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Hexworld #2

Hexmaker

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A straight-laced policeman. A lighthearted thief. A murdered millionaire.

Fox shifter Malachi steals for one of the biggest crime rings in New York City. But when he witnesses the murder of a millionaire, the only person who can keep him safe is Dr. Owen Yates, forensic hexman for the Metropolitan Witch Police—and Malachi’s witch.

Owen is horrified to discover his familiar is an uneducated thief. Even worse, Malachi threatens to unleash Owen’s deepest desires…desires Owen can’t act upon, as he’s destined for an arranged marriage to secure the Yates family fortune

Their agreement: Malachi will be Owen’s lover as well as his partner, until the day of the wedding. But as their hunt for the murderer carries them from teeming slums to Fifth Avenue mansions, Owens begins to realize Malachi commands his heart as well as his body.

With dark forces drawing ever closer around them, Owen must decide whether to bow to the demands of duty, or to risk everything for the man he loves.

270 pages, Kindle Edition

First published October 14, 2016

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Jordan L. Hawk

82 books2,557 followers
Jordan L. Hawk is a trans author from North Carolina. Childhood tales of mountain ghosts and mysterious creatures gave him a life-long love of things that go bump in the night. When he isn’t writing, he brews his own beer and tries to keep the cats from destroying the house. His best-selling Whyborne & Griffin series (beginning with Widdershins) can be found in print, ebook, and audiobook.

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644 reviews329 followers
August 30, 2020
Fox familiar Malachi has had the bad luck to get accused of murdering one of New York's elites. Luckily for him, Dr. Owen Yates is on hand to exonerate him, much to everyone else's consternation. Rich, smart and quite handsome: Malachi could hardly do better for his fated witch.

Yates is less excited to finally meet his familiar, though. Sure, the prospect of having his own magic is nothing to sneeze at, but he's set to leave the Witch Police, get married and start a more respectable lifestyle, with his in-laws. Just as his family expects him to.
With such a well-set-out path in life, our two protagonists can only agree to make the most of their relationship, while they still can.

Fox in snow

The murder mystery in Malachi and Yates' story continues to build on the secret cult aspect from the prequel. Lots of interesting new details are unveiled about the origins of magic. There's the obligatory secret plot that explodes in the last 10% of the book. And of course the action sequences which culminate in some of the most epic show downs, evidently save the day most efficiently. All in all, a rather enjoyable paranormal action-adventure story.

When it come to the romantic aspect... To be fair, the main characters' relationship evolved very nicely from obligation to love. And having Yates and Malachi's professional roles inverted in their intimate life, was a nice touch in having them be on a more equal footing. Plus the sexual scenes were certainly nothing to sneeze at. That said, instead of feeling excited about the outcome of the story, I was much more focused on being exasperated by Yates' filial loyalty, on subsequent self-sacrifice.

Score: 3/5 stars

I probably would've liked Owen and Malachi's relationship better, had it been a heterosexual one. And I realize how bad this sounds, especially because the whole reason I read MM is due to its healthier power-balance.

Uncomfortable grimace

Don't get me wrong: I didn't hate the story, and its ending had me suitably teary-eyed. That said, I'd take Cicero and Halloran's problematic interactions from Hexbreaker any time, over Malachi and Owen's well-balanced ones.

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2,240 reviews3,658 followers
January 7, 2017
Dr. Owen Yates will meet thief Fox shifter Malachi and save him from wrongly accused for murder. Later he will discover that Mal is his familiar and accept to be his witch.

Owen is maybe the cleverest in the Metropolitan Witch Police, MWP. He is the one and only forensic hexman. He uses hexes as evidences, to identify suspects etc.
Owen comes from a rich and well respected family. There is no need to work at the witch police, but he really loves his job.
Unfortunately his family has a tragic past and will have a more tragic future, unless Owen marries the daughter of a wealthy family. Sadly and truly Owen has different tastes, but he cannot say no to his duty.
Consequently this will be his last week at his favorite work. After that, there will be a glorious marriage (where even the mayor will be present) and a change in his career.

Malachi belongs in one of the biggest crime rings in New York City. He is a canny and cute fox and slightly manipulative but in a charming way.
Being a thief is matter of survival. It is the only thing that he has learned to do since he was at the orphanage. Life can be very cruel to an uneducated, lowlife fox in New York. He just wants to have something to eat every day and somewhere to sleep every night.
Malachi does not want to bond. He knows that familiars -especially small size familiars- are treated as pets by their witches from high society. They are not allowed to use their human form outside the house and they are kept constantly in their animal form, while they live with the servants.
His opinion will change when he meets Owen and he is unstoppably attracted to him. But Owen has a wedding to attend at the end of the week. His wedding.

The wedding of the century will take place while a criminal plan is set into motion during one of the worst storms in the history of New York City.

Owen and Malachi is another great storyline in the series, while we sink more in this marvelous new world that was inspired by true events that happened more than 100 years ago.
(Yes, the Young’s Rectal Dilators were real! And they were used for medical purposes. I googled it. LOL)

I loved Owen’s nerdiness and silent quality of character. I loved Malachi’s cheekiness and the breath of fresh air he brings to Owen.

