User contributions for 68.15.57.109

14 May 2013

• 19:0319:03, 14 May 2013 diff hist +23 March 1989 geomagnetic storm →Geomagnetic storm and auroras: original text asserts unsupported declaration of "many people worried"
• 15:4115:41, 14 May 2013 diff hist −1 Baltimore News-American →History: correct spelling error

13 May 2013

• 22:1722:17, 13 May 2013 diff hist +66 Highlander Research and Education Center →Backlash: correct name and affiliation of Donald West
• 22:1322:13, 13 May 2013 diff hist +3 Highlander Research and Education Center →Backlash: correct name of newspaper reporter used to discredit Rosa Parks and Martin Luther King during attendance at Highlander meeting in 1955.
• 22:0322:03, 13 May 2013 diff hist +36 Septima Poinsette Clark →Autobiographies: improve English grammar, work usage and sentence structure.
• 21:5821:58, 13 May 2013 diff hist 0 Septima Poinsette Clark →Early life: correct noun form, "effected" to verb form, "affected" as required by English grammar rules.
• 20:5820:58, 13 May 2013 diff hist +12 Margot Asquith →Early life: correct and improve English usage

30 April 2013

• 19:2619:26, 30 April 2013 diff hist 0 Operation Eagle Claw No edit summary
• 19:1119:11, 30 April 2013 diff hist +5 Sikorsky CH-53 Sea Stallion →Further development: clarify English usage by removal of unclear use of multiple ANDs.

17 April 2013

• 19:2719:27, 17 April 2013 diff hist +1 Mason Machine Works →Textile Machinery
• 19:1819:18, 17 April 2013 diff hist +4 Mason Machine Works →Origins
• 19:0219:02, 17 April 2013 diff hist −3 Union Pacific GTELs →First Generation: correct minor English usage and spelling

24 March 2013

• 17:3917:39, 24 March 2013 diff hist +1 Alas Nacionales correct singular possessive third person English pronoun
• 17:3617:36, 24 March 2013 diff hist +10 Aeroperú Flight 603 →Legal settlement: improve tape color description

13 February 2013

• 19:5019:50, 13 February 2013 diff hist 0 Reginald Fessenden →Continuing work and dismissal from NESCO: improve English grammar / punctuation

7 February 2013

• 16:2616:26, 7 February 2013 diff hist 0 Variable-gain amplifier No edit summary

4 February 2013

• 00:4800:48, 4 February 2013 diff hist −8 Margaret Hoover remove emotional adjective to meet Wikipedia basic standards

29 January 2013

• 20:0020:00, 29 January 2013 diff hist −6 Extended Display Identification Data remove "edid" as part of definition since one cannot define a noun by using the same term in the definition

14 January 2013

• 16:3216:32, 14 January 2013 diff hist 0 Miller effect No edit summary

10 January 2013

• 17:4317:43, 10 January 2013 diff hist +362 Pilar (boat) →Acquisition: expand and correct description of vessel delivery, from published biographical information
• 17:3617:36, 10 January 2013 diff hist 0 Pilar (boat) Capitalize spelling of Gulf Stream, per standard cartographic usage
• 17:3117:31, 10 January 2013 diff hist +644 Henry Stommel →Academic posts: Expand description of unexplained word PANULIRUS and the data obtained from the vessel

7 January 2013

• 20:3020:30, 7 January 2013 diff hist +132 Carlos Baker No edit summary
• 20:2220:22, 7 January 2013 diff hist +401 Carlos Baker These further comments should probably be placed in a new section under Criticism, if I understand Wiki general outline suggestions. Please help.
• 20:1220:12, 7 January 2013 diff hist +164 Carlos Baker Do not know how to insert proper reference to the Gellhorn book in Reference section. Please assist if you can.

4 January 2013

• 20:3720:37, 4 January 2013 diff hist 0 William Walton (painter) →Secret diplomatic mission: correct another typo
• 20:3620:36, 4 January 2013 diff hist 0 William Walton (painter) →Secret diplomatic mission
• 20:3520:35, 4 January 2013 diff hist 0 William Walton (painter) →Role in Kennedy's funeral: correct spelling of "daze," the noun, from "doze," the verb

2 January 2013

• 19:2219:22, 2 January 2013 diff hist +7 New Castle, Pennsylvania →History: corrected full name of abbreviation "WPA"
• 16:5516:55, 2 January 2013 diff hist +55 The Old Man and the Sea →Plot summary: The Gulf Stream is NOT in the Gulf of Mexico as depicted in the novel, but within the Straits of Florida bounded by the Florida Keys to the north and Cuba to the south

7 December 2012

• 18:2418:24, 7 December 2012 diff hist +1 Paul Massing →Life and career

6 December 2012

• 19:4119:41, 6 December 2012 diff hist −1 Media Matters for America →Tax-exempt status challenge

4 December 2012

• 17:4017:40, 4 December 2012 diff hist +116 Spark-gap transmitter Change "to" to "or", since the frequency is not variable, but is rather the common line frequency of the country of origin.

27 November 2012

• 20:2320:23, 27 November 2012 diff hist +413 Antenna (radio) →Overview: Expand the definition of gain as applied to passive antennas.

20 November 2012

• 22:2822:28, 20 November 2012 diff hist +10 Bill Langan →Career

9 October 2012

• 17:3817:38, 9 October 2012 diff hist −1 Bush Six →U.S. Embassy Cables: correct spelling of "into"

2 October 2012

• 19:5419:54, 2 October 2012 diff hist +38 Envisat →Loss of contact: Insert proper SI unit of data, as well as relating this figure to lesser SI prefixes.

26 September 2012

• 21:5621:56, 26 September 2012 diff hist −9 Tektronix →Slump and Sale: remove redundant "however"

24 September 2012

• 18:3418:34, 24 September 2012 diff hist +214 G95 Remove description "dead" and change wording to indicate that the compiler is stable and exhibits few issues.

23 September 2012

• 18:5218:52, 23 September 2012 diff hist −12 History of Grenada →Truth and reconciliation commission: Remove term which stated writer's opinion, rather than the simple fact of the creation of the project.
• 18:4218:42, 23 September 2012 diff hist +4 History of Grenada →Invasion: Correct reference to "the Bishop" (a religious prelate) to "Maurice Bishop" the leader of the overthrown government.
• 16:2216:22, 23 September 2012 diff hist 0 USS Louisville (CA-28) →World War II: Correct English punctuation.

22 September 2012

• 17:4317:43, 22 September 2012 diff hist −9 NameBase Remove single word "communist" from description of SDS, since there is no citation, and relevant wiki page fails to confirm the assertion.

20 September 2012

• 20:5320:53, 20 September 2012 diff hist +7 Tlatelolco massacre Inconsistent usage of the conjunction "and" altered to "as well as" at second usage in the same sentence.
• 20:4820:48, 20 September 2012 diff hist +18 Tlatelolco massacre A definition shall not restate the term or words being defined, in original or altered sequence.
• 14:4814:48, 20 September 2012 diff hist +1 Coral Gables House No edit summary
• 14:3314:33, 20 September 2012 diff hist −2 Sumner Welles →Marriage and family life: Correct English usage.
• 14:1514:15, 20 September 2012 diff hist +1 Gerardo Machado →Political life: Improve English punctuation.

13 September 2012

• 18:4918:49, 13 September 2012 diff hist +53 Omega (navigation system) →OMEGA: correct and extend pulse repetition description
• 17:0417:04, 13 September 2012 diff hist +416 Omega (navigation system) →OMEGA