The story started out so well, I absolutely love the writing and Eva's story. It is a very good story overall but the last half spanning many years weThe story started out so well, I absolutely love the writing and Eva's story. It is a very good story overall but the last half spanning many years went by light-speed. There were so many characters and so many events just seemed unrealistic. I wish the story focused more on the characters then getting through the years. With everything being so rushed in the end, lost the emotional appeal. The general plot and idea is good and beautiful.
*Spoiler* The story with her real mother seemed a bit far fetched. It just didn't feel organic. Also disappointed in the Barnaby angle, his persistence on being with Naomi felt off. ...more
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