I really hope that Quigley & Isaac’s book be up next.
November 15, 2016
~4.5~

While Cicero, that slinky, sexy cat, remains my favorite MC in this series (thus far, at least), Malachi is a close second. Mal is a sly fox, a quick-footed thief, a man used to making it on his own.

His witch is the wealthy, uptight Dr. Owen Yates, a talented hexman who works for the Metropolitan Witch Police. Owen loves his job, but it won't be suitable once he marries to save his family's social standing.

Mal and Owen find themselves in the middle of a murder investigation, and Mal quickly discovers that Owen is a naughty boy who loves to get down on his knees. And that makes for some hot, kinky sex (D/s elements, bondage). Mal makes Owen beg for it. So deliciously dirty!

The plot is fast-paced, and the mystery doesn't get in the way of the romance. Indeed, as Mal's life is threatened, Owen becomes more protective of his red-headed fox.

While Owen is attracted to Mal and cares deeply for his familiar, he feels obliged to carry on with the wedding. Fortunately, Owen's fiancée is nice and doesn't treat Mal like a pet (as many wealthy witches treat their familiars). She has dreams of her own.

The ending is exciting and leads to a sweet HEA for the MCs.

I love this historical world Jordan Hawk has created; it's authentic, gritty, and brimming with magic & danger.

This series is absolutely fantastic. I'm not one for mysteries or magic usually, but I can't get enough of Hexworld!
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2,437 reviews504 followers
October 29, 2022
3.5 Stars

Though not my favorite in the series, this was still rich in the details expanding on the complexly imagined historical AU where witches are aplenty but coveted animal shape shifter familiars are a rare commodity. There is a social disparity here as well, and familiars, though highly prized by their witches, if not bonded, are quite the vulnerable population.

Despite the less liked tropes (MC who’s a thief, parents who are assholes, D/s dynamics) what JLH does well is maintaining a central plot that is gaining more and more momentum as a rogue group of familiars are tired of being subjugated and have a world order plan to show they are no longer to be trifled with.

Overall, regardless of my personal quibbles, the main story arc will keep me coming back for more!
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6,041 reviews491 followers
October 18, 2016
Hexmaker is the second book in Jordan L. Hawk's latest series, Hexworld, which deals with witches and their familiars. This time, the couple in the spotlight is Malachi, a thief and fox shifter who becomes a witness of a murder, and is Dr. Owen Yates, forensic hexman for the Metropolitan Witch Police.

Well, I loved this! I might even -- dare I say it -- at the moment loving this world better than Widdershins. I know, blasphemy!

The thing is, I found Hexworld to fit more with my taste of paranormal/fantasy/mystery books. It has police department (I'm such a sucker for cops or detectives)! It has tons of familiars (animals sightings!). Plus it features different couple in each book.

Don't get me wrong, I love Whyborne and Griffin, but sometimes all those weird fantasy creatures just went over my head. Plus I was annoyed with Whyborne in the last book.

Despite the timeline being relatively short, but I felt that Owen and Malachi truly had the chemistry and connection. Never for once I felt that this one was rushed or the love came instantly. I loved that they worked together well, despite the difference of class and occupation. I even enjoyed the touch of D/s between the two.

I also loved the villains better here compared to Widdershins' series -- why? Because . I like that it's not simply a black and white / bad guys vs. good guys situation.

The only thing that I wasn't sure about was the fact that .

Verdict: Shiny new series which falls right into my taste ^^. Can't wait to see who's next. I hope it's Isaac.
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2,883 reviews474 followers
October 31, 2016
Soul bonds bridging the divide.

Thief. Police investigator.
Guttersnipe orphan. NYC Gilded Age elite.
Expendable. Scion.

Another dive into the magical world of witches and their familiars as Owen, the staid hexmaker from the first book in the series gets waylaid by his own familiar. In a world where witches outnumber familiars, the probability was low--and after meeting his, Malachi, Owen is wishing he never had.

What is usually a cause for celebration is met with suspicion and veiled hostility by both parties. Each has their allegiances and responsibilities and being on opposite sides is more than disconcerting it is life altering. Sometimes change is what one wants.

Unfortunately, we don't always get what we want.

The case that brings them together plays into the sociological implications of the witch/familiar relationship and the class structure of late nineteenth century NYC. The relationship between Malachi and Owen is tenuous and the binding point beyond their magic is kinky sex. Anyone who's read a few of my reviews knows that kinky sex is not a problem, but here it felt forced. It went from zero to sixty, and in a couple with trust issues I found that not entirely believable. At the heart of any power exchange that isn't dubious is trust, and this jumped a few steps. The contention between Owen and Malachi reminded me of A Seditious Affair, but with novices.

The story moves at a brisk pace with danger stalking each chapter. It's a nice addition to the Hexworld series. Definitely entertaining and a diverting Halloween read.



