Talk:Feminine beauty ideal
Is this 'article' for real? Delete it, stat. 60.242.167.154 (talk) 12:02, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
Schhuoy 05:28, 8 November 2013 (UTC)Since I’m working on the feminine beauty ideals wiki page, in which I am just adding 2 new content to it. Just by looking at the wiki page, there is the introduction about feminine beauty ideals and the facts about it. Furthermore, there is a section about Fairy tales stories, which gives good information about how beauty is, portray in stories. Along with that, there is section about the response on fairy tale stories. In this section, it explains what children learn from listening or reading about fairy tales. For example the feminine beauty ideals looks in a good and bad way. Besides that, I would like to add a section about mass media impact because it is definitely a powerful tool to teach young girls about feminine beauty ideals. Furthermore, I will be discussing the consequence about mass media.
Edit suggestions
Hi Just a couple of copyedit suggestions regarding the new sections added to this article. First in the ‘Mass Media’ section, to either space or hyphen “ultra thin” since it is not normally one word. The sentence in the same section that begins with “Targeting markets…” is a little wordy and needs some reworking grammatically so that it flows better. Also in the ‘Mass Media’ section, in the last sentence take out the word “it” so that it instead says, “which could lead them” rather than “which it could lead them….” In the ‘Consequences’ section in the second sentence edit it to read, “there are always major setbacks” instead of “there is always a major setback” due to the fact that “ideas” is plural. Either than that, you've added some important sections to make this article better. Great job! Tkala808 (talk) 23:52, 22 November 2013 (UTC)tkala808