Talk:TimeClock Plus

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Some quick thoughts on how the article can be improved.

• It needs a proper lead section (important, but probably should be written last)
• It has too many graphics (including the features table) that break up the flow of the text
• All those quotes should be converted to narrative text
• The sections should be more logical: perhaps History, Features, Reception
  • History could contain the content in the present History and Versions
  • Features could include the present Applications and much of Reception
  • Reception could include details of where it's used and any independent reviews etc (if they can be found)

 —SMALLJIM  16:11, 18 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Update: I've done the above.  —SMALLJIM  16:50, 25 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]