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New draft
Hello, I've prepared an extended draft at User:Richard Nevell/sandbox. Since it mentions work of the Castle Studies Trust and I'm on the charity's board I would appreciate it if someone could have a look and check that the balance is ok. Then if everyone's happy I'd like to copy the contents over to this article. Richard Nevell (talk) 16:52, 13 March 2016 (UTC)
- Looks OK for balance at a quick read through. Probably some copy edits and changes needed in places. I could do those in the draft but then a history merge would then be required to preserve the edit history. Keith D (talk) 21:00, 13 March 2016 (UTC)
- Copy edits very much appreciated! I'll leave it up to you where those edits take place (sandbox or here). Richard Nevell (talk) 21:27, 13 March 2016 (UTC)
- @Hchc2009: do you have any thoughts on the article? Richard Nevell (talk) 21:35, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
- Will take a quick look on Thursday night Richard. Hchc2009 (talk) 21:50, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
- Apologies for the delay. Looks balanced and reasonable to me - nice work! Hope the Trust is going well. Hchc2009 (talk) 08:24, 20 March 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you :) I'll copy the text over later today. I'll look for a bit more detail on the structure and see if I can take the article to GAN. The Trust's work is certainly interesting and luckily some of the projects have been fitting with my own research. Richard Nevell (talk) 11:25, 20 March 2016 (UTC)
- Apologies for the delay. Looks balanced and reasonable to me - nice work! Hope the Trust is going well. Hchc2009 (talk) 08:24, 20 March 2016 (UTC)
- Will take a quick look on Thursday night Richard. Hchc2009 (talk) 21:50, 15 March 2016 (UTC)