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Disorder #4
Anonymous
Welcome back to America! For a man trapped in the Homeland Security machine, passing through customs becomes a nightmarish odyssey in this story by the author of Beasts of No Nation.
He’s a well-traveled consultant arriving home at a metropolitan airport. He’s also become accustomed to extra scrutiny for his brown skin and many-stamped passport. But when he’s whisked away, isolated, and chained in a stark white room without explanation, his reality crumbles. Because what he doesn’t know is the most damning evidence against him.
Anonymous is part of Disorder, a collection of six short stories of living nightmares, chilling visions, and uncanny imagination that explore a world losing its balance in terrifying ways. Each piece can be read or listened to in a single disorienting sitting.
He’s a well-traveled consultant arriving home at a metropolitan airport. He’s also become accustomed to extra scrutiny for his brown skin and many-stamped passport. But when he’s whisked away, isolated, and chained in a stark white room without explanation, his reality crumbles. Because what he doesn’t know is the most damning evidence against him.
Anonymous is part of Disorder, a collection of six short stories of living nightmares, chilling visions, and uncanny imagination that explore a world losing its balance in terrifying ways. Each piece can be read or listened to in a single disorienting sitting.
21 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 27, 2019
About the author
Uzodinma Iweala
17 books408 followersUzodinma Iweala is a writer and medical doctor. His first book, Beasts of No Nation: A Novel (HarperCollins, 2005), tells the story of a child soldier in West Africa. His second book, Our Kind of People: Thoughts on HIV/AIDS in Nigeria, will be released in Nigeria, the United Kingdom, and the United States in the summer of 2012. He has also published numerous short stories and essays and has worked in international development on matters of health policy.
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December 28, 2023
Curiously flat story that, combined with a few logistical niggles, turns it into the dud of the Disorder series for me thus far.
January 1, 2020
One of the best in the collection so far. A man is detained. His impressions are the makings of a horror story.
4 Stars
Listened to the audio book.
4 Stars
Listened to the audio book.
July 5, 2019
*Read for free with kindle Unlimited *
3.35 stars
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It has happened this way before, the tension, the agony, the embarrassment as the immigration officer leafs through your passport from beginning to end, flips it around, and leafs through again. You’re used to it, to keeping your head level, eyes fixed on the floor to avoid looking at this overweight man further weighed down by his tactical vest and its accessories, radio, cuffs, and a gun on a belt around his waist.
You also ignore the overweight woman and her little blond-haired boy who stand behind you, the same boy who found it extremely entertaining to repeatedly kick the back of your seat between Greenland and Nova Scotia. Now he screams and rubs his eyes red while she ignores him, tapping her foot, glaring at you because clearly this holdup is all your fault.
Well done imagery, an unsettling narrative.. the "you" perspective adding an extra factor to draw the reader in.
3.35 stars
Quote:
It has happened this way before, the tension, the agony, the embarrassment as the immigration officer leafs through your passport from beginning to end, flips it around, and leafs through again. You’re used to it, to keeping your head level, eyes fixed on the floor to avoid looking at this overweight man further weighed down by his tactical vest and its accessories, radio, cuffs, and a gun on a belt around his waist.
You also ignore the overweight woman and her little blond-haired boy who stand behind you, the same boy who found it extremely entertaining to repeatedly kick the back of your seat between Greenland and Nova Scotia. Now he screams and rubs his eyes red while she ignores him, tapping her foot, glaring at you because clearly this holdup is all your fault.
Well done imagery, an unsettling narrative.. the "you" perspective adding an extra factor to draw the reader in.
January 2, 2020
This one was probably the best one from the Disorder collection. Sadly, incredibly relevant - a normal everyday guy is held up at airport security and detained because of the color of his skin. The ending was scary.
Oh I forgot! The audio on this was wonderful.
Oh I forgot! The audio on this was wonderful.
September 6, 2021
A short story from Amazon Original Stories’ DISORDER collection. It narrates the experience of a man detained by Homeland Security in the airport.
December 26, 2019
This was a fast read with an engaging voice and interesting premise. Some readers didn’t like the use of second person perspective, but this didn’t bother me. In fact, if I’m being completely honest, I somehow didn’t even notice or think about the second person, which clearly indicates it wasn’t a problem but doesn’t necessarily mean it was successful. Second person is supposed to make the reader identify with the main character, almost as if the reader is the character. I didn’t really feel that connection.
The story was well-written overall, but it needed to be fleshed out more. There were a lot of questions left unanswered, and the events of the plot were vague. More details and explanations would have given this a higher rating for me.