A bag of Tootsie Roll candies, and yes, I'm digging out all the Pops--and now it's time to read my Halloween TREAT from friend, Lei.

THANK YOU!
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611 reviews370 followers
October 17, 2016
BR with Mish!

This is going to be a lazy review, but here's what you can expect from 'Hexmaker':

✔ Two well-rounded and very different MCs who are equally lovable.
✔ A romance that moves pretty fast, but is still believable.
✔ Some hot and slightly kinky sex.
✔ A mystery that will keep you on the edge of your seat and will keep you guessing.
✔ Really, I think this is one of Jordan L. Hawk's best-written mysteries.
✔ Some family drama and resulting angst that'll make you wonder if Malachi and Owen will make it.
✔ A HEA that'll make you go 'awwww'.

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Overall, I really enjoyed book 2 of the Hexworld series. Owen and Malachi's romance was sweet and sexy, and the mystery was highly entertaining.

If you're looking for some paranormal MM, give this series a try. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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3,334 reviews2,131 followers
July 10, 2018
All good things must end. My unbroken streak of liking Author Hawk's books has ended. (Be sure to check out my shared notes for real-time responses to the characters. And the overuse of the w-bomb.)

I didn't like Owen because he reminds me of Franklin Pangborn from old-timey post-Code movies. When they needed a gay man, they got Franklin Pangborn or someone like him to play a fussy, mousy, icky stereotype.

UGH.

And that meant I couldn't really get a grip on the stakes of the story. Wasn't much on Malachi, either, and their sex scenes...I can't believe I'm typing this...were dull, so I skimmed them. I mean, of course Owen was bottoming, he's such a squishbag I can't believe he could ever do anything else...and that's not Big Daddy's kink.

Also: There are seven (7) w-bombs in the book which is eight too many.

A sad day for me.
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1,224 reviews144 followers
October 9, 2016
4.5 stars



I have read everything under the sun by this author except the Spectr series. ONLY because I don't want to wait for the next one, and read them in succession. I own them though. Hawk writes some of the most memorable and amazing guys in any genre that I've read. I have come to really enjoy this series, and this book was no different. (SN: Jordan, if you do read this, please for the love of goodness let Quigley & Issac's book be up next. I can feel the hurt/comfort from book one. I'm begging for it.) I absolutely was enamored with this book from the beginning to end. Malachi was super amazing, and Dr. Yates was a delightful surprise. I enjoyed the mystery aspect of the story, some of it was pretty predictable and that's not a word that I'd use to describe any of Hawk's books.

You know how it's love at first sight at someplace like a café in Paris, or Times Square in New York City; well these two meet at a crime scene and it's an instant connection. Well as much as a connection can be for a suspected murderer and a forensic specialist. LOL. It was snarky, charismatic, and cute. Those are the three words that I would describe the scene for the first two meeting each other. I loved that they were complete opposites. I mean they had nothing in common, one from a rich family, a prestigious lifestyle, a respectable job, and the other was from the low brows of society, a thief, and a family made up of criminals. This difference did nothing when it came into the physical side of their relationship. It was super magical. It was HOT!!! It was explosive. My, my, my, Dr. Yates who knew you had that in you. It was nice to see Owen open up in way that he's never felt comfortable doing. I enjoyed Malachi's abrasives and equal prowess when it came to Owen. I think they definitely work well together.


**Tee hee, I just wanted to incorporate this somehow my review, I love JLH's research and authenticity she brings to her stories. Never in my life would I have thought to read Historical Fiction, but she is the inspiration behind it for me.**



Now when it came to the mystery of the story like I said earlier it was rather predictable at one point. Nonetheless is was good. I did feel the ending was a tad bit rushed and would have like to see more from these two after the big showdown. I also felt like the storyline with Sophie didn't end well. I just wanted some closure for Mal on that part, even though we suspect what she did. I had the same abrupt ending issue with the previous in the series, so maybe it's a little pattern, but seriously I think she can write 5oo pages and I'll still want more from her. No matter it's still a great murder/mystery from this author. It's still authentic in the setting, and she even includes real facts into her stories. I love the creation of the Metropolitan Witch Police. I love seeing all the characters and hopefully we can get a book from each one. I appreciate every one of her characters and books. I highly recommend this book to everyone. You won't be disappointed, c'mon this woman writes Gold.
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2,323 reviews590 followers
July 28, 2022
3.5 Stars

This may be my lowest Jordan L. Hawk rating to date and I slightly hate myself for it, if I'm being honest!

In truth, this sequel was not quite as strong for me as the other stories within the historically-set, magic-tinged Hexworld series, particularly in terms of the romance development and the unfolding of the mystery plot—but I’ll be damned if it wasn’t still an immersive and quick read, as is naturally the case for me whenever I pick up a story by Jordan L. Hawk.

Here, in this sequel to Hexbreaker, the story follows a new witch-bond pairing, this time between Dr. Owen Yates, a well-to-do hex-making witch, and a fox-shifter familiar and thief-by-trade, by the name of Malachi.

