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I know I've already floated this elsewhere, but I wanted to get a discussion going specifically on this topic. Here's the problems I see:
1) About 50-60% of the page is dedicated to the investigation and political controversy in the U.S.
2) As others have stated, the heavy media coverage on this means that it has at least some degree of notability. However, in my view it should take up about 20% of this page at most. This page is about the embassy attack.
3) Obviously, deleting it would not be popular, and I wouldn't support that either.
So the obvious solution in my mind, right now, is to make a separate page for the U.S. investigation and political controversy surrounding it. So far, the only person who has replied to this idea (as far as I know) is Hasdi, who said it wouldn't be notable enough it didn't "deserve" its own page, also noting that there was a POV issue. To that, I would say that POV issues can be fixed, and clearly, it seems that most people agree that the heavy news coverage of it makes it notable.

And there seems to be plenty of info here to fill the page with.

So that's my two cents. What are other editor's thoughts?--Yalens (talk) 14:17, 10 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Take a look at the September 11 attacks article. Most of the content concerns events that occurred after the attacks. -- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 16:26, 10 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think the analogy FutureTrillionaire brings up holds. Keep this to one page.--Cirrus Editor (talk) 16:36, 10 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I would agree but it's difficult to edit this article as news develops when there is at least one editor insisting that "the U.S. investigation and political controversy" is already getting more than twice as much attention as it ought to be getting.--Brian Dell (talk) 16:02, 11 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

And the one editor likes to selectively cut information from the article that is not flattering to the Obama Administration and their "take" on the attack. I've spent alot of time gathering information from alot of different sources for this article, particularly the aftermath investigation, and to see this information cut entirely, or trimmed extensively and watered down so as to leave little meaning from the original information, is both eye opening and upsetting. To cut information and then to threaten to "slap this page with {{POV}} until the November election)".... Is this what we're about here? I thought not. Maybe I'm wrong. Maybe Wikipedia editors fail at their own standards.--Cirrus Editor (talk) 18:00, 11 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I presume you are talking about my edit. Look, just explain to me why we need to have this text in in BOTH the lead AND in the "Criticism of U.S. government response" section.

The Washington Post Fact Checker blog reported on September 27 that the Obama administration's response was a "case study of how an administration can carefully keep the focus as long as possible on one storyline [the video] — and then turn on a dime when it is no longer tenable." [1]

You have a problem that I took one of them out? From a blog article no less. The lede should be a summary of the rest of the article (and in desperate need of cleaning up), so there should be at most one line to summarize "Republican Party members took issue with the Democratic Party controlled administration, accusing the White House and State Department of overplaying the role of the protests against a trailer for a controversial anti-Islamic movie and the alleged reluctance to label the attack as terrorism..." Is that too much to ask? — Hasdi Bravo • 18:50, 11 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The lede certainly is long, and for some reason or another, three of its five paragraphs (in fact, the three longest ones) are devoted to the US politics. And I'm pretty sure at least half our readers didn't come to the page for that reason... therefore, I'd throw my support behind Hasdi's proposed summary line. --Yalens (talk) 23:52, 11 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hasdi's proposed revision is inaccurate. The House Oversight and Government Reform Committee hearing on Capitol Hill just happened yesterday. No information in the article is from the results of this hearing. One Republican congressman is asking, "Why were we lied to?"[2] The Homeland Security Chairman has called for Susan Rice's resignation. Reuters was reporting that the Obama administration--within hours of the attack--"received about a dozen intelligence reports suggesting terrorists connected to al-Qaeda were involved." Yet, yesterday night, "President Obama acknowledged his administration passed faulty information to the public about last month's deadly attack on the U.S. Consulate in Benghazi, Libya, but suggested those reports came in the interest of keeping the public abreast of what they knew at the time. In an interview with ABC's Diane Sawyer that aired Wednesday night, Obama said "as information came in, information was put out," and those reports "may not have always been right the first time."[3] Which is it? The preponderance of the evidence from multiple intelligence sources is that it was a known terrorist attack, an assassination of a U.S. Ambassador, less than 24 hours after the attack. Yet Obama administration officials were using the "blame the video" story to the media for many days afterwards, on TV, at the UN, when the officials were at the ceremony returning the bodies to the U.S. Slate reporters wrote today: "The State Department said Tuesday it never concluded that the consulate attack in Libya stemmed from protests over an American-made video ridiculing Islam, raising further questions about why the Obama administration used that explanation for more than a week after assailants killed the U.S. ambassador and three other Americans."[4] Two days ago the AP reported: "The State Department says it never concluded that an attack that killed the U.S. ambassador to Libya was simply a protest gone awry, a statement that places the Obama administration's own foreign policy arm in sync with Republicans. That extraordinary message, appearing to question the administration's initial description of the attack on the U.S. Consulate in Benghazi, came in a department briefing Tuesday..." [5] This story is so fast moving it's hard to keep up with it. Instead of drawing party lines, I'm trying to fill in the many gaps and blanks that are in the article. Instead of changing Fox News to Faux News, I'm fixing vandalism on the article. I agree that the lede is getting a bit unweildy, but it shouldn't be watered down in the process. I read where Secretary of State Clinton was being considered to be called in to testify. That's not a small deal; that's a big deal.--Cirrus Editor (talk) 00:22, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

