects help to solve the case – along with good, solid policework – was super incredible and clever.
For me, the case was highly intricate, requiring a lot of moving pieces, but tallied with complex police cases. Both fictional and non-fictional, that I've read about. The way all the connections were made, the pieces were joined together, and the way that George and Andi came to their conclusions were entirely believable to me, within the confines of the plot woven through the story.
Though the Pros don't take up a lot of space in my review, it held a lot of weight for me. I was intrigued by the story, by the working relationship between Andi and George, and the way they bonded from complete strangers to work partners.
The exploration of Andi's condition – called geschenk – was well thought out and used throughout the book. Whenever it could be used in an investigation, it was. Whenever it was awkward or odd for Andi to know something by his gift, George questioned it. I loved the resistance Andi had of explaining it, at first, and then how he chose to share the information with George. The way George trusted in his 'instinct' and worked his way through the geschenk truth, was really well done.
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Overall, I feel the story had good bones, a strong plot, and good characters. It was the execution that let it down, for me. I feel that if this had a different/another editor, a group of experienced Alpha/Beta readers, and someone to give the author a gentle nudge to say “I see why you want to add it, but it's really not needed” or “trim this, and the whole thing becomes clearer and more interesting”, then it would be greatly improved. It needs a hand experienced in editing/reading murder plots, mysteries, and criminal works, so that someone can point the author – who is admittedly new to the genre – in the direction of how to condense their elaborate world-building into what is needed/necessary to the story. If that had happened, this could have easily been a 4* review.
Despite the problems, I have high hopes for Book 2 in the series. I'm interested in the characters and their growth, both as work partners and as potential lovers, if that's in the cards for them.
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Favourite Quotes
“If having a partner means I don’t have to lead on interrogations anymore, thus limiting my interactions with people who breathe and therefore annoy me, I’m all for keeping you.”
October 18, 2023
4.5 stars
George takes a job as a detective in a new town, and is asked by his new chief to report back to her on his new partner, who has an exemplary solve record. Andi has an unusual talent which helps him solve cases. When they get a case that turns out to be bigger than it first seems, the two need to learn to trust each other.
I really enjoyed this. Really tight writing, with interesting, 3-D characters, and Andi’s superpower was really different. The phrasing was a little awkward at times, but all in all, a nice discovery.
George takes a job as a detective in a new town, and is asked by his new chief to report back to her on his new partner, who has an exemplary solve record. Andi has an unusual talent which helps him solve cases. When they get a case that turns out to be bigger than it first seems, the two need to learn to trust each other.
I really enjoyed this. Really tight writing, with interesting, 3-D characters, and Andi’s superpower was really different. The phrasing was a little awkward at times, but all in all, a nice discovery.
March 7, 2021
I already talked about my first impression of the book on Amazon, but I really wanted to repost my spoiler-free review here. I'm sure I'm going to follow up with a more detailed review later on, because I'm re-reading the book right now...yeah, I'm that in love with it. I absolutely ADORED Arthropoda! Everything about it! The story was intriguing and very well written, the characters interesting and non-cliché (which, in my opinion, is a rare thing to find in this kind of genre) and the "secret" was something unique and different. I didn't know what to expect when I bought this book, but my spidy sences (pun not intended haha) just told me that I would like it. Well, that turned out to be a huge understatement, because I couldn't put it down, I finished it in one take and now am craving for more! I can't wait for the second installement in this series! MORE, please! NOW!
April 11, 2023
The story and premise had great potential, but the execution was lacking.
Two detectives - one straightforward and ambitious, the other secretive and "gifted" are partnered and tasked with solving a murder. It's a case that has a lot of loose threads, and the pair find themselves digging up a larger crime ring.
To add a dimension to the mystery, the newcomer detective, Donovan, has been asked to find out why his partner Hayes has a bizarrely high solve rate. The answer is Hayes' "gift", an unusual connection to the natural world that heightens his senses and takes a huge toll on his health.
With all these elements in place, it's a shame the writing falls short. There's too much filler text, whole sections of internal discourse that could be deleted, and and poor characterization. The dialogue is stilted and all of the characters speak in the same formal fashion. For instance, a traumatized 17-year old uses the phrase, "sedated to keep us pliant" and a sleazy bar owner uses the word "mollified." Additionally, there's a lot of exaggerated emotions - characters speak through gritted teeth, pale or break into a sweat, visibly flinch, and otherwise over-emote.