Owen and Malachi meet at the scene of a high society murder, each man on opposite sides of the law, with Owen working the case and Malachi wrongly suspected of the murder (initially). But even in the extreme circumstances their predestined witch-bond is undeniable… and also somewhat of a saving grace, when it turns out that the real murder(s) have subsequently put a target on Malachi’s back for being witness to the crime, making an official (and quick) bonding with Owen the wiser choice, keeping Malachi safe(r) and allowing him to help with the official investigation.

The whole opposites-attract thing was definitely in play here, with Owen being an affluent, highly intelligent, man of the law, with submissive tendencies (particularly in the bedroom), while Malachi was presented as bold, sassy and more dominant (also in the bedroom), and certainly made of truer grit after surviving how best he could in the lower classes of society. Their dynamic was an interesting one, especially when true loyalties and trust were thrown in the mix as the story reached its culmination.

All in all, I liked Owen and Malachi well enough, but I didn’t love them, either as characters or as a couple. I can’t quite speak to what was missing for me here, but I do know that the dynamics in the bedroom—somewhat of a D/s vibe—wasn’t my thing at all, and I found myself skimming those scenes more as the story went on.

The mystery was handled well and kept me guessing, but as with the relationship, there was something missing that made my engagement less than desirable. In truth, I didn’t quite like how the ‘bad guys’ were revealed, nor how they were dealt with during the ‘big confrontation.’ It just didn’t sit right with me.

However, where this series continues to excel is in the imaginative and atmospheric alt-world that Hawk has created. Filled with magic, mystery, murder and mayhem, my absolute favourite elements of the series remain in the unique magic system that Hawk has designed around hex-magic... and let’s not overlook the fated-mate type bonds that are shared only between the most blessed of witches and their shapeshifting familiars. I love these aspects of the storytelling so much that reading on—even when this particular story wasn’t the biggest win for me—is an all too easy decision to make.
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1,417 reviews184 followers
October 6, 2021
As I mentioned in my previous rambling, Hawk’s spellbinding powers are a formidable force. In less than two weeks I immersed myself in Hexworld and binged every word. In the first book, we have our TomCat but now it’s Owen and Mal’s time to shine. Don’t bother asking my favorite couple, it’s not possible to choose. I love fate, mates, and magic. I love magnificent worldbuilding, endearing characters, and uninvited romance. And Hawk takes all of these together and elegantly pens them into a sublime series. It’s glorious!!!

I didn’t have a chance to remark on the setting before but not because it’s lacking in any way. I used to be an era snob. If it was set more than a few decades back, I had no interest. I think this was because I read a few turn of the century love affairs that broke my heart. I enjoy a good hopelessly in love tale but not a tale in which the love is hopeless. The gilded age in New York City was a turbulent time of great change. Hawk weaves genuine details into this fantasy world. Corruption, poverty, and the weight of society’s expectations play their part in Owen and Malachi’s relationship. They are the epitome of opposites-attract romance. I knew they would be incredible together but their fight would not be easy. It’s a good thing I’m not a nail-biter because I would have chewed them off during this thrilling adventure.

Owen works for the Metropolitan Witch Police and we dive into the nitty-gritty of the MWP and their fragile cooperation with the regular NYC police. They don’t always work well together but circumstances often give them no choice. Owen was born with a silver spoon in his mouth but he never truly cared about money. Mal would say, that’s because he always had it. Our clever fox shifter, Malachai, wasn’t as fortunate. Orphaned at a young age, he had to learn how to work the system so he could survive it. When picking pockets proved to be too easy, he moved up the ranks to become one of the best second-story shifters in the city. When murder brings Owen and Malachai together the pages began to vibrate with their energy. There are too many reasons why they shouldn’t work but fate does what fate wants. And I just about swallowed my tongue when they decided to explore their sensual desires. Fur and feathers, they are HOT. A heady mix of secrets and sorcery had me racing to the finish. And what a lovely conclusion it was. Do you know what’s even better? It’s not really over…

Beware of: A forensic hexman meets his cunning match. Forbidden love and simple games become complicated. And an action-packed escapade brimming with all the feels.

This book is for: Calling all paranormal lovers! Attention fantasy fans…you’re not going to want to miss this! Hawk delivers an extraordinary murder mystery with magical interventions from a sexy couple…yeah, you need it. Just be sure to start with the Irishman and his frisky feline.

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Author 39 books1,058 followers
April 9, 2019
Hexmaker is the second, novel-length installment in the brilliant Hexworld series by Jordan L. Hawk. Very different from the lives of a copper walking the beat and his fantastic, cocky familiar... Hexmaker introduces the reader to a briefly mentioned character prior: Dr. Owen Yates. He might as well be from another universe when compared to the humble upbringings of so many other characters. Owen is the middle son of the Yates clan, one of 400-family living on Millionaire Row. They are old money, elite, and his mother in particular holds the keys to New York society. Owen's burdens don't lie in scraping together enough money to pay rent or put food on the table, but in representing his family. He is duty and honor bound to care for them and their prestige by marrying Edith Vandersee, the youngest daughter of a family with new money-- but lots of it.