1. The 9/11 article has so many spin-off articles that there's a whole template. This article has zero. That's the difference in my mind.
2. Talk pages are supposed to be about discussing pages, not editors. But for the record, I hope you guys read the history and know that I wasn't the one who threatened to put on the POV tag, since I get the impression I'm the editor being talked about in third person here. Although based on Cirrus' statement, quite clearly there is some disagreement about POV between editors here...
3. Since you hardworking editors do a lot of research on this topic, is there specifically a problem with devoting a separate page to it? Not every reader comes to this page to read about U.S. politics. --Yalens (talk) 18:42, 11 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I just don't see any real need to create a new page for that. I don't have a problem with keeping the content here. -- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 18:52, 11 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

So you have no problem with this page being 60% about one-particular spin-off event? That doesn't resemble our model, the 9/11 page, at all...

Ah well, I might as well give up on this. I just think this is pretty long, and the news coverage certainly isn't going to stop- it's only going to get longer and longer.

Is there any argument AGAINST a separate page?--Yalens (talk) 23:54, 11 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

On 2nd look at the main 9/11 page, we see that there are separate sections for Timeline, Effects, Aftermath, Response, etc. and within those sections are additional pages. Is this the "template" you mean, Yalens? If so, what sections and pages might you propose to begin with?--Cirrus Editor (talk) 02:08, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

...yes, with a large amount of separate pages. I have nothing against the timeline, effects, and so on- in fact some of these aren't bad ideas. The separate pages is the point.--Yalens (talk) 03:15, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• What part are you proposing to take out if you make separate pages. From what I've read through, only about 10-15% are about partisan bickering. The rest, including the investigation and ESPECIALLY the congressional hearings are relevant, the latter should be under a new section "Congressional hearing", placed right after "Criticism of U.S. government response". It's really simple guys. Focus on what the U.S. administration DID, NOT what they SHOULD have done. Yes, it took Obama and company a while to acknowledge it was a terrorist attack not prompted by the film, despite what the Libyan government said. It may make him look bad, but that is what happened. Just because the Republicans are politicizing it (as if they could have done sooooo much better had they have been in charge) does not mean it is not relevant to this article and/or need to spun off into a different article. Likewise, documented actions that made Obama look good should not be removed either. The one silver lining I see in this tragic event is the boost of pro-American stance by Libyans (most of them are against and symphatetic of the killings), the mass shift towards government-regulated militia, etc, etc. There may be hope for our Middle East policy yet, but I am not holding my breath. :P One good thing about the congressional hearings is the shaking of the apple tree. We're getting lots of goodies of information on the events the lead up to Benghazi attack that can be captured in this article... even the possible outing of a "CIA nest" in Benghazi. *smh* — Hasdi Bravo • 14:19, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll think about page splits over the weekend. Re: your he said/she said: remember that multiple U.S. intelligence sources "knew within 24 hours of the attack that it was "planned and the work of al Qaeda affiliates operating in Eastern Libya." This is known. What's NOT known is why the Obama administration continued to cite the video as the source of the violence several days later. As late as September 25 (14 days after the attack), in his UN speech, the president cited "a crude and disgusting video [that] sparked outrage throughout the Muslim world." This was on Sept. 25, five DAYS after his press secretary first said it was "self-evident" that what happened was the work of terrorists.--173.67.63.73 (talk) 18:26, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If I had my way and a lot of time, I'd do the following:

1)Everything (partisan bickering included) about the US investigation and blabla would be added to its own page. --Yalens (talk) 15:29, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

US investigation on its own page. I can buy that.--173.67.63.73 (talk) 18:26, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