The mystery is also a disappointment. There's little suspense or puzzle to solve, and much of the story is about the logistics of getting the bad guys arrested. A lot of the procedure reads like it was written by someone who's watched mainstream cop dramas rather than someone who did research. Much of the case-solving that's not supernatural is unrealistic and ignores what actual footwork looks like.
Overall, it felt like a novel that had good bones, but needed a massive re-write and edit.
Two detectives - one straightforward and ambitious, the other secretive and "gifted" are partnered and tasked with solving a murder. It's a case that has a lot of loose threads, and the pair find themselves digging up a larger crime ring.
To add a dimension to the mystery, the newcomer detective, Donovan, has been asked to find out why his partner Hayes has a bizarrely high solve rate. The answer is Hayes' "gift", an unusual connection to the natural world that heightens his senses and takes a huge toll on his health.
With all these elements in place, it's a shame the writing falls short. There's too much filler text, whole sections of internal discourse that could be deleted, and and poor characterization. The dialogue is stilted and all of the characters speak in the same formal fashion. For instance, a traumatized 17-year old uses the phrase, "sedated to keep us pliant" and a sleazy bar owner uses the word "mollified." Additionally, there's a lot of exaggerated emotions - characters speak through gritted teeth, pale or break into a sweat, visibly flinch, and otherwise over-emote.
The mystery is also a disappointment. There's little suspense or puzzle to solve, and much of the story is about the logistics of getting the bad guys arrested. A lot of the procedure reads like it was written by someone who's watched mainstream cop dramas rather than someone who did research. Much of the case-solving that's not supernatural is unrealistic and ignores what actual footwork looks like.
Overall, it felt like a novel that had good bones, but needed a massive re-write and edit.
June 15, 2021
Let's acknowledge that this book is not a romance but it deserves 5 stars for the unique concept.
There were books that have had paranormal abilities to make creatures do their bidding but nothing that was specific to watching and learning info through the senses of insects. Maybe there was and I'm not aware of it.
I applaud the author's creativity, smooth writing flow and attention to details that kept me interested from the first page through the last one.
I'm in for the series and eagerly await for the next book to come.
There were books that have had paranormal abilities to make creatures do their bidding but nothing that was specific to watching and learning info through the senses of insects. Maybe there was and I'm not aware of it.
I applaud the author's creativity, smooth writing flow and attention to details that kept me interested from the first page through the last one.
I'm in for the series and eagerly await for the next book to come.
May 9, 2023
An Andi Hayes Murder Mystery
Detective George Donavon doesn’t plan to stay in Charleston long. Skeptical and by-the-book, he’s on the fast track to the top, and he won’t let anything derail his career. Especially not Andrew Hayes, his grumpy, awkward new partner—and not the chief’s secret order to find out how said partner solves even the most difficult cases.
George and Andi can’t agree on anything except their mutual dislike, but when three dead girls turn up at a storage unit, they must put their differences aside before the suspected trafficking ring claims another victim.
There is no crime without witnesses. Andi knows George suspects his always-right “hunches” point to corruption, but he doesn’t care. All that matters is catching a killer… and keeping his secret. But with leads on this sprawling conspiracy drying up, he has no choice. He just can’t let his partner find out how he’s getting the information.
Andi’s on the verge of losing his life, his mind, and his career. He could take George down with him…
If the violent criminals who are always one step ahead don’t get to them first.
Review:
Dear Xenia Melter,
A book buddy at Good reads group recommended this trilogy to me and judging on the first book I am very happy that she did. I am also not sure how to write this review, because Andi's talent ( this ability to solve more cases and solve them faster than his colleagues do ) is the biggest spoiler in this story and something I should be completely quiet about . I will just say this. Off the top of my head I never read a book with this exact plot twist. The book deserves big kudos for Andi's ability alone.
It is kind of unique in a specific way. Sorry, I have to be that vague. But the blurb does tell you that Andi's secret helps him to solve cases and it truly does, so much that Andi's boss suspects him of doing something unsavory and when George arrives to the precinct assigns him as Andi's temporary partner and basically asks George to spy on him to determine if Andi doing things in a clean way or not.