We are treated to a character that while pampered his entire life, is not the sort of man who feels he is above others. And when he does have those moments, he catches himself. Corrects himself. Owen is a witch, a forensic hexman, and is absolutely in love with magic and his job at the MWP. But his commitment to a society he feels alienated from, and the responsibility to care for his family in his older brother's absence leaves him a shell of a man. True joy and happiness have all but been beaten out of him.

Mal, a fox familiar, thief, and second-story man, is the perfect counteract to Owen's rigidity. Mal's experienced the lowest of the low, been tossed aside by his family, by New York, has been seen as nothing but a nuisance his whole life, and yet he is a man full of energy and courage. No matter what, Mal keep taking each day as it comes. His bark of a laugh cracks the wall around Owen, his dominance and care directed toward his witch sparks a need in Owen, so deep and profound, the reader can feel his desperation to be touched, used, loved, and cared for in a way he's never once felt.

Their meeting and magical bonding is fast and fierce. Their sex desperate and needy. But their relationship unfolds gently, unexpectedly for them both, and is so utterly sweet. The men find a strength in one another, and they better each other in ways they were lacking before meeting. And all of this unfolds while Owen and Mal are investigating the murder of a millionaire collector, while Mal is being stalked and attacked by unknown familiars after having seen too much at the Jacobs house. Add to this a mysterious artifact linked to the uprising of feral familiars in the city who are trying to enact a new world order, and you've got one hell of an exciting story.

Adventure, mystery, heartbreak, joy, representation, and unrivaled imagination. This book is what writing is all about.
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3,654 reviews223 followers
November 22, 2017
AUDIO REVIEW 4.5 Stars

I really do think that a great narrator can make an awesome book even more enjoyable. As such, re-rating for Tristan's performance. Also, as much as I love the romance of Tom/Cicero in the first book (Hexbreaker)...I think the sex scenes were ridiculously hotter in this one. (I needed Tristan to read it to me, evidently, to realllllllllly appreciate it!)

4.3 Stars

Loving this series, and I still find it interesting how the Hexmagic takes the place of so much science & medicine. Also, major props for incorporating real history (from Commissioner Roosevelt, to the Astor vs. Vanderbilt society squabble...plus the actual storm!) - that kind of attention to detail thrills me more than I can put into words.

I have to hand it to JLH, she really works being inclusive of all people and this book is no different; I really wouldn't mind hearing more about Nathan in some future installment.
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1,512 reviews145 followers
October 1, 2019
Another wonderful Hexworld story. Snarky irreverent fox familiar Malachi is the best thief on the streets. But this time even being best will not help him because he has stepped into the plot many years into making. His salvation comes with his witch Dr. Owen Yates who is smart and caring despite coming from rich family. They only have but little time to uncover the murder mystery and be together. Snobbish family, prejudice against familiars and familial duty make happiness seem impossible but Malachi's no fool. He helps Owen uncover the truth and survive what's to come.

I liked the plot twists as well as their time together as a couple. I liked that Malachi helped Owen to find joy in life and how Owen gave himself and all his secret desires to Malachi. Those two were made for each other. In the end justice prevailed, the tragedy was averted and witch and his familiar took their rightful place at the MWP headquarters fighting crimes. Absolutely awesome tale of bravery, magic and love!
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3,069 reviews40 followers
May 20, 2023
Dang, I am tired! It seems like I spent the whole time I was reading this book, yelling, "Go faster, go faster!" *headdesk* LOL!!!

If there was a dull moment in this read I must have rushed through it to get to the next exciting part! *grin*

Owen and Mal... what a twisted story Ms. Hawk wrote for them, and not necessarily just in a sexual way... although, those two sure could get the old heart pumping when they hit the bedroom! I am referring mostly to the twists and turns that we traversed throughout the book! Things happened so quickly it was almost impossible to keep up and then we find out that people were not who you thought they were and then the whole "true love" wasn't supposed to matter to the Four Hundred, just money and prestige... but, Owen? He learned many a hard lesson in this story, and Mal? He got his HEA... eventually! ;D

Now, I need a nap! I am sure Cicero would agree! ;D
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339 reviews5 followers
October 16, 2016
I still don't have a computer, so this will be short. It will also have typos.. Cuz.. Fucking autocorrect is a bitch.

This book was a 4.5 for me. Anyone who knows me knows that I adore Jordan L. Hawk's books. Her stories are full of magic, and love, a but if heartbreak and sadness but TONS TONS TONS of hope. No matter how lost her characters seem at times, you just know that, eventually, they will find their way home, to each other, and that everything will be okay.

This book wasn't the exception. I adored Owen but my all time favorite is Mal.ni think he's my favorite in the series do far. Beautiful, simple, amazing, sexy fucker he is. And I adore him.

This book works with things like elitism, society expectations, characters fighting for their lives in an every say basis. It deals with stereotypes and prejudice, and it breaks them, and I love it.