The story was well-written overall, but it needed to be fleshed out more. There were a lot of questions left unanswered, and the events of the plot were vague. More details and explanations would have given this a higher rating for me.
April 27, 2022
Really enjoyed it. Truly highlighted the horrors of racism after 911.
September 1, 2021
Brilliant tale of a man whisked away from a humdrum, middle-class life into a jail cell in an undisclosed location. He is kept chained, questioned and tortured regularly, without revealing the nature of the charges against him. His only possible crime is his skin colour.
The author writes the tale in second person, and in the present tense, putting the reader real-time into the horrific life of an innocent caught in the paranoid state machinery. Brilliant!
The author writes the tale in second person, and in the present tense, putting the reader real-time into the horrific life of an innocent caught in the paranoid state machinery. Brilliant!
February 28, 2023
Intense, profoundly disturbing, and unbelievably sad. This has happened and continues to happen. It’s terrifying to imagine if you or someone you loved were in this man’s shoes. Where does the USA or the world rate on the humanity scale? If we look different, our skin is a different color does it matter? You bet it does! 4 in the Disorder Series. I have one book left in this series, this is my favorite.
March 14, 2024
Wonderfully written, disturbing story of an ordinary man taken into his worst nightmare.
Part four in the Disorder series.
Part four in the Disorder series.
December 30, 2020
This story and ones like it should be required reading in schools (well, maybe watered down) so that young folks can understand the impact that racial profiling has. People of color, including myself, usually never fully feel quite safe, or that they are deserving of a peaceful life, because of the systematic oppression that even though isn’t blatant, is often underlying in everyday life. I think this author did a great job of showing what the absolute worst of racial profiling can look like, while also bringing up how it affect generational families.
March 28, 2020
Beautifully written, the writing just flows though a harrowing story and I will be looking out for more by this author.
July 6, 2019
First read by this author- his storytelling kept me reading as this sad and disturbing story was told. Although heartfelt, it also caused anger as I read the cruel treatment encountered. This Disorders Collection is truly an eye opener
July 15, 2020
I simply did not manage to find myself in the position of the main character. The writing did not lead me as a white heterosexual male to put myself in the place of someone not in a superior position. The words did not help me to insert myself into an oppressed situation.
April 1, 2024
My rating 3⭐️⭐️⭐️ another loud and clear message!!
This is book 4 in the short story Disorder Collection.
This is book 4 in the short story Disorder Collection.
October 20, 2019
A man describes his experience with Homeland Security in a horrifying and disturbing short story.
April 13, 2020
* This is the fourth story from the Amazon Disorder Collection. *
I listened to this book and I thought the narrator did a good job narrating. I liked what the synopsis said. It sounded like it would be an interesting story but I ended up not liking it very much.
I listened to this book and I thought the narrator did a good job narrating. I liked what the synopsis said. It sounded like it would be an interesting story but I ended up not liking it very much.
September 8, 2020
This is the third story that I read from the Disorder collection and this is one that impressed me the least.
A well-travelled American consultant comes back home but is held at Homeland security at a Metropolitan airport. Why? Because he's not white.
He's taken away from the location, isolated and chained and tortured without any explanation. His name, his passport, his designation doesn't matter. He's nothing here. Anonymous.
The story describes his ordeal and shows us the stark truth about the impact of race on people who hold power. The nightmarish situation is dark and troublesome. What is more troublesome is the fact that while we're reading this short story, someone might actually be going through this in some part of the world!
The narration is crisp and the story flows well. I listened to this one on @audible_in and the narrator was fabulous. The accent brought out the pain, the injustice, the unfairness of life. All thanks to non-fair skin.
While the story gives you a lot to think about, it is nothing new. We've heard enough about people of a certain religion or race being held at immigration and customs, we have also heard about the horror stories that come with it. While, this was an eye-opener in many ways, it still has been heard before.
A well-travelled American consultant comes back home but is held at Homeland security at a Metropolitan airport. Why? Because he's not white.
He's taken away from the location, isolated and chained and tortured without any explanation. His name, his passport, his designation doesn't matter. He's nothing here. Anonymous.
The story describes his ordeal and shows us the stark truth about the impact of race on people who hold power. The nightmarish situation is dark and troublesome. What is more troublesome is the fact that while we're reading this short story, someone might actually be going through this in some part of the world!
The narration is crisp and the story flows well. I listened to this one on @audible_in and the narrator was fabulous. The accent brought out the pain, the injustice, the unfairness of life. All thanks to non-fair skin.