George is a good detective, and he is a very ambitious one, he wants to move up on the ladder and he wants to do it by the book. He feels that he has to at least keep an eye on Andi to give the favor to his boss, so when he wants to move up, she won't do anything to stop him.
Very quickly however George realizes that Andi may be a grumpy bastard who keeps people at the arm length, he is also a talented detective, who does not do anything illegal and gives his very best and more to do his work well. He realizes all of that before he learns Andi's secret and he wants to help him as much as possible, because he sees that Andi's secret often makes him very tired to the point of exhaustion and the man kind of needs somebody to watch his back.
Both men begin to investigate a case mentioned in the blurb and of course investigation turns into something even worse very fast. I did not like the case at all ( how can one like murder investigation? But some are bleaker than others and to me this one was very bleak), but I really liked how the relationship between two leads grew and changed as the story unfolded. Mind you nothing sexual happened between them, not even remotely close, but mutual distrust and suspicion changing to great supportive friendship was lovely to see. I really liked both of them and will happily read the next bo0k in the trilogy.
Lastly, based on her bio I do not believe the author is a native English speaker. Some reviews mention the sometime awkward English and as an ESL speaker myself, I did catch some awkward phrasing too so as always I could have missed some, but it did not keep me from enjoying the story at all.
Grade: B+
Detective George Donavon doesn’t plan to stay in Charleston long. Skeptical and by-the-book, he’s on the fast track to the top, and he won’t let anything derail his career. Especially not Andrew Hayes, his grumpy, awkward new partner—and not the chief’s secret order to find out how said partner solves even the most difficult cases.
George and Andi can’t agree on anything except their mutual dislike, but when three dead girls turn up at a storage unit, they must put their differences aside before the suspected trafficking ring claims another victim.
There is no crime without witnesses. Andi knows George suspects his always-right “hunches” point to corruption, but he doesn’t care. All that matters is catching a killer… and keeping his secret. But with leads on this sprawling conspiracy drying up, he has no choice. He just can’t let his partner find out how he’s getting the information.
Andi’s on the verge of losing his life, his mind, and his career. He could take George down with him…
If the violent criminals who are always one step ahead don’t get to them first.
Review:
Dear Xenia Melter,
A book buddy at Good reads group recommended this trilogy to me and judging on the first book I am very happy that she did. I am also not sure how to write this review, because Andi's talent ( this ability to solve more cases and solve them faster than his colleagues do ) is the biggest spoiler in this story and something I should be completely quiet about . I will just say this. Off the top of my head I never read a book with this exact plot twist. The book deserves big kudos for Andi's ability alone.
It is kind of unique in a specific way. Sorry, I have to be that vague. But the blurb does tell you that Andi's secret helps him to solve cases and it truly does, so much that Andi's boss suspects him of doing something unsavory and when George arrives to the precinct assigns him as Andi's temporary partner and basically asks George to spy on him to determine if Andi doing things in a clean way or not.
George is a good detective, and he is a very ambitious one, he wants to move up on the ladder and he wants to do it by the book. He feels that he has to at least keep an eye on Andi to give the favor to his boss, so when he wants to move up, she won't do anything to stop him.
Very quickly however George realizes that Andi may be a grumpy bastard who keeps people at the arm length, he is also a talented detective, who does not do anything illegal and gives his very best and more to do his work well. He realizes all of that before he learns Andi's secret and he wants to help him as much as possible, because he sees that Andi's secret often makes him very tired to the point of exhaustion and the man kind of needs somebody to watch his back.
Both men begin to investigate a case mentioned in the blurb and of course investigation turns into something even worse very fast. I did not like the case at all ( how can one like murder investigation? But some are bleaker than others and to me this one was very bleak), but I really liked how the relationship between two leads grew and changed as the story unfolded. Mind you nothing sexual happened between them, not even remotely close, but mutual distrust and suspicion changing to great supportive friendship was lovely to see. I really liked both of them and will happily read the next bo0k in the trilogy.
Lastly, based on her bio I do not believe the author is a native English speaker. Some reviews mention the sometime awkward English and as an ESL speaker myself, I did catch some awkward phrasing too so as always I could have missed some, but it did not keep me from enjoying the story at all.