Mrs. Hawk's writing us wonderful, almost flawless. Everything in her books s full of details and color, and brilliant things that give her stories that very unique thing that brands her books. Her signature. I can't wait for the next book. And for a new computer, cuz, seriously.. So much to say and way too felt fingers to do it properly on my iPad.

Bring on the next one when its ready, I'll be waiting :)
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Author 83 books2,636 followers
October 30, 2016
The Hexworld series has a lighter feel than other series I've read by Jordan Hawk, despite some potentially heavy themes of social inequity, poverty, corruption and abuse of power. The world-building is interesting, with witches and familiars in a dance of cooperation and conflict, where the witches hold most of the power.

Owen is a witch, and hexmaker, whose personal dream is to invent something amazing and useful in the pursuit of justice. But his working days with the police department are almost over. He's scheduled to be the male half of a big society wedding, and then settle in with his tolerable bride, and move into the family business. The last thing he expects, in these final days of personal freedom, is to find his familiar. Even more, to be desperately attracted to his male familiar, when he's been working so hard to suppress his unacceptable desires. Everything Owen isn't supposed to want, but does, is potentially within reach, but only if he abandons his family duties.

Malachi has eked out his young life as a thief and pick-pocket, evading the grasp of witches who would capture and bind him for his magical boost to their powers. So discovering that his witch is a cop, and a rich man, is a mixed blessing. Still, for a poor man who has felt the cold breath of hunger, of prison, and of forced familiar-binding, more than once, it's not a hard call to take a chance on Owen. Only to find out that in a week, Owen's life will be rearranged, relegating Malachi to a lowlier household position, possibly just a servant, subordinate to the whims of his witch's new wife.

Owen is the guy with wealth and power. It's Malachi who knows how to grasp every moment, though. Malachi who convinces Owen that it's all right to grab a little pleasure for himself while he can. Malachi who sees through Owen's well-bred demeanor to know what he really wants. It's also Malachi who has information about a killer that may prove deadly, and who draws very dangerous attention.

This was a fun fast romp, with a mystery thread, and some of this author's vividly described moments of magic and peril. The bad guys didn't feel as menacing, and I sympathized with them enough to regret the simplicity of the conclusion. A moment of supposed angst due to misunderstanding was signaled well in advance, which defused the emotions a bit. Still, I think if anything I liked this one a little more than the first, and I'll definitely pick up the next one.

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1,168 reviews151 followers
October 15, 2016
With one week left to go before he leaves the job that he loves, in order to get married to the woman he doesn’t, Dr. Owen Yates is drawn into a mystery that will need all his skills as a forensic hexman. With a murdered millionaire setting the rich men and women of New York in a tizzy, Owen is tasked with using his skills to piece together (literally) the reason that the rich man ended up dead. Unfortunately for him the machine, whatever it was, is in about a hundred pieces and there doesn’t seem to be an instructional manual just lying around for the ancient machine etched with old and unknown hexes.

But it isn’t just the dead man who needs Owen to work quickly. Malachi, the thief and familiar found running from the room with the dead body in it, had only just been saved by Owen’s intervention from a quick and probably fatal incarceration for a murder he most definitely didn’t commit. But even if the Metropolitan Police can’t charge him for the crime, that doesn’t mean the real murderer is gonna let a witness just walk around free as a bird…or, well, fox in Mal’s case.

With a murderer stalking Mal, and wedding bells stalking Owen, time is quickly running out for both of them. Not the least because Mal is Owen’s familiar…and when the clock runs out, there is a good chance no one is getting what they want.

I would love to say that this book is my favorite of the series, but that’d be like saying chocolate is better than coffee–I love them both deeply and equally, and I could never choose between them. Same with the books of Jordan L. Hawk’s Hexworld series. Magic and mystery and shape-shifting familiars. I couldn’t ask for more.

But that doesn’t mean we won’t get that more anyways, because hot damn was this a ball of fun. Kinky, kinky fun. Owen and Mal light this book up with not a little bit of chemistry, and plenty of heat to go around. I really wasn’t expecting this when I picked up this book, but I can’t claim to be sorry. The whole domination/submission thing really worked for these two characters, and made the connection between them seem all the more electric. But even when the sex part of their relationship wasn’t at the forefront, these guys really clicked. There was just something about the mild-mannered Owen, and the wild and crafty Mal, that fit almost immediately.

And, as always, Jordan crafts a wonderful mystery to go along with the romance. With twists and turns, betrayal and secrets coming to light, we are pulled from page to page as the plot unfolds. You never quite know where the story is going, but you can sure bet it will be one hell of a ride.

There is just something about these characters and this world that has me enthralled with each new story. And as the days turn colder up here I can’t think of a better way to spend a lazy afternoon than curling up with a cup of coffee (with a dash of chocolate) and letting this witch and his foxy familiar ensnare me once more.


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1,392 reviews325 followers
January 26, 2019
Hexmaker is as amazing as Hexbreaker! Wow, what a great follow up to the Hexworld series. I never thought I will fell so much for Dr. Owen Yates. When I read about him in previous book, I thought he is an old scholar. LoL!

