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Naval activity

Large landing craft convoy crosses the English Channel on 6 June 1944

Operation Neptune, as the naval part of the D-Day invasion was known, was a primarily Royal Navy affair, both in planning and execution. This is widely considered ‘a never surpassed masterpiece of planning’.[29] In overall command was Admiral Sir Bertram Ramsay RN, who as Flag Officer Dover had controlled the evacuation of over 300,000 soldiers from Dunkirk four years earlier. He had also been responsible for the naval planning of the invasion of North Africa in 1942 and one of the two fleets carrying troops for the invasion of Sicily the following year.

The invasion fleet was drawn from eight different navies, comprising 6,939 vessels: 1,213 warships, 4,126 transport vessels (landing ships and landing craft), and 736 ancillary craft and 864 merchant vessels. Out of the 2,468 major landing vessels in the two task forces deployed on 6 June 1944 only 346 were American. Of the 23 cruisers covering the landings, 17 were British. Of the 16 warships covering the American Western beaches (Utah and Omaha) 50% were British and Allied ships. There were 195,700 naval personnel involved; 112,824 (58%) of them were British; 52,889 (30%) were from the US and 4,988 from Allied countries.[15]

The Allied Naval Expeditionary Force was divided into two Naval Task Forces: Western (Rear-Admiral Alan G Kirk USN) and Eastern (Rear-Admiral Sir Philip Vian RN – another veteran of the Italian landings).

The warships provided cover for the transports against any enemy surface warships, submarines or aerial attack, and supported the landings with shore bombardment. These ships included the Allied Task Force "O". A small part of the naval operation was Operation Gambit, when British midget submarines supplied navigation beacons to guide landing craf
— Preceding unsigned comment added by 85.13.10.59 (talk) 22:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

to follow with the above who made the ships should be pointed out also being that for LST's and LCVP's most were made in the USA. the LST wiki page states that 92.5% were american made and 100% of the LCVP's, 20,000, were made in the USA 97.115.170.98 (talk) 09:42, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

   I doubt that i need to comment beyond my minutes-old ed-summ which reads

Clean up punctuation salad: the ungrammatical use of semic is just confusing, and parens already serve to mark paren sent as commenting on what precedes it

re my rewriting a supposed sentence with that had had this bizarre syntax and punc'n:

<independent clause>; (<independent clause>.).

But further, the "was" would most smoothly with least astonishment be read as implicitly saying he was (already) famous for it at the timeframe of the first clause, i. e. at the time of the landings and/or discovery of the error; actually, it's unlikely he was immediately "famous" outside his immediate subordinates, and in fact he surely became progressively more famous for it in the day or two after the utterance; hence my shift to "became".
   Nonetheless, closer attention to the latter clause is still warranted. One states, as a rule, facts (or what one is purporting to be facts), while saying establishes the fact of utterance, without commitment (by our writer) as to the veracity or other status(es) of the content uttered. I don't mean to suggest uncertainty about truth, but one goes further and declares something that becomes true by virtue of the utterance in question.
   To be more explicit, i expect Rosie was regarded by the immediate audience as having issued an order and simultaneously made a very short inspirational speech: the substance of the order was

don't do anything on the assumption that we're going to move back to our assigned place, (and then just proceed as if we had been delivered late), tho of course we'll all pay attention to what our options are re planned events whose effect will be different from expected bcz we were expected to be elsewhere.

and the substance of the speech was

plans are never cast in concrete bcz you're never sure what the enemy will do, so the need to improvise is something we've been anticipating all along; let's get to work.

   Thus IMO something stronger than my "said" ("declared", "pronounced", "announced"?) may be called for; IMO the tone it's given in sources is relevant.
--Jerzy•t 03:05 & 03:20, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

Was Operation Overlord delayed by two weeks? According to the Stephen Ambrose book, "Band of Brothers" (which was the basis for the cable miniseries), Operation Overlord was to have originally taken place two weeks earlier but was delayed due to bad weather. This conflicts with the statement in the entry stating that the weather in May was "fine". In addition, the 1962 movie "The Longest Day", A US military leader states that, "this operation has already been delayed once". Perhaps some clarification is needed here? 76.105.145.42 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 20:06, 27 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The allegations of rape against US servicemen has been placed in the "See also" section, but its reference is a review of a book by Mary Louise Roberts in a German newspaper "Der Spiegel". A second review of the same book in the "Daily Mail's" webpage cannot be accessed. These two citations are from tertiary sources. This sort of "sound bite" reference is frowned upon under Wikipedia:Primary Secondary and Tertiary Sources, if the secondary source (Professor Roberts's book) is available. I note for example, that the specific allegation in "Der Spiegel's" review refers to GIs who were being repatriated through Le Havre in the summer of 1945, after VE Day, not part of the Normandy campaign at all. If the claim is to be substantiated, the secondary source ought to be cited, with page numbers. HLGallon (talk) 11:40, 2 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