Grade: B+
April 5, 2021
REVIEWED BY ULYSSES DIETZ
MEMBER OF THE PARANORMAL ROMANCE GUILD REVIEW TEAM
This is Xenia Meltzer’s first foray into murder mysteries, and it’s a good one. If the prose is not precisely gripping, the plot is, and the paranormal premise is superbly creepy. Also, the characters are wonderfully fleshed out, which is critical because the interactions between George Donovan and Andi Hayes give the book an emotional center that takes it beyond considerations of plot alone.
Andrew Hayes, known as Andi, is a hugely successful young homicide detective on the Charleston, South Carolina, police force. However, he’s a misanthropic grouch, and has been largely left alone to do his job. However, when an up-and-coming narcotics cop wants to move into homicide and gets a position in Charleston, he’s asked to partner with Hayes to monitor him. George Donovan instantly wonders at his new chief’s request, but sees working with Hayes as one more step in his career-driven ambition.
The surprise is that Donovan sees through Andi Hayes’s surly manner to recognize someone who is desperately alone. Instead of simply using Hayes as a tool to please his new boss and further his own career, Donovan gradually befriends of oddball loner and finds his efforts rewarded.
The twist in this story is that Andi Hayes has a special skill—a superpower, if you will; but one that is very much a double-edged sword. Andi can communicate with insects, all insects, and bugs and arachnids; indeed the whole phylum arthropoda. He can’t really talk to them, but he can hear them, all at once, and has learned to interpret what they say.
I tried this premise out on a friend as we were taking a walk in the woods this morning, without revealing anything about how it works in the book. His instant response was: “there are so many insects around us all the time—that would drive me crazy.”
Exactly what the author had in mind.
Andi’s success as a homicide detective comes at the cost of his own peace. He has learned to screen out the arthropods to some degree, but he can never really have any quiet. He also can never share his secret with anyone for fear of being considered insane. His surly personality is his only defense against the sort of human closeness that would jeopardize his secret.
Meltzer’s use of the insect voices is eerie and quite compelling. Andi’s commitment to justice—in the context of a pretty horrific crime—and his self-sacrifice to the voices of the insect world to find criminals, make him a weirdly sympathetic character. George Donovan sees this, and his sensitivity, which overrides even his own ambition, ultimately opens a pathway to an unlikely friendship between him and Andi. Their professional partnership goes beyond work, as George finds himself trying hard to protect Andi from those who don’t understand him. Andi, for his part, finds himself the object of genuine caring for the first time in his life.
If I have a complaint about this book, it’s that Andi and George’s friendship stops just short of where I want it to go. Is Meltzer going to take this friendship at step further in the next book? Ever? As much as I liked her handling of the paranormal twist to the plot, I was not, ultimately, satisfied with Andi and George’s relationship. I guess I’ll have to see what happens in the next book.
MEMBER OF THE PARANORMAL ROMANCE GUILD REVIEW TEAM
This is Xenia Meltzer’s first foray into murder mysteries, and it’s a good one. If the prose is not precisely gripping, the plot is, and the paranormal premise is superbly creepy. Also, the characters are wonderfully fleshed out, which is critical because the interactions between George Donovan and Andi Hayes give the book an emotional center that takes it beyond considerations of plot alone.
Andrew Hayes, known as Andi, is a hugely successful young homicide detective on the Charleston, South Carolina, police force. However, he’s a misanthropic grouch, and has been largely left alone to do his job. However, when an up-and-coming narcotics cop wants to move into homicide and gets a position in Charleston, he’s asked to partner with Hayes to monitor him. George Donovan instantly wonders at his new chief’s request, but sees working with Hayes as one more step in his career-driven ambition.
The surprise is that Donovan sees through Andi Hayes’s surly manner to recognize someone who is desperately alone. Instead of simply using Hayes as a tool to please his new boss and further his own career, Donovan gradually befriends of oddball loner and finds his efforts rewarded.
The twist in this story is that Andi Hayes has a special skill—a superpower, if you will; but one that is very much a double-edged sword. Andi can communicate with insects, all insects, and bugs and arachnids; indeed the whole phylum arthropoda. He can’t really talk to them, but he can hear them, all at once, and has learned to interpret what they say.