Owen is a young nobleman who is passionate about his job in MWP, however due to his obligation as an heir he might need to make some sacrifice to appease his family. Now, here comes the thieving fox, Malachi who was caught in a crossfire between the lawmaker and a murderer and thank goodness Owen is here to save the day.

Owen is all preppy, responsible, honorable and always wanted to do the right thing, even bonding with a thief. I love the fact that Owen just accept Malachi with open arms despite Malachi's past because he is such a good man who will treat his familiar right. Malachi is also a fun and mischievous character although he is not as over the top as Cicero. Those bedroom scene is really spicy and kinky.

The story arc and suspense surrounding the murder of a high society is also keep me flipping the pages. The event that unfold is some awesome story telling. Who is the bad guy here? And please don't hurt my Malachi! I wonder how long will this series play out because on one hand I want to read as many witch/familiar couples as possible, on the other hand I really need to know who the hell is the master mind behind all these crime.
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1,211 reviews71 followers
February 18, 2018
Tristan James just took me to another level with this performance. If he’s doing the rest of the books in the series, I’m definitely getting them in audio.

The voice performance of Malachi just enhanced my enjoyment of this book. Of course, the writing of this story was top notch and the mystery totally unpredictable(just how I like it).The sexy parts were just a great cherry on top.

Malachi was my favourite with his sense of humour and his general endearing sarcastic attitude.Owen was also likeable though it took him a while to loosen up enough to enjoy himself.

Nick’s book is next and given the way he abhorred witches, it should be interesting to see how he finally ended up with one.

Fantastic work J.L. Fantastic!!
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2,099 reviews
August 7, 2021
I am really loving this series and HEXMAKER was just as much fun as the first book! Owen and Mal provide a different dynamic as forensic hexmaker and thief, not to mention complete opposites in terms of demeanor, social standing, and upbringing. This book definitely explores more of the differences between the way familiars are treated in the lower classes vs. the upper classes and I found it really interesting, but also heartbreaking. Thankfully Owen has no desire to treat Mal like a pet or a servant and this is something Mal recognizes instantly even though he’s nervous about having found his witch. I was also happy to see that HEXMAKER brings the witch/familiar connection into the open right away instead of keeping it hidden the way the past two books have done since it provided a nice chance of pace.

I loved seeing these two fall in love though it’s certainly complicated with Owen’s impending wedding to a woman he doesn’t want to marry, not to mention Mal is the only witness to a murder and is now under police protection. Together, they work to solve the case and find a way to put their own desires over duty to their family or past. Mal and Owen were really sweet together outside the bedroom and then very sexy in the bedroom with some mild Dom/sub play.

I can’t wait to read more in the series because each time I pick up a book in this series I just don't want to put it down.


Content Warning: As a child Mal was kicked out of his home because his parents were too poor to care for him; side character who attempted suicide and is not severely paralyzed; references to depression, child abuse, domestic abuse, death
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1,930 reviews41 followers
October 15, 2016
This is another winning series from this author. Owen is a moral fellow, and Mal his contrast, yet also his balance, and his other half.

The mystery is exciting, and although it worked out as I thought, it was only because I wanted it be that way, that I figured it out (if that makes sense).

Also, .

Anyway, quick, slightly kinky, satisfying read. More please.
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2,070 reviews
September 23, 2017
I enjoyed this book, perhaps not as much as the first. Malachi was a great familiar and I liked his attitude, although I preferred Cisero's sass - must be a cat thing ! He struggled to find his place and honor his own values, even among thieves he was on the outer. He meets Owen and realizes he's his witch. Owen was all about duty but really had a kinky sub side which he couldn't explore.., well until he hooked up with Mal. Owen was expected to marry Edith and save face in the fortune 400. Of course things don't go to plan and dramas occur. While Owen was a "nice guy" he annoyed me so my rating really goes to Mal. This certainly is a fun series
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3,064 reviews86 followers
October 29, 2016
I am IN LOVE with this world!!! There has not been a mark against a book in this series. I'm in love and so happy every time I get to pick up one of these stories. There's something so fascinating about the way magic is structured in this historical world. I love the idea of hexes that need a witches magic to power them, and a witch than needs a familiar to really find their strength. I adore that familiars choose their witch, and the way the bond strengthens between them. The tension that is built into the witch/familiar relationship is a wonderful counterpoint. Not all bondings are good ones, they can be forced, and this has led to a build up of resentment within the world of the familiars and not all is roses and bubblegum.

Malachi is a thief. It's the only life he really knows. He was raised in an orphanage and only escaped from that life when he was taken under the wing of one of the top crime rings in the city. They trained him and he's worked his way up the ranks to being the top second story man in the organization. When a job goes wrong though and Malachi stumbles over the murder of a man from one of the top families his life spins out of control as the cops have targeted Mal as the murderer. Only the arrival of the forensic hexman for the Metropolitan Witch Police, Dr. Owen Yates pulls Mal out of the frying pan. At least for the moment.

