Talk:2013 Football League One play-off final/GA1
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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 08:55, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox
- Caption?
Lead
Moore saving attempts from Clayton Donaldson, Adam Forshaw and Bradley Wright-Phillips
— The body of the article mentiosn the attempts, but not that Moore saved them.
Route to the final
- Perhaps clarify that the Football League Championship is the second tier of the English football league system.
Kevin Dawson levelled the tie
— Perhaps clarify that this was an aggregate tie.- You also might mention the score of the second Yeovil Town–Sheffield United game (2–0), before mentioning the aggregate score.
Swindon's Massimo Luongo opened the scoring
— When?In injury time
— Of the second half?Adam Rooney scored an own goal
— Any further details?Nathan Byrne being sent off
— Why?
Background
- Any playoff wins for Brentford?
Summary
- Wembley Stadium should be linked somewhere in the body of the article. The body could also be a bit more explicit that the final was played there, rather than mere references such as "to progress to Wembley" and "a Wembley crowd of 41,955".
- It's a somewhat short section. Anything else worth mentioning—near misses, substitutions, yellow cards, etc.?
Details
- Are the substitutes without green arrows bench players who didn't make it in? Any reason this article lists a bunch, whereas other articles list only those who played?
- Can man of the match Marek Štěch be mentioned anywhere? And it's somewhat odd that the game's best player (so some said) isn't mentioned in "Summary".
Post-match
- Why not name Gary Johnson?
- What was the third great game Johnson referred to—the semis, the final, and what else?
- Uwe Rösler should get a full name and link.
References
- Foster has a harv warning, which sfn footnotes would fix. Meanwhile, should it be in a standalone section, "Bibliography"? And how about adding the subtitle?
Overall
- The Rambling Man, comments above. --Usernameunique (talk) 08:55, 8 March 2021 (UTC)