I tried this premise out on a friend as we were taking a walk in the woods this morning, without revealing anything about how it works in the book. His instant response was: “there are so many insects around us all the time—that would drive me crazy.”
Exactly what the author had in mind.
Andi’s success as a homicide detective comes at the cost of his own peace. He has learned to screen out the arthropods to some degree, but he can never really have any quiet. He also can never share his secret with anyone for fear of being considered insane. His surly personality is his only defense against the sort of human closeness that would jeopardize his secret.
Meltzer’s use of the insect voices is eerie and quite compelling. Andi’s commitment to justice—in the context of a pretty horrific crime—and his self-sacrifice to the voices of the insect world to find criminals, make him a weirdly sympathetic character. George Donovan sees this, and his sensitivity, which overrides even his own ambition, ultimately opens a pathway to an unlikely friendship between him and Andi. Their professional partnership goes beyond work, as George finds himself trying hard to protect Andi from those who don’t understand him. Andi, for his part, finds himself the object of genuine caring for the first time in his life.
If I have a complaint about this book, it’s that Andi and George’s friendship stops just short of where I want it to go. Is Meltzer going to take this friendship at step further in the next book? Ever? As much as I liked her handling of the paranormal twist to the plot, I was not, ultimately, satisfied with Andi and George’s relationship. I guess I’ll have to see what happens in the next book.
March 27, 2021
Andrew “Andi” Hayes is very smart and an accomplished detective in the Charleston PD. He’s not very social, doesn’t want a partner and is very grumpy, all the time. His former Chief left him on his own, to do what he does best and that’s close cases. The new Chief, Amanda Norris, has it out for Andi. She doesn’t trust him and believes he’s closing cases illegally. Even though Andi feels lonely, he knows there’s no recourse for his geschenk. The geschenk takes a toll on Andi to the point of death, if he can’t control it. If he ever reveals it or if it’s discovered, it could lead to devastation for him.
George Donovan is new to the Charleston PD, but not new to being an expert detective, formerly from narcotics. George, coming from a very competitive family, has focused totally on his career. Charleston is just another stepping stone on his way up the ladder. He’s likable enough, but his focus on his career has left him with few friends. He’s been assigned to be partners with the difficult, Andi, by Chief Amanda Norris. But not without a condition, Norris want’s George to “spy” on Andi to see if what he’s doing to close his cases is illegal.
George isn’t sure how to proceed with Andi Hayes, but get’s some advice from co-worker Rose. Gradually George get’s a routine going and leaves Andi with second thoughts. As they get deeper into possible corruption and the ugly case of death and human trafficking, George’s mind is reeling about Andi. As their struggling partnership and friendship starts to grow will Andi break down and tell George about his geschenk or will it slowly kill him?
First time read for me from Xenia Melzer and I was not disappointed! The title alone had me intrigued! “Arthropoda” has a little bit of a dark theme, suspense, fast paced action, tense moments, surprise ending and is creepy with a unique investigation technique. The plot is built with: corruption, human trafficking and a very unique type of informant. I’m a follower of a variety of murder mysteries but have never run across one that has to do with arthropoda. An amazing and creative idea from Xenia Melzer!
I like Andi and George, there’s still so much to find out about them. I think the slow process that focuses on trust, friendship, and a working partnership makes their characters stand out even more. They have to learn and adjust to acceptance of each other and build a true solid understanding. Andi is just amazing, don’t know how he’s survived this long! George was really impressive as he came through as a life saver for Andi.
Very interesting secondary characters: Shireen, IT guru and Evangeline Melcort, coroner and Lewis Brackenport, attorney. They all seem to have a respect for Andi. There were two characters that I also found to be outstanding: Daniel Donovan, older brother to George. He always can be called upon to give George some well needed advice. SWAT leader, Adam Forard has no problem with Andi and he’s always ready to respond.
I highly recommend this exciting page-turner “Arthropoda” and I will be a new follower to “An Andi Hayes Mystery” series. Xenia Melzer is bringing Andi and George back in the next novel “Eruca” and I can’t wait to see what’s in store for them!