While the story gives you a lot to think about, it is nothing new. We've heard enough about people of a certain religion or race being held at immigration and customs, we have also heard about the horror stories that come with it. While, this was an eye-opener in many ways, it still has been heard before.
September 7, 2019
Yet another Kindle Single from the terrific Disorder collection. And yet another one dealing with race. I’m not familiar with the author, but the talent is obvious. This is one of those stories where a perfectly normal person goes through a perfectly normal scenario and then things go terribly wrong. Substitute that for specifics and you get a business consultant and a family man on his way back to his wife who gets taken away by the security at the airport and locked up for no reason other than his dark skin and well stamped passport. It’s a sort of living nightmare situation. And it’s a very effective story. Terrifying to think how quickly a person can become anonymous or more like how quickly a person can be made anonymous by the powers that be. Once again, narrated to perfection, authentic accent and all. Compelling disturbing interesting listen. Recommended.
November 26, 2020
Rendition Nightmare
Review of the Amazon Original Kindle eBook edition (July 2019)
Effectively told story about an innocent who is pulled aside at Customs for apparent further interrogation. His worst-case fantasies spiral out of control although meanwhile we also hear about his family's backstory which sounds like a completely legal immigration tale.
Anonymous is 1 of 6 short stories/novellas in the Amazon Original Disorder Series. "Stories that get inside your head. From small-town witch hunts to mass incarceration to exploitations of the flesh, this chilling collection of twisted short stories imagines the horrors of a modern world not unlike our own."
Review of the Amazon Original Kindle eBook edition (July 2019)
Effectively told story about an innocent who is pulled aside at Customs for apparent further interrogation. His worst-case fantasies spiral out of control although meanwhile we also hear about his family's backstory which sounds like a completely legal immigration tale.
Anonymous is 1 of 6 short stories/novellas in the Amazon Original Disorder Series. "Stories that get inside your head. From small-town witch hunts to mass incarceration to exploitations of the flesh, this chilling collection of twisted short stories imagines the horrors of a modern world not unlike our own."
May 14, 2020
By far the weakest story of the collection. The title struck me as ironic, since the story's featurelessness strips it of any potential emotional weight. A lot of the positive reviews seem to refer to the audio version, so maybe it's better listened to than read.
Read as part of the Amazon Original Stories Disorder collection.
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Read as part of the Amazon Original Stories Disorder collection.
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September 18, 2019
All the ways we have reduced people to objects through history.
This is a recent example.
This is a recent example.
January 12, 2023
Anonymous is an intense, terrifying story for anyone who could fit the profile.
A travel consultant whose parents named him funny, whose skin is a shade other than white, whose passport says Paris, London, Dubai, Amsterdam, so many cities he has lost count, is asked to step to the side when going through customs at his local airport. He is isolated, stripped naked, and forced to sit on a cold metal chair with his arms pinned back while his lips, teeth, and every inch of his body are examined without explanation. The protagonist experiences confusion and disorientation, unsure how long he's been detained. Has it been weeks, months, or years?
Anonymous is my first story by Uzodinma Iweala, and it did not disappoint. I can see this quickly becoming a banned short story.
Book 4 of 6 (Disorder collection)
June 9, 2021
The most realistic of the stories I've read in this series so far, telling of a man taken from airport security to a detention center. Tightly focused in just the main character's mind, it still manages to offer tension. Second person narration may have helped with keeping me drawn in. The chilling part is the just not knowing, and that part felt real to me, that a person could indeed be put through all of this and never find out why it began or why it ended,
August 24, 2021
Week 34 Book 38
Anonymous by Uzodinma Iweala
Rating 3/5
This is my third book in the Disorder series by amazon. For a man trapped in the Homeland Security machine on his way back into America, passing through customs becomes a nightmarish odyssey. A clever and painful comment on the state of things in today's world.
Anonymous by Uzodinma Iweala
Rating 3/5
This is my third book in the Disorder series by amazon. For a man trapped in the Homeland Security machine on his way back into America, passing through customs becomes a nightmarish odyssey. A clever and painful comment on the state of things in today's world.
July 11, 2022
Unsurprising. The reality of far too many.
November 2, 2023
Not great.
November 12, 2020
I've read great work from Uzodinma but this one struck me as unmemorable and flat.
It felt like a lot of concepts were being fit into 18 pages of storytelling.
It felt like a lot of concepts were being fit into 18 pages of storytelling.
April 15, 2024
This could be a horror story. The brutality this man went through. And for what? Ridiculous. Absolutely insane. And then the end? What was the whole point? The brutality, pretty much torture. It definitely made me feel uncomfortable in the best ways possible.
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