What is the "Daily Mail's" webpage cannot be accessed? Your personal network condition is no relation to wikipedia. And according to HLGallon's logic, only allowed allegation of rapes are on the day and before rapists eyes. It's nonsense, who could allege before the rapists eyes.--Syngmung (talk) 12:29, 2 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The link does work [1] - sources (Der Spiegel, for example) are fine. However, your link, is a failed proposal → [2]--77.181.236.141 (talk) 12:40, 2 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Nevertheless, if a book is to be used as a source, it is both more accurate and good manners to obtain a copy, read it and cite it, rather than its publicity blurb in a newspaper. Citing potentially sensationalist reviews has resulted in badly skewed POV slants in articles such as the Bengal famine of 1943. HLGallon (talk) 18:44, 2 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Der Spiegel is a WP:RS, that is used hundreds, if not thousands of times, in almost as many WP articles. It is not a "newspaper", and its content is not "publicity blurb". --77.181.236.141 (talk) 20:14, 2 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I must confess to being unhappy at this inclusion. It does not seem to refer to the Normandy landings, but during the campaign itself - if true? The original editor seems to have an obsession with "rape" in wartime. I would prefer much better sources before these allegations are left in the article. David J Johnson (talk) 09:41, 3 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The see also links and sources don't mention the "Normandy landings" so the inclusion in the "See also" section doesn't seem relevant to the article topic. They may be relevant to a broader article. I have boldly removed them once, but have been reverted - I can't make sense of the edit comment used. "Undid revision 558021548 by Hohum (talk) The article take up women in Normandy". (Hohum ^@) 11:41, 3 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

It's choplogic word play. The Normandy landing forces occupied Normandy and raped women, before they returned home or marched to smash other area Nazi forces. The incidents are the very related this article.--Syngmung (talk) 13:41, 3 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with Hohum. Syngmung appears to be making a point that rape was common during the campaign in France. The point should therefore be made in a higher level article: Invasion of Normandy or more likely, Operation Overlord. Normandy Landings focuses on the action during one day, the rapes cover a longer period. Stephen Kirrage ^{talk - contribs} 16:01, 3 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with the points made by Stephen and Hohum. The landings basically only refer to one day. The one source is a newly promoted book, the Daily Mail feature is only a review of same. I would prefer more reliable sources and I'm concerned that the promoting "editor" seems to be obsessed with rape and cannot supply a readable summary of their edits. Regards, David, David J Johnson (talk) 18:05, 3 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

This does seem WP:undue for this particular article and would be better suited to a more general article on the invasion as a whole. Dennis Brown / 2¢ / © / @ 18:25, 3 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I dont think inadequate sources, but Dennis Brown commnet is good answer.--Syngmung (talk) 13:44, 5 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

We are fast reaching a point, Syngmung, where no one cares what you think. You clearly have not read WP:OR, in particularly the section WP:SYNTH in enough detail. If you continue posting this original research on all of these articles, then you are almost certainly going to get either blocked or topic-banned very soon. Please acknowledge the fact that you cannot in good conscience attribute a claim to a particular author if you have not read that author's book and can only cite book reviews. Eh doesn't afraid of anyone (talk) 16:21, 5 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• ANI. A topic ban has been proposed for Syngmung. 86.121.18.17 (talk) 06:55, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Most of the bias has been removed, but there are still some rather pointed statements that read like it was a competition between British and US forces. I'll have a think and try and come up with some alternative wording over the next day or two. For the sake of clarity, I'm British myself but I'm not really interested in flag waving. The various allies had their strengths and weaknesses, but this article isn't the place to have a contest. I'll also reword anything that seems to be pro-american (or for that matter, pro-canadian, pro-norwegian, pro-italian, ad-nausium!) bias if I find it. If anyone's got anything to suggest, obviously feel free to comment. OneCatch (talk) 12:00, 6 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Decisive allied victory - The greatest bias in almost every article, when its rare to see Decisive Axis victory but Axis had more decisive victories, but writing decisive is no longer neutral --Obitauri (talk) 10:16, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

In the section entitled "Weather" it states: "...a day near the full moon was needed both for illumination during the hours of darkness and to take advantage of the spring tides, the former to illuminate navigational landmarks for the crews of aircraft, gliders and landing craft, the latter to provide the deepest possible water to help in navigating over defensive obstacles placed by the German forces in the surf on the seaward approaches to the beaches." This would seem to conflict with information in the section entitled "Atlantic Wall" which states: "The attacks were timed for low tide because it minimized the effectiveness of landing obstacles that were likely to have resulted in drowned troops; many landing craft would have been holed and sunk during the final approach." One section indicates the invasion was planned for high tide, the other indicates it was planned for low tide. Is this a true discrepancy? CookDing (talk) 12:22, 16 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Writing Decisive victory is no longer Neutral point of view. People must decide themselves if it was decisive or not. We must remove "Decisive" from this article, later in other articles as well. Writing "Decisive Victory" is no longer neutral. Wikipedia:NPOV --Obitauri (talk) 10:05, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]