George Donovan is new to the Charleston PD, but not new to being an expert detective, formerly from narcotics. George, coming from a very competitive family, has focused totally on his career. Charleston is just another stepping stone on his way up the ladder. He’s likable enough, but his focus on his career has left him with few friends. He’s been assigned to be partners with the difficult, Andi, by Chief Amanda Norris. But not without a condition, Norris want’s George to “spy” on Andi to see if what he’s doing to close his cases is illegal.
George isn’t sure how to proceed with Andi Hayes, but get’s some advice from co-worker Rose. Gradually George get’s a routine going and leaves Andi with second thoughts. As they get deeper into possible corruption and the ugly case of death and human trafficking, George’s mind is reeling about Andi. As their struggling partnership and friendship starts to grow will Andi break down and tell George about his geschenk or will it slowly kill him?
First time read for me from Xenia Melzer and I was not disappointed! The title alone had me intrigued! “Arthropoda” has a little bit of a dark theme, suspense, fast paced action, tense moments, surprise ending and is creepy with a unique investigation technique. The plot is built with: corruption, human trafficking and a very unique type of informant. I’m a follower of a variety of murder mysteries but have never run across one that has to do with arthropoda. An amazing and creative idea from Xenia Melzer!
I like Andi and George, there’s still so much to find out about them. I think the slow process that focuses on trust, friendship, and a working partnership makes their characters stand out even more. They have to learn and adjust to acceptance of each other and build a true solid understanding. Andi is just amazing, don’t know how he’s survived this long! George was really impressive as he came through as a life saver for Andi.
Very interesting secondary characters: Shireen, IT guru and Evangeline Melcort, coroner and Lewis Brackenport, attorney. They all seem to have a respect for Andi. There were two characters that I also found to be outstanding: Daniel Donovan, older brother to George. He always can be called upon to give George some well needed advice. SWAT leader, Adam Forard has no problem with Andi and he’s always ready to respond.
I highly recommend this exciting page-turner “Arthropoda” and I will be a new follower to “An Andi Hayes Mystery” series. Xenia Melzer is bringing Andi and George back in the next novel “Eruca” and I can’t wait to see what’s in store for them!
January 12, 2023
This was an impulse purchase because it was $2 on the Kindle store and I love both bugs and cop stories. This was guaranteed to be a home run unless its execution was seriously botched.
It's hard to classify this book. If approached strictly as a crime novel, I'd call it competent enough. Approached strictly as a romance novel, it seems to disappoint people but I thought it did a fine enough job. Approached as a story about a guy with psychic bug powers cathartically dishing out justice, it excels.
I have some gripes about editing errors. The second half of the book seems to have an above average amount of typos and sometimes things ramble on. The italicized insect communication bits are supposed to be rambling, so I'm not counting those. Sometimes the narrative just goes off and every so often there's a baffling typo that slams the brakes on an otherwise page-turning sequence of events. Non-grammatically, I felt that many of the actual "cop parts" came a little too easily, but I also can't blame the author for glossing over waiting ages for lab results and shit.
Nitpicking aside, where this book shines is the character writing, the back-and-forth between perspectives, and of course Andi's unusual power. Little winks and nods between the cast (mostly George and Andi) and short slice-of-life interludes add a little shimmer of cheesiness that makes the heavy crimes described in the book easier to handle.
There appears to be a romance developing between George and Andi, slowly. I didn't actually know this going in, but it is quickly made obvious - George is attracted to Andi from the start, and their admiration for each other clearly isn't strictly professional.
Overall: Surprisingly fun for a book about human trafficking. A good impulse purchase. I'll read the second one.
It's hard to classify this book. If approached strictly as a crime novel, I'd call it competent enough. Approached strictly as a romance novel, it seems to disappoint people but I thought it did a fine enough job. Approached as a story about a guy with psychic bug powers cathartically dishing out justice, it excels.
I have some gripes about editing errors. The second half of the book seems to have an above average amount of typos and sometimes things ramble on. The italicized insect communication bits are supposed to be rambling, so I'm not counting those. Sometimes the narrative just goes off and every so often there's a baffling typo that slams the brakes on an otherwise page-turning sequence of events. Non-grammatically, I felt that many of the actual "cop parts" came a little too easily, but I also can't blame the author for glossing over waiting ages for lab results and shit.
Nitpicking aside, where this book shines is the character writing, the back-and-forth between perspectives, and of course Andi's unusual power. Little winks and nods between the cast (mostly George and Andi) and short slice-of-life interludes add a little shimmer of cheesiness that makes the heavy crimes described in the book easier to handle.