2)There would be one section about the competing narratives. There would be one paragraph, along these lines: "At first the US gov't believed that it was a reaction to the video. The Libyan government, meanwhile, had a different belief, stating there weren't protestors, and it originally suspected Gaddafi loyalists (or in a different statement, Al Qaeda?) to be behind it. Days later, it became clear that the perpetrators were Ansar al-Sharia and armed with notable weapons and blablabla. The US gov't changed their position to that it was a terrorist attack saying that their intelligence report had changed. The opposition Republican party criticized this narrative and blasted the government for an alleged intelligence failure. The opposition also argued that the embassy was not properly secured. The governing democratic party disputes these narratives, viewing them as political positioning in an election year. In October, there were congressional hearings on the issue." Then there'd be a see-also statement at the top of the section leading to the separate page about the controversy.--Yalens (talk) 15:29, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, I really cannot see how it's rationale to follow this thinking. See my note above. Multiple U.S. intelligence sources "knew within 24 hours of the attack that it was "planned and the work of al Qaeda affiliates operating in Eastern Libya."[6][7] The story broke on The Daily Beast. Fox News confirmed it.[8]. (Before anyone goes ballistic about "Faux News" and how they're biased, please see JournoList, where liberal-minded journalists and academics discussed politics and the news media and, among other things, how to "coordinate talking points on behalf of Democratic politicians, principally Barack Obama.") This source states that WITHIN HOURS, not 24 hours, the Obama administration knew it was a terror attack: Within hours of last month's attacks on U.S. diplomatic facilities in Benghazi, Libya, President Barack Obama's administration received about a dozen intelligence reports suggesting militants connected to al Qaeda were involved, three government sources said.[9] Three days ago the State Department admitted that they "suspected from the beginning that the ambush was pre-planned."[10] Odd, considering the U.S. intelligence sources were saying this WITHIN 24 HOURS of the attack. Anyway... --Cirrus Editor (talk) 18:43, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I assume "your note" is the one signed by the IP address, which I guess is you? Anyhow, I don't really think the details are relevant to the argument here...... --Yalens (talk) 20:58, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, it was. My bad. You don't think "the details are relevant to the argument here." Um. The details are the argument. You want to write a paragraph about competing narratives. I want to write a paragraph that tells the truth.--Cirrus Editor (talk) 14:13, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am, of course, willing to agree to a larger coverage here in the spirit of compromise. --Yalens (talk) 15:29, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

See, WP:TRUTH and WP:SOAPBOX. Wikipedia is not the place to find "the truth", just to document verifiable facts. If Obama was informed of a terror attack within hours, but publically stated otherwise, then we'll put the citation in. Whether it was a good or bad move is not really the place here. Maybe he didn't want people to panic, or didn't know that Libya and Egypt are two separate Muslim countries in the middle east (like most people...) The investigation and the evolving story from the administration is still relevant on this page, we just need to keep out the politicization of yet-another-screw-up-in-the-middle-east. .____. — Hasdi Bravo • 14:51, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I agree. I'll take some time today to put back into the article some facts that others have removed.--Cirrus Editor (talk) 14:58, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am undoubtedly late to the party, and not experienced at this so mea culpa for the poor formatting- here's my nickel (inflation ;):

I. Hasdi Bravo and Yalens make excellent and valid points about splitting the political controversy/investigation onto a separate page as that is the standard not the exception in WP as far as I have seen. The countering 9/11 page analogy is not valid as

1. there are indeed separate pages dedicated to the FBI and 9/11 Commission investigations,
2. to my knowledge there is no mention on the 9/11 Event Page of any of the strong and highly notable political controversies/events regarding the Bush Admin preparation/response that emanated from the 9/11 attacks: i.e. Rep Kucinich's Congressional investigation, Richard Clarke's public apology for the US government's failure to protect its citizens, as well as other notable and highly visible political events related to 9/11 (i.e. success of Moore's film Fahrenheit 911, raging controversies over US preparation and response, etc) are all relegated to separate pages away from the 9/11 main page.

II. I am quite convinced that this event page deserves a POV citation immediately and until it excises the attempt to lay blame for the attack on those who were attacked. Such does not exist in the 9/11 page even tho there is ample evidence that an attack was expected by the Clinton NSA but such was virtually ignored by the Bush NSA, that the FBI was monitoring extremists surveying the Wall Street area in the year prior to 9/11, and the Italian and German gov'ts had warned State/NSA that al Qaeda was planning on using hijacked planes to attack Western sites (i.e. the G8 mtng in Genoa and elsewhere) well in advance of the 9/11 attack. I am not making an argument for any conspiracy theory but for the fact that such material was excised from the 9/11 page yet is supported on this event page.