Dr. Owen Yates has gone against his powerful families wishes and made a career for himself as part of the Metropolitan Witch Police. He's the only forensic hexman in the game. There's only one problem, as much as he'd love nothing more than to keep working for the police, his family pressures will soon have him leaving the force to marry and take a place in his future wife's families company. The fact that the wedding alone does nothing for him is of little consequence. Owen feels he owes his family and will do his duty. A chance encounter at the scene of a murder spins sends his life tumbling on its head.

So of course we have the troubled Mal needing to be reformed and the dutiful Owen needing a little bit of a shake up in his life. And these two are awesome together. I really enjoyed watching Mal try to control the things that are going on around him. He tries so hard to manipulate the world around him and keep himself from falling. Owen tries desperately to fix everything and yet it's only together that they can really soar. There was a wonderful added later with the domination submission elements here. It was slightly kinky and oh so wonderful. I loved seeing Mal's fox-like characteristics shinning through his nature. He's crafty and sneaky. There was a lot more of the classism elements of witches and their familiars discussed in this story. Owen and Mal are from opposite side of the tracks and Owen's family looks down on Mal for more than one reason. He's poor, he's a thief, and he's a familiar. But he's Owen's.

The mystery here was entertaining. We've got quite the murder investigation going on and Owen's got to get everything wrapped up before his wedding when he's off of the police force and onto a whole different life. This was twisty and fun. There's an underworld of tension brewing and it's spilling over. A murder's not only a murder and a theft isn't only a theft. There's greater plots afoot. I enjoyed watching the way Owen and Mal went about figuring out what was going on. Their two different styles complemented each other and challenged the other.

I've adored every book in this story. The characters are all different, but I've fallen in love with each and every one of them. I love seeing the little bits and pieces of the other characters as they pop up in the later stories. But each new couple introduced has their own wonderful characteristics and complicated plot to unravel. There are greater hints in this story that there's something bigger coming and I can't wait to discover more. I'm in my happy place and I'm not leaving. :)
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789 reviews110 followers
June 12, 2018
I love and adore this series! Really love the Shyte out of it!

I have read three Novelas and two books now for the series and all of them were resounding five star reads.

This series crosses several genres it’s historical, it’s fantasy, it’s PNR it’s mystery, it’s a love story all set in an alternative universe of late 19 C New York City that includes witches and animal or “familiars.” I am a “reluctant” fantasy reader so when I read it, selections need to have a foundation in something that is familiar to me. In this case, it’s gilded age New York City. I’m terribly interested in the “Big Apple” during the late 19 C and as an added bonus, I was born and spent my formative years in “The Empire State.”

The stories involve a usually unlikely pairing of a witch and “familiar” who is an animal shifter. Each witch has an unknown, but specific “familiar” when bonded, enhances and increases the power and effectiveness of their magic. The fun part is that when witch and familiar find each other, they are not what each envisioned for their “other half.” They bond, havoc ensues, there is a crime to be solved, and the MCs, so unlike each other, so reluctant to be paired/bonded with the other, learn to trust, appreciate and love each other.

In this installment, the witch is a wealthy, Harvard educated member of the “elite” 400 (old Money) high society and an orphaned, Irish (catholic) thief—two different worlds collide, with a very sweet D/s relationship with very light bondage. No rough stuff, it’s all very sweet. Usually, one of the MCs is a part of the Metropolitan Witch Police (MWP). In this case, the knickerbocker MC is on staff at the MWP using his education as a PhD credentialed forensic “hexologist.”

For anyone who is interested in this series, there is a 53 page introductory novella, The 13th Hex that costs 99 cents. It sets up the world in which the series will take place and sets up the template for the series. Try the novella and you’ll love it and want to read more!
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8,293 reviews482 followers
October 4, 2016
A Joyfully Jay review.

5 stars


Ok, so you all know I love me some Jordan L. Hawk right? I mean, in 2015, I read 19 of her books, basically starting from scratch and reading everything I could get my hands on. So as always, I was thrilled to pick up her newest release, this one the second in the Hexworld series (well third if you count the short story the 13th Hex). Hexmaker continues the world of the Metropolitan Witch Police and their familiars. This time we get a delicious opposites attract with the straight laced, police officer Owen matched up with the free spirited thief Malachi.

First off, I absolutely loved these guys together. I am a sucker for opposites attract already, but these guys were just such a perfect match. I got a giggle at how kind of horrified each were at the other given their occupations. But at the same time, these guys are immediately able to overcome their preconceptions and connect with one another. I appreciated this particularly from Owen, who could have refused to bond or abandoned Malachi, but instead accepts him into his life immediately, despite the complications Mal brings. Mal’s more light hearted demeanor helps Owen to open up and Owen’s strong, steady presence helps ground Mal’s tumultuous life. And holy cow, are these guys a perfect match in the bedroom. Hawk is wonderful at creating heat and chemistry between her characters, but this book is perhaps the steamiest of hers I have read with that nice bit of domination and submission going on between the men. Seriously, they are incredibly hot together and Hawk gets the emotional connection between them so right.

Read Jay’s review in its entirety here.


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