There appears to be a romance developing between George and Andi, slowly. I didn't actually know this going in, but it is quickly made obvious - George is attracted to Andi from the start, and their admiration for each other clearly isn't strictly professional.
Overall: Surprisingly fun for a book about human trafficking. A good impulse purchase. I'll read the second one.
March 29, 2021
First off, this book touched my creepy crawly heart. When you have an MC who sees the world through the eyes of all manner of critters, it leads you to some fascinating--and disturbing--worlds.
Second, this book is a slow burn. Don't expect the MCs to jump into bed, because they're too busy solving abductions, dead bodies, and dealing with a geshcenk (which translates to 'gift', but I seriously doubt many of us would agree).
The world that Xenia Melzer is building is a rich patchwork of people, places, and (creepy-crawly) things. The story is not for the faint hearted, because it's a tough one to read about the way the bad guys treat their 'merchandise'. Still, from beginning to very satisfying end, it's a wild ride that you'll be glad you took.
Second, this book is a slow burn. Don't expect the MCs to jump into bed, because they're too busy solving abductions, dead bodies, and dealing with a geshcenk (which translates to 'gift', but I seriously doubt many of us would agree).
The world that Xenia Melzer is building is a rich patchwork of people, places, and (creepy-crawly) things. The story is not for the faint hearted, because it's a tough one to read about the way the bad guys treat their 'merchandise'. Still, from beginning to very satisfying end, it's a wild ride that you'll be glad you took.
April 1, 2021
3.5*s, bumped up to 4 because of the really interesting premise of one of the MC’s being attuned to the minds of insects. The writing and characterisations are a little clunky, and I’m not completely convinced by the the police work but still, the underlying premise is fascinating. I’m not that keen on books about murders linked to child trafficking, but it is managed relatively sensitively here so didn’t stop me from finishing the book. The growing relationship (platonic in this episode, at least) between the 2 main characters is handled well and is very believable - but don’t expect any full on romance. A good read regardless and I am Looking forward to the follow up.
November 11, 2021
An interesting story, new author to me and will definitely follow this series.
Andi is a kind of psychic with thoughts and feelings coming through from insects. The way the author articulates the insects perception of the world is quite interesting!
New guy George has no preconceptions about the strange detective And so becomes the perfect foil.
Their friendship develops slowly, we shall see if anything further develops
Andi is a kind of psychic with thoughts and feelings coming through from insects. The way the author articulates the insects perception of the world is quite interesting!
New guy George has no preconceptions about the strange detective And so becomes the perfect foil.
Their friendship develops slowly, we shall see if anything further develops
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March 28, 2021I tried this, but basically it was too creepy. A+ for unique magical ability though! I got about halfway before giving up. There also wasn’t any chemistry between the main dudes, but it was tempting to see how the creepy guy could be turned into a love interest. Just not tempting enough to continue.
April 17, 2021
I liked Arthropoda a lot more than I thought I would. It was intriguing and I know that I will be reading the next book in the series when it is released. The story was good but be aware that if you are looking for a romance Arthropoda wont be for you. I'm expecting that the romance will develop in the latter books.
It is worth checking out.
It is worth checking out.
February 25, 2024
I have to admit, I felt a little like the paranormal aspect was an excuse to not bother with a realistic police investigation and character decisions, actions and interactions. And yet, I think I kind of enjoyed it. Maybe because of the romance, which is no more than the tiniest hint at this stage - just right.
March 11, 2021
Definately not a romance, no touching between the 2 MCs and I am not dure either was gay.
A new.y arived detective in the Charleston PD is partner to an odball cop who has an excellent clearance rate.
The mystery was good andthey way the detectived solved his cases was unique
A new.y arived detective in the Charleston PD is partner to an odball cop who has an excellent clearance rate.
The mystery was good andthey way the detectived solved his cases was unique
April 15, 2021
Unique will definitely read again.
March 5, 2022
Very interesting. Crossing my fingers and hoping it's just a very slow burning romance. However, even without the romance it's a really good story.
April 10, 2022
Interesting book, liked the mystery and both characters. Lake of romance didn’t bother me at all.
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