III. More reason for a POV banner: in surveying those WIKI entries on the 30+ attacks against overseas US consular entities during the Reagan and Bush Admins (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Terrorist_attacks_on_U.S._diplomatic_facilities) that are inherently far more analogous to the Benghazi attacks than is the 9/11 page - one finds no precedent for discussing political controversy/leveling blame on the country attacked on any other page describing a terrorist attack against US diplomatic entities:

1. several have no separate discussion of the events whatsoever
2. the ones that do, have separate discussions but do not contain any attempt at laying blame anywhere but on the attackers, despite the fact that, by example, the success of the 1983 Beirut attack owed in part to a security failure on the ground that allowed a van packed with explosives to enter the gates and then ram into the lobby of the Embassy killing 63 people. Several other succesful and deadly attacks in that period (Karachi, Beirut, et al) were shown to have been successful because of insufficient security, barriers, etc yet there is no language attempting to lay blame on the Reagan Admin.

Maybe there's just less coverage on those pages because there were no congressional hearings called? or if there were, no editor added them to the article page? -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 00:20, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This wide differential between Wikipedia's descriptions of ALL past US diplomatic attacks and the recent Benghazi attack indicates strongly that the Benghazi event is receiving unprecedented treatment based on current politics (aka the very close election) - making it a very strong candidate for POV at least until the Presidential election has been concluded.

Relocating the political controversy/investigation to a separate page of its own would go a long way towards resolving that issue efficaciously and I urge the lead editor/author to do so with all haste. Then the issue of political electioneering thinly veiled as investigation by Issa & Co can be explored/discussed appropriately on its own page and not the event page itself. BeBopnJazz (talk) 13:49, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If we don't have significant opposition to quarantining the controversy on a separate page and summarizing it here... why don't we go ahead and start the new page in someone's sandbox? --Yalens (talk) 14:40, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

So now you're "quarantining" information? In an editor's sandbox page?? -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 00:10, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• If we split off "Criticism of U.S. government response", we have to deal with NPOV on both pages, not to mention duplicate some information to give the new page enough context and background. For sanity, I propose we keep the pages together, but place {{POV-check}} on this page and/or {{POV-section}} on "Criticism of U.S. government response" section, at least until the election is over. — Hasdi Bravo • 18:49, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The criticism section is 4 medium-sized paragraphs now. That is really not so much, seems to me. -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 00:10, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If we can get ourselves a summary paragraph we can all agree on than we could quarantine the POV dispute onto the other page. That way we can at least have 1 sane page that's largely on-topic and then another problematic but still on-topic page, rather than one page that's both problematic AND off-topic. --Yalens (talk) 21:15, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Here's my approximate proposed reductions [without citations; wording and details should be hugely rephrased of course, but just the basic idea.]

Paragraph dealing with early conflicting analyses:

"When the event occurred, there were conflicting analyses and statements on what exactly had occurred. In [interviews, whatever], the US gov't stated that the attack as part of a wider set of protests of the film that were occurring in [various Muslim/Arab/whatever countries], while in [others, CBS, etc...] US officials the attack was an armed assault [or however they stated it] rather than an "out-of-control protest". US officials also speculated to WP about Al-Qaeda inspired attack. Quilliam thinktank thinks its about al-Libi blablabla. On the Libyan side, Ahmad Jibril blamed Ansar, while al-Sharif at one time blamed Gaddafi supporters, another time said they were protests, and then on the 13th he says that its 'terrorists' who used an already existing protest about the film as cover..."

We can add or subtract this or that, or we could just summarize it all to something along these lines:

"Early on, both US and Libyan officials as well as other analysts [list?] gave various conflicting analyses of what happened, including that it could be a protest against the film, "terrorists" {we're not really supposed to use that word here on wiki, btw} using the protest as cover, Al-Qaeda inspired attack, vengeful Gaddafi supporters, or an Islamist militia named Ansar al-Sharia..."

And for our rump section, we can have something like the following:

"In the US, the opposition party criticized the government's handling of the affair, saying variously that the embassy wasn't secured enough [?], that the government had an intelligence failure and/or misread the situation, that intelligence services allegedly had delays in reaching the site and that the briefing held by the government on the 20th was uninformative. An investigation was opened into the issue in November."

And then, of course, we'd have a see also statement leading to the respective page, where all the details are. As I said, this is just the first rough sketch. Any thoughts? --Yalens (talk) 21:42, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

...and btw, since we started this discussion, the problem has actually worsened considerably. Now US-politics takes up about 70% of the page, by rough estimate :(. That's a little depressing. --Yalens (talk) 21:44, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

70%? How do you figure that? Also, is page-splitting in this case skating close to a POV fork? -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 00:26, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Perhaps you can explain why you think it is "skating close to a POV fork", so we could work out how to deal with that issue if there is one? --Yalens (talk) 03:15, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Can other notable events help us decide how to handle the page? See pages for Iran–Contra affair, JFK assassination and Cuban missile crisis. -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 00:36, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Anything "wrong" with the page going like War in Afghanistan (2001–present)? -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 00:43, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Not sure why these lengthy bios are in this article on the attack. Stevens and Smith have their own page. So these two also properly belong on their own bio pages. How do we remove the redirects someone placed and move them onto their own pages?--Cirrus Editor (talk) 14:56, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Per Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Glen Doherty which includes Tyrone S. Woods. Articles of limited notability get merged in wikipedia. If it is WP:ONEEVENT and limited in scope, it waste editors time and get WP:MERGE. That's why I advised against spinning-off a separate article for the investigation, unless it becomes uncontainable (i.e., really really huge). — Hasdi Bravo • 15:18, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Well, the article looks like a mess now with all the images splashed all over the middle section. Dude. Seriously.--Cirrus Editor (talk) 15:32, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I had nothing to do with the decisions to delete them, but if there is not enough supporters to keep them as separate pages, they are stuck on this pages so might as well try to make the best of it. You can try Wikipedia:Deletion review or try argue WP:SPLIT later if their materials become too big to be contained on this article. @_@ — Hasdi Bravo • 17:43, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ummm... I don't why it's necessary to have a table of images for the victims if only half the victims have images. Can't we write about the victims in prose and then include the two pictures we do have on the side of the article? -- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 17:51, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Because I think we can get the images released under CC-BY-SA-3.0 if we ask them nicely. Let's keep the image placeholders for a few weeks or so. — Hasdi Bravo • 18:02, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• FYI, I contacted Glen Doherty Foundation and they may be able to provide a photo of Doherty some time next week. Still working on Tyrone Wood's pic. Also, I clean some of the mess by consolidating some edits in "Fatalities and injuries". Still need more work. Let me know what you think. — Hasdi Bravo • 02:15, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with Cirrus Editor that "the article looks like a mess now with all the images splashed all over the middle section." I also agree with FutureTrillionaire that a table of images is not necessary and that we can "write about the victims in prose and then include the two pictures we do have on the side of the article". The section headers are also distracting and only the name of each victim is needed with paragraphs for the prose. For now, I'm moving the section to the bottom so the article is not cut in half. IP75 (talk) 03:41, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

What is this about "distracting" and "image splashing"? Works fine on The Legend of Korra#Cast and characters. :-/ — Hasdi Bravo • 05:35, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I don't have any problems with the way the images are displayed, but do we really need to go into this much detail about their lives? Is it really necessary to note that Doherty co-authored on this page, really? I certainly don't see why its necessary... --Yalens (talk) 21:52, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• The result of Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Glen Doherty which includes Tyrone S. Woods it not to WP:DELETE but to WP:MERGE, so until there is another motion on Wikipedia:Deletion review or something, we have to respect the last resolution and keep their bios in a section that makes most sense. I believe a section such as this that includes the ceremony honoring the victims killed in the attack would be appropriate. — Hasdi Bravo • 03:38, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

We could have a page for the Victims of the 2012 attack on the U.S. diplomatic mission in Benghazi. There, we could place info about Doherty coauthoring a book. --Yalens (talk) 03:55, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The content of this article gives the impression that the Obama administration fabricated the idea that the Benghazi attack resulted from the anti-Islam video, and that the attack was a spontaneous reaction of protesters.

The truth is that the Associate Press and others reported these very thing on day one, citing the assessment of a Libyan government official.

Here is the report:

http://www.cbsnews.com/8301-202_162-57511043/assault-on-u.s-consulate-in-benghazi-leaves-4-dead-including-u.s-ambassador-j-christopher-stevens/

And here are some key excerpts from the report:

"Wanis al-Sharef, a Libyan Interior Ministry official in Benghazi, said the four Americans were killed when the angry mob, which gathered to protest a U.S.-made film that ridicules Islam's Prophet Muhammad, fired guns and burned down the U.S. consulate in Benghazi."

"According to al-Sharef, the angry mob stormed the consulate after the U.S. troops who responded fired rounds into the air to try and disperse the crowd."

"Al-Sharef said the Libyan guards employed to guard the consulate building were far outgunned by the protesters, and thus retreated when the building was stormed."

"Hours before the protest erupted in Benghazi, protesters scaled the walls of the U.S. Embassy in Cairo, Egypt, tearing down and replacing the American flag with an Islamic banner."

"One of the [armed Islamic] groups to emerge in post-revolution Libya, Ansar al-Sharia, claimed responsibility Wednesday for the attack in Benghazi, which has been condemned by the country's new government."

Note that Ansar al-Sharia is an Islamic militia group, not a terrorist group. So this would have also added to the initial confusion. (It shows that it would have been premature to assume a terrorist attack.) That a militia group was widely suspected is born out by the fact that pro-American Libyans subsequently protested against the militias and the Libyan government initiated a crackdown on them. (I think this information *is* reported in this Wikipedia article.)

Here's another, independent, report:

http://www.aljazeera.com/news/middleeast/2012/09/20129112108737726.html

To be fair to the Obama Administration, and for the sake of clarity and completeness, this information should be reported in this Wikipedia article. If nothing else, it shows that there were independent reports that the Obama administration could have base their initial story on. This info should be included in a number of places, including the timeline. The article is dated Sept. 12, but it appears to me that the quotes from Wanis al-Sharef likely came shortly after the attacks. His assessment was contradicted by the president of Libya and others later on.

I have Republican friends who insist Obama's team made this stuff up as a part of a cover-up. They quit talking when I showed them the articles I cite here. — SDLarsen • 00:48, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Go ahead, add stuff yourself if you want to see it on there. That's the essence of Wikipedia. --Yalens (talk) 01:07, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

We shouldn't invite people to engage in WP:SYNTHESIS. If the White House was misinformed by the media, we would wait for a reliable source (which could be the White House itself) to advance this contention. As it is, I was following the media early on September 12 and noted that there was more than one media narrative out there, such that the White House should presumably explain why it accepted one narrative as opposed to another. I edited Wikipedia on September 12 to have it note that CNN was calling attention to a non-government source that said the Benghazi attack was pre-planned. CNN's live blog furthermore noted early on that it was perhaps two dozen hardcore hitmen that caused the fatalities. Furthermore, CNN was also reporting on September 12 that some "U.S. officials" recognized the attack as pre-planned. Shouldn't "Obama's team" be preferring the US government as its source over private media? Indeed, the White House is considered a source for the media, not the other way around, because the media presumes the White House has access to US government intelligence resources. So it is that the White House's narrative shapes the media narrative, not the other way around, unless and until the private media has reason to doubt the White House's narrative.--Brian Dell (talk) 03:35, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I actually never saw any claim whatsoever from this editor that "the White House was misinformed by the media". But whatever. --Yalens (talk) 13:56, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FYI, it is already stated on this page that Libyan government disputed that the attack as prompted by the film, which is essentially in the two cites you pointed out. But put them anyway in the Investigation timeline section. The US administration suggested early on that the attack it was a spontaneous response of the the film, which made it difficult for some of us to spin off this page from 2012 diplomatic missions attacks. It's best not to judge the administration on this, but just focus on what actually happened. See my earlier comments on this. — Hasdi Bravo • 01:22, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I posted what I did so the article could be improved. The initial reports I point out are pertinent -- even though later corrected -- because the information given in them perfectly match the Obama Administration's narrative in the controversy going on between them and Republicans. Though I do occasionally make *simple* improvements to Wikipedia articles myself, I won't add this information myself for a number of reasons. (I'm not that great at writing; I don't know how to do references and other things and don't have time to learn, and even if I did learn I would forget; I don't want to argue with people about this; etc.) Past experience has taught me that a few editors tend to "own" certain articles and they end up getting their way, which is fine because I don't care that much. I'm just trying to be helpful, and if it ends up to naught then, well, I tried. (BTW, I wasn't chastising others for anything, as one person suggested. Just trying to fill a hole the best I could with the knowledge I have.) Have a pleasant day. — Preceding unsigned comment added by SDLarsen (talk • contribs) 05:05, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, I realized I shouldn't have chastised you for chastising others, that's why I deleted my comment :). Even though it sometimes looks like certain editors try to own articles, at least this isn't the way it should be according to wiki policy (see WP:OWN). I'm sure that if you only say exactly what's on the sources and use reliable sources, no one should give you hell about it or anything... I would suggest you follow Hasdi's advice, and put them on the timeline. --Yalens (talk) 13:56, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ditto. The timeline could use some real work.--Cirrus Editor (talk) 21:21, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It's been over a month since this terrorist attack. We've known for weeks these brave young men were private contractors who heroically ran to the fight without any official duty to do so.

You people need to show some respect for facts, research and most importantly -- Fallen Americans. 24.12.87.61 (talk) 17:57, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ahem. I refer you the following cites

• "Clinton Recognizes Victims of Benghazi Attacks". State Department’s Bureau of International Information Programs (IIP). 2012-09-14. Retrieved 2012-10-15.
• "U.S. officials clarify administration description of two heroes in Libya attack". Washington Guardian. 2012-09-19. Retrieved 2012-10-15.
• "Benghazi hero laid to rest; chaplains comfort families". Baptist Press. 2012-10-05. Retrieved 2012-10-15.

Hilary Clinton, speaking for our U.S. State Department, referred to them as "U.S. embassy security personnel". It is only later, unnamed officials in the Washington Guardian referred to them as "personal service contractors" who had other duties related to security. However, if you check the press release for the funeral of Tyrone woods...

Woods, stationed at Benghazi with the State Department Diplomatic Security service, and fellow Navy SEAL Glen Doherty saved the lives of many U.S. personnel, according to the State Department. When the consulate came under attack, Woods and Doherty immediately took up defensive positions trying to protect U.S. Ambassador Christopher Stevens and the consulate compound.

There is a ****load of misinformation going around, and some of us are trying to figure out the rumors from the facts. The best I can surmise from the above cites is that Woods and Doherty work as security personnel with the State Department, but on a contract basis, much like what is happened with many of our local industries to save hiring costs. It is going to take us a while to figure this all out but until then, please do not presume us to be morons. Thank you. — Hasdi Bravo • 19:11, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

By "you people" do you mean us private citizens out here spending our own time working on Wikipedia articles? ;) Yes, that's us; just like you. Jump on in, please, and contribute. Your help is welcome; there's only been a handful of folks (pretty diligently) working on this article since the event.--Cirrus Editor (talk) 21:23, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Clearly you (I mean the IP) see the page lacking something. So just add it yourself, no one will bite your head off unless it has problems... editing isn't that hard you know. I can see citing being hard for newbies, but we can help with that. --Yalens (talk) 14:34, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Hasdi, thanks for doing all that work of putting all that text into table format. First I hated it, then I loved it, now my honeymoon is over. :D I'm sure you've done this enough so that you can point to other examples on Wiki here for such use of a table. I'd like to conform as much as possible to an "accepted" Wiki way as we all are putting more information in. Thanks!! Oh, and, at what point do you think the investigation section gets to be too much and we start thinking about making it its own page? -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 22:22, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Also, now that all that info is in that table, you can read through it and clearly see that some of the info has NOTHING to do with "investigation." Thoughts on how to handle this? -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 22:25, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, timelines are discouraged on WP (see Wikipedia:Proseline). It's okay to have a timeline as a temporary storage of information. However, when the events are over, it's better to turn it into prose. As for content not relating to the investigation, can you be more specific?-- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 22:56, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Meh, WP style of timeline is rather ghastly, e.g., See 2009 flu pandemic timeline, Timeline for the day of the September 11 attacks and 2011–present Libyan factional fighting. I am open to ideas. I just think it is useful to have some kind of chronology of events, particularly how the administration's position evolved from being prompted by the film to a terrorist attack by rogue militias, and also how popular protests against the killings lead to armed militias being voluntarily disbanded in Libya. — Hasdi Bravo • 02:15, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

HA! Hasdi, you slay me! "Meh". I love it. I've placed into the article numerous sources stating the day after the attack--September 12--that it was a terrorist attack. I like this chronology thing. -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 02:32, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

How to handle the timeline? I think I don't even need to say it anymore. You guys already know my favorite line: new. page.
But seriously, while timelines may be discouraged in some cases, personally I actually kinda like them, provided they're relevant and don't have OR or POV or any of those things. The timelines for the Yugoslav wars, at least based on the last time I saw them, are good examples in my book. --Yalens (talk) 14:44, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The timeline is needed I think because the information offered by the administration and the media is evolving. The body text should reflect the latest information we have, but other editors may inadvertently cite old information if we don't have the timeline. We can probably remove it once the outcome of the investigation is clear, e.g., in a few months time. — Hasdi Bravo • 18:53, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If you feel it'll be useful for the article, please feel free to replace the picture of Barack Obama and Hillary Clinton with a video that just got uploaded to Wikimedia Commons: File:President Obama's statement on US Consulate in Benghazi attacks 2012-09-12.ogv. odder (talk) 20:23, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done -Nice, rarely is WP able to find free videos. -- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 23:19, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The 2nd sentence of the lede is grammatically and factually incorrect. It is now: "The sustained 5-hour gunbattle took place in a walled U.S. diplomatic compound and, in the early hours the next day." The problem is that the four Americans were killed in two different locations a half mile apart from each other. Please see the NYT interactive map and click through to the 2nd map [11]. Part of the confusion may stem from the wording in the section titled "The attack". In that section I don't think it is clear that there were two compounds a half mile apart, and that the attack came in two waves, first at the main compound, and then in the early morning hours the next day at the second compound, which was hit by indirect mortar fire (killing two more Americans). -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 21:03, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Also, why is the first sentence about "rogue militias" doing the attacking? The investigation is still ongoing, and many sources are stating different things about the attackers and who they suspect they may be aligned with. I think this is misleading to write "rogue militias" did the attacking, and it waters down the meaning, too; as if it were just rogue militias with no suspected ties to the Taliban or Al-Qaeda. Suspected perps right now are Ansar al-Sharia, Abu Sufian bin Qumu, and Al-Qaeda in the Islamic Maghreb. -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 22:44, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• You are right about the second compound. I'll go ahead change it back. Apparently, the second compound is now a known to be a CIA post (but under diplomatic protection). [12][13] *smh* I put rogue because the militias are not all bad. Prior to the attack, various militias kept order in Benghazi, but by definition, the militias are not answerable to the newly formed Libyan government. The militias that attacked the U.S. compound were aligned with the extremists, but it was somewhat of a blowback because it lead all militias to be disbanded or submit government control. — Hasdi Bravo • 01:11, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for editing lede. I still take issue with the use of "militias" in the first sentence of the lede, though. It's not all-encompassing of all the suspected perps, currently, which include Taliban- and Al-Qaeda- related men. I thought "extremists" fit the bill nicely because it's an umbrella term. We could say "terrorists" but that term is loaded. Why not go completely neutral and use the term "men": "On September 11, 2012, the U.S. diplomatic mission in Benghazi, Libya was attacked by heavily armed men with ..." I had something like this before but it was edited. What do you think? Can we use the neutral "heavily armed men"? -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 02:02, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If you insist, we can have "heavily armed men executed an attack on the U.S. diplomatic mission in Benghazi, with..." but the suspected perps are militias, which include Al-Qaeda and Ansar al-Sharia. Extremists don't necessarily involve militant attack with heavy arms, which is probably what we want to emphasize here. — Hasdi Bravo • 04:22, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think it's an overstatement to say that the crowd the chased out the extremists was "pro-American". So I removed that part from the sentence. I hope you guys are okay with that. -- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 01:35, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, it wasn't. Libya is apparently very pro-American, which is somewhat surprising for a Muslim country in the Middle East. Why else did you think Libyans helped to recover Stevens and brought him to the hospital?[14] There may hope for our middle east policy but as I have said before, I am not holding my breath. — Hasdi Bravo • 01:56, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Libyans held demonstrations in Benghazi and Tripoli on September 12, condemning the violence and holding signs such as, "Chris Stevens was a friend to all Libyans", and apologizing to Americans for the actions in their name and in the name of Muslims. The New York Times noted that young Libyans had also flooded Twitter with pro-American messages after the attacks. It was noted that Libyans are typically more positively inclined towards the United States than their neighbors. A 2012 Gallup poll noted that "A majority of Libyans (54%) surveyed in March and April 2012 approve of the leadership of the U.S. -- among the highest approval Gallup has ever recorded in the... region, outside of Israel." [15] Another poll in Eastern Libya, taken in 2011, reported that the population was at the same time both deeply religious conservative Muslims and very pro-American, with 90% of respondents reporting favorable views of the United States.

I guess your right. But sentence was still long and awkward containing the "support the U.S.". Removing it to me just sounds better. Hopefully it wasn't that necessary. As for Libyan attitudes, it would make sense for them to support America. Their war planes did help defeat Gaddafi after all. Now if only the U.S. could do the same for Syria. :/-- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 02:03, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The irony is that the four Americans became "martyrs" for the Libyan. o.0 That backlash became so great that it lead to popular opposition against militias. This is a complete 180 with happened in the protest in Egypt. I can only hope that the current and future administration don't squander this goodwill, like happened in Iraq. :-( Anywho, I need to at least mention in the lede that summarizes "Libyans held demonstrations in Benghazi and Tripoli on September 12, condemning the violence and holding signs such as, "Chris Stevens was a friend to all Libyans", and apologizing to Americans for the actions in their name and in the name of Muslims...." — Hasdi Bravo • 03:47, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hasdi, please see my comment above re: editing first sentence to be neutral language. -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 04:04, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think the cat is out of the bag since last week. Does anybody have any issue calling the second compound an intelligence post for the CIA? — Hasdi Bravo • 01:33, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Mark Hosenball (2012-10-12). "U.S. intelligence hurt when Libya base was abandoned". Reuters. Retrieved 2012-10-16.
• "CIA Base in Benghazi, Libya". Cryptome. 2012-10-11. Retrieved 2012-10-16.

Well it looks like that's what the news media are calling it, so it's fine with me. -- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 01:37, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If it's what multiple and sound source materials are calling it, fine with me. -- Cirrus Editor (talk) 01:56, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Obama never said that the attack was a reaction to Innocence of Muslims. His statements about the attack didn't even mention the film. He's only mentioned the film in reference to the unrelated storming of the US embassy in Cairo by flag-burning protestors the same day, and to the similar protests that sprung up across the region in following weeks. 24.214.230.66 (talk) 